[Report This]Date: January 23 2022 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
Ok something else I have thought about besides the workout scene is that I think the girls are leaving Annabell with way to much time on her hands, they should give her things to do or read during the hours. They are not around.
Also well if she really is their pet would it kill them to u know actually play with her, ( not sexually related either) like hide and seek I think would be good, or some variation of fetch or something, playing that even annabelle could maybe get into, get her mind off her shit situation for a while,
also I know she hates them( every right to) but like Steven said through them a damn bone to get them to back off,.
Author's Response:
It's so funny you mentioned reading. They talk about this in the most recent chapter. I'll probably elaborate in later chapters on why they don't want her reading, but it's kind of easy to infer if you think about it.
The giantesses are definitely more, "Color the pretty pictures, Poppy" kind of owners. In upcoming chapters they're going to be spending a lot of time with Poppy, so you'll be able to see how they spend their days.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2022 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 25
Well as it turns out I have one more question and if it’s spoilers that’s ok I can wait but is Izzy a type-0, the reason I ask is because a little bit of her section very much reads like Anna’s just prior to her shrinking, what with all the bad vibes she was getting. From the 4. Now the big thing against this is that she didn’t consider a shrunken being captive if she felt a vibration from inside the crystal and I would think a shrunken would consider the possibility of a cause being a shrunken, but yea I read her section carefully ,( I love POV changes) and I get some interesting ideas from her POV.
Author's Response: Ha! I really like Izzy. She'll come back, but in a very minimal way. If she is a Type 0, then you would only see it in a spin-off ¯_(ツ)_/¯¯
Date: January 20 2022 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
I typically don't go for shrunken woman stories, but the tale you've weaved is incredibly intriguing, full of mystery, and inner conflict. It's one of those things where the giantess stuff, even though it plays a major part of the story, sort of plays second fiddle to the struggle of the protagonist, Annabelle.
And you've definitely made me root for Annabelle, not for that Poppy loony.
As for speculation, I've been wondering, considering FF's actions now, if there's a second aspect to the imprinting aspect, where the type 0 is able to convey a certain obsession, or domination over his/her supposed protector. It would be interesting, not to mention, most satisfying and triumphant, if Annabelle is able to turn the tables like that.
Author's Response:
Thank you Divedivebrners! I'll admit I made my protagonist a teen girl, because I noticed the stories that get a lot of engagement are the shrunken men stories (which, I mean I get it). It was kind of a challenge to myself to see if I could write a female protagonist that people would find compelling.
I like reading everyone's theories about imprinting, and yours is really intriguing. I can't say much about it, but the further chapters will discuss imprinting more.
Thanks for the review, Divediveburners!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2022 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 25
My PC broke down during the weekend and I finally managed to get it to connect. What is the first thing I do? I go wash the dishes LOL
Poppy, Poppy, Poppy... I like when she kisses Annabelle. I like how she kisses Annabelle. Am I shipping Anna with Poppy? Am I? Of course I am! And my goddesses, she is strong! It seems she took out Bitsy and Managed to overpower Steven like it was nothing.
I could say Poppy is stronger because Anna is a especial kind of type 0 and other things... but I want to wait the next chapters. Maybe we will get more info on her mother or more interactions that flash out what exactly is the deal with Anna, Poppy and imprinting.
Now that I think about it, Anna’s train of thought during chapter 24 could be foreshadowing Bitsy’s master death. How a type 0 react to their master’s death?
Ralgar made a comment about the giantesses working out. It’s an interesting set. Maybe Anna on Molly’s bellybutton or Harper’s armpits, helping with exercises – but only managing to tickle and make then horny.
That’s it for now. I will wait the next chapter to comment more. But take care of yourself, please. Don’t overwork and don’t worry. I think I talk for every single fan of your story and characters when I say your health comes first.
And about writing, I am trying my hand on short story and drafiting concepts. Your replies are a great incentive. Thanks and I hope you are feeling better. See you on the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Ha, sorry about your PC, Mr. In a Suit.
Lol you're the first person to ship Poppy with Annabelle. I definitely can get on board, there's nothing wrong with a little Loki-esque situationship.
All of your imprinting theories are so interesting. I know you probably perked up at the most recent chapter with all the Blood-Blessed stuff. Slowly--slowly more will be revealed.
Also, I think short stories--especially flash fiction--is a great way to get into it.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2022 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 25
There was one other thing I thought of, I wonder how Anne bell would react if the giantesses actually worked out in front of her, she seams to always be amazed by how they move and stuff I just wonder if she would be drawn to it, like a moth to light and just as dangerous.
I doubt they do work out, but I do think they are losing out on prime enthralling opportunitty.
Author's Response:
I have a scene that is kind of like that in the next chapter (it actually will be the first scene if I don't change anything.) It's spicy (?), but Annabelle may react to it differently than how you might be thinking.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2022 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 25
I do have one more question, in the past u said u thought this story would be wrapped up around thirty chapters, now is that still going to happen u think or will it be more now, just asking cause with all the balls u still have up in the air I can’t see it being done in under ten more chapters at least, which is totally fine, I love this story and really want it to go the distsnce. I have no desire for this story to end anytime soon is what I am saying
Author's Response:
Ha! I was naïve back then. Right now I'm shooting for under 40 chapters. There are just certain plot points I need to hit. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story, Ralgar.
[Report This]Date: January 16 2022 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
Anna deserves some massive credit for still fighting for other people given all she was up against in this hellscape. You really feel for her trying to balance so much on her plate whilst keeping her friends safe and placating the whims of four titanic brats all at the same time.
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Steven seems like he would've been a great therapist if this whole shrinking thing did not happen to him. He got Anna to reveal some of her deepest traumas just by conversing with her during their overnights. I do kind of understand the fear shrinkies would have of not wanting to bring kids into this kind of world...we're witness why that makes sense with every chapter you write to be fair.
Poppy really is pushing hard for the Goddesses it would seem, she must be high into massive terroristic college girls...I sort of don't blame her.
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Anna went full Russian sleeper agent it seems, Poppy seems to have Jason Voorhees levels of focus and determination when eliminating her -obstacles- in lew of getting poor Anna to surrender her humanity. Still Anna made a lot of progress in this chapter, she got a little sidetracked by Poppy but she is at least trending towards a sliver of hope that even if she doesn't escape she can at least not lose her humanity.
Author's Response:
Hey Adam,
Right? Annabelle is definitely one of the more selfless characters I've written.
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Steven does seem to be adapt at getting Annabelle to open up. And Poppy is probably about as obsessed with the giantesses as they are with her,
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Ha! Annabelle definitely needs to watch out for Poppy. They both want her body, but there's only room enough for one of them. I also think Annabelle's humanity is the core of this story, It's kind of the flickering candlelight in the dark chaotic storm that is the giantesses.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2022 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hmmm well I am sorry I are sick plz get better soon. Well none of this bodes well. I can’t wait until next chapter then, when ever it is, and Thankyou for this update,
Man just as I begin to mostly tolerate the giantesses u go and remind me just how terrible they really are, very spicy scene and very dominating , also every thing with poppy is getting horrifying now that we see what she can be like,. Yes I am rdy for your behemoth of a chapter when ever u are capable.
Author's Response:
Thanks Ralgar, I've been feeling better. Lol I always think comments like these are funny, because some people really like the giantesses (understandable, I love them) but they forget that they are insanely cruel to certain people.
I still have some scenes to write for the behemoth chapter. It's not my favorite chapter, but it's a necessary chapter. It's plot heavy, but full of giantesses scenes and action. It's probably my most action-filled chapter so far.
I hope you guys like it.