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Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2022 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 26

This is insane, I read this chapter (chapter 26) when you posted it but forgot to post a review. I just remembered and when I went to refresh this site to log in so that I could post a review, I saw that you had updated the story with a new chapter. The timing! Lol.


Anyways, this story is incredible. I really wish we could’ve seen the giants and giantesses actually feast on the tinies and was disappointed when it didn’t fully happen. That being said though, your writing is absolutely insane. This legitimately feels like reading a published novel rather than a story on a fetish site. Even though super cruel giants/giantesses are my only interest when it comes to these stories, your ability to put us directly in the mind of the protagonist makes even me feel sick at the absolute lack of souls and callousness of the giants/giantesses and the hopelessness feeling that she has of going against such undefeatable opponents is truly addicting. Love love love this story even tho we don’t get much cruel torture and disposal  of tinies (which is one of the only reasons I read this stories). This story is still a joy to read regardless. 


And never hesitate to write a chapter that long again because long chapters are my favorite lol



Author's Response:

Thanks GhostWriter! 

Ha! I love that you actually are disappointed over the lack of carnage lol, but don't worry, the violence in this story is nowhere close from being over. I hoped you liked this most recent chapter because for some reason it was longer than I anticipated.

Thanks for the kind words and I hope you continue to enjoy the story! 

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2022 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 26

This chapter was certainly a game-changer, in that it changed the understanding of the world within the story. Once again, I enjoyed reading this due to exciting twists and advancement of the plot, not necessarily for the giant/giantess action. You've really been adept at evoking strong emotions, whether it's positive or negative towards certain characters. 

SPOILERS

There's a lot that could be discussed and unpacked at the prospect of a foundation to help shrinkees ends up being absolute horror and destruction for those they claim to help. This parallel society of shrinkees is a major reveal, and appears to be the path to salvation for Annabelle. It appears we're going to get backstory on her four tormentors, I don't know if that's going to soften the blow for when Poppy takes over, or if that's setting up a betrayal. I do hope we get some closure on Annabelle's friends, and her crush. I may or may not have a ship going.

It was cathartic to see Annabelle turn the tables on her captors. Quite a Sideous-esque schemer she has become, but only a sith deals in absolutes. I hope there are more moments such as this, but I'm a sucker for triumph after so many chapters of torment and missed opportunities.

An unserious thought, if Annabelle can speak Portuguese, does that mean, in addition to self-regeneration, she has the power of BRAZIL on her side?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Divediveburners, 

That's a huge compliment. I try to keep it spicy, but the plot is super important to me.

Ha! Please tell me who your ship is! Annabelle's friends will be making a reappearance. 

Jajaja, and if she had Brazil on her side, then that would make it an unfair match. Though on a serious note, Annabelle's relationship with those countries (on her mother's side) is definitely impacted by her relationship  with her mother. I can't wait to explore it later.

Thanks again for commenting!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2022 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 26

Hello! Me again. These are my thoughts on what I think is most likely to happen in the next few chapters... so yes, another theory of mine. Just somethings I wanted to add after writing my first comment and reading some others here.

I think a good order would be Harper, Molly, Naomi and Nell, leaving Leah as the end game. Why? Because Harper and Molly can soft Anna’s heart, she will be surprised she is actually able to bond with those gigantic beings, at least when they are alone.

With Harper she might be surprised the co-ed has some tastes they share, some series and foods both like and actually talk about. Anna might come to the realisation Harper could actually be a good girlfriend... you know if she wasn’t so cling and sex crazy... like her parentes.

With Molly, she might find an inteligent Woman, with ideas and maybe ideals for her own life, as well as a fragile ego. Someone too much aware of her body and her parents expectations. She will find someone whose soul and body could shine and be real friends with her... if she didn’t try so hard to be... what her parents want her to be (much like Nell situation maybe).

With Naomi and Nell, Anna will be the prize in their sibling rivalry, and while Anna will try to favor Nell (inviting Naomi’s jealousy), she will find a more “Sweet” side to her punk-rock overlord, while Nell is more and more affected to the imprinting effects, acting more and more like the F4 usually does. Ultimatelly the sisters bond for “Anna’s sake” (maybe a united front to protect the tiny from their insane mother´s experiments?) in a threesome, Nell obviously fully imprinted at this point – which doesn’t stop her from being embarassed and confused after everything (but more happy than she ever felt before).  

After all this, becoming aware of the effect Poppy has on the giantesses and feeling, against all odds, really guilty about making the F4 even more crazy than they already where, comes Leah. Someone she can bond even deeper, on a psychological level, given both lost their mother figure and the Governor... well it’s a liar and a bastard who terrifies even our queen Leah. 



Author's Response:

I can't say much to this without jumping into spoiler territory (other than, you are very analytical)...but I will say that I cannot wait for your reaction to these next several chapters. 

Reviewer: zura98 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2022 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 26

This may be my first review in this story.

I have to congratulate you because this story is like a profesional book. It must be one of the best stories written in this website.

Regarding your questions, I have to say I really enjoyed Nell. She gives a different/new perspective. She also seems to be very human.

I suppose that Harper could be the next step. She is the only one that already had a crush on Anabelle. But Naomi would also include Nell, so it would also be a great choice. Leah fits better as the last choice, because her psychologic aproach.

Anyway, great job!!!





Author's Response:

Your review is much appreciated Zura--as are your compliments! 

I gotta say, I'm thrilled everyone likes Nell. She's an interesting character. And your predictions of the order is...interesting ;) 


Thanks again for the comment!

Reviewer: JDO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2022 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 26

God damn FANTASTIC chapter. Maybe my favorite of the whole story, plot-wise. It's been so much fun following along with this story from the start and to see it end up here, expanding on the world you've crafted makes it rewarding as hell. 

As frustrated as I am with Anabelle for not taking the chance to escape, she's 100% right. The resistance couldn't have known how furious the search for her would've been. She would've put every single one of them in jeopardy. 

And even though I'm sure security is going to be tighter than ever before, there will be other chances to escape for our little Blood-Blessed heroine. 

Byte is amazing. I hope we haven't seen the last of him.



Author's Response:

Thank you JDO!

Annabelle is a variable the resistance did not expect, and later on you'll see how they restructure their plans. Also, I'm happy you like Byte, he's a fun character to write. 


Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2022 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 26

just awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks rubber! I try :)

Reviewer: Senital2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2022 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 26

I really liked this chapter. The resistance seems really in depth. You're building a nice world. I'm interested in what their majors are. Why is Nell so different is she grew up with this, does byte make a return? Is there something more Annabelle can do to avoid imprinting. Does type 0 have a physical regenerative limit? So many questions, this chapter was so interesting. I don't mind the length, but can understand why you want to limit it. Story is great so far. Keep it up. Another thing? Did the giantess have something to do with the death of Annabelle real mother and sister?



Author's Response:

Thanks Senital! 

You'll find out their majors in the next couple of chapters. And yes, Nell's position as the black sheep of the family will be explored and explained. I...am not going to answer the other questions 😁.  You'll just have to wait and see. But I will say, more and more questions will be answered as the story progresses. 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2022 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 26

Warning: this comment contains high levels of Nell x Anna shipping. That doesn’t mean I don’t care anymore for Harper, Leah, Naomi and Molly (I shipp Anna with all F4). It’s just that I have high expectations for Nell's development with Anna... and the fact that I already filled almost two pages with this comment.


What you did with this chapter is what most series strugle or simply don’t bother to do: you expanded on the world using just enough already established elements as to not fell unattural and rushed. The reader can more or less find elements on past chapters that allowed the introduction of a shrinkee comunity and resistance movement now.

I say comunity, but, judging by byte’s testimony, we are talking about a whole society that is maginalised by the giants. It’s not just Byte. The suits dialogues and demeanor also hints that this is not just about 4 rich families who hate shrinkees, but a whole ideology that puts the 4 families at the top of the food chain.

Chapter 26 managed to higher the stakes of Annabelle story, it gave a political depth to it,  it introduced a war and it made all those things in a way that made sense to the reader. I guess what I am trying to say is... GOOD JOB... VERY GOOD JOB MAN.

Now... a curse, Poppy and Annabelle... yeah I think it’s pretty clear where I am going with this, right? Although shipping Poppy with Anna might come out as a joke, the end game for Poppy is to ensure Anna’s safety.

And how can a smaller being survive? By forming colonies or by using hosts... larger hosts in a symbiotic way. That’s why the F4 are obsessed with her. Poppy might call them goddesses and worship them as higher beings, but the giantesses are unable to live withot her the same she is unable to survive without them.

This is not some evil scheme, it’s a biological response from Anna’s body to protect her. I once saw a vídeo explaining how the effects of cocaine on our brain are similar to being in love... that is Annabelle’s blood blessing (and curse). She can’t control it, to survive her body affects both giants and shrinkees, sonner or later making everyone addicted to her. The ultimate survival mechanism.  

 Effects may vary from one specimen to another, Anna clearly being on the stronger side of that spectrum... and judging by the way Byte puts it, the reaction never really seizes and it’s rare, very rare, even within his society... so much so that I think his commander will not be pleased to learn he left a type 0 with the BSA...

To fully urderstand my theory, we have to talk about Nell (a.k.a my favourite giantess... a.k.a the one I shipp the most with Anna... a.k.a show me more Nell x Anna request TT_TT). She is not perceived as a gigantic being not because she is a friend, but because Anna deems her as too weak. Chapter 26 portrays Nell exactly like that – a  submissive person who may try but ultimately can’t
stand against others... at least not for Kyle.

About this point, I emphasize that once again the issue with survival came up and Anna actually regreted leaving the F4 side... the f4, not Nell or Dufort. Poppy recognizes the F4 and Zoey and not Nell. But I also don’t think this is everything.

About this point, I emphasize that once again the issue with survival came up and Anna actually regreted leaving the F4 side. I missed seeing the F4 reaction to their beloved Poppy “kidnaping”, I especially missed seing how they and Nell reacted.

Although she is portrayed as a meek person and (because of it) a possible ally, I don’t think Nell is just that. Her arc semms to be about repression... and the devil is always in the details... oh she saved Kyle? Yes, but she put him in her shoe... what a strange place to hide someone... You see? That’s why I want to see more of her, I want to know how her desires and personality will develop by interacting with... Anna/Poppy.

For example – the pale girl in whom Anna see so much of herself smacks a ladybug without noticing... and Anna realizes, for the first time, how big those clumsy feet are, semms like just the delicate big toe would enough to engulf her... And Nell... Nell is just pretending, she actually noticed the ladybug and crushing it right beside Annabelle made her heart pound... like it pounded when she had Kyle at her feet...

That is also why I missed seing the giantesses reaction after waking up... did Nell felt relief because her “friends” were able to escape? Undoubtedly. Tha tis the her pattern, she wants to do good. But did she also felt despair for not knowing if Anna was safe?... Maybe... just deep down, in one corner of her heart... she wished Anna was brought back to her... maybe she even searched for her... hoping to take and hide her away in one of her flats... after all, if having down there Kyle felt so good, having a type 0 must fell like heaven...

I am not saying I think Nell is or will become evil, but I think she will imprint and will have to fight the urges, fight the imprinting until she confess her growing desires to Anna... and how Anna will react? Will she blame herself? She will be directly responsible for Nell situation...

Well... that’s it. About the commander... I need to think. My guess is as good as everyone else. Yes, the chapter is pointing towards Anna’s mother or someone from her family... but we will have to wait and see. Either way, nothing and no one can change the fact that Anna is a type 0 now (probably the most valuable in the world).

She is Poppy and, yes, a threat to everyone else. She can count on herself, but that is not going to protect her from the rest of the world. The giantesses will.


Thanks for all the effort, all the care and work, for all the details, for posting here... Thank you for everything. See you on the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hahaha! I love Annabelle x Nell. They're both so similar, but also so different. 

There will most certainly be more Annabelle x Nell moments coming up. Your comment about the ladybug got me thinking so I may change up somethings (so thank you!)

As always, your comments are always great to read

But Mr. In a Suit...you nearly gave me a heart attack because one of your theories is in my outline...word for word. I actually muttered "What the Fuck" out loud when I read this comment. I had to check the chapter to see if I had accidently tagged it on at the end. 

So like I said, you should get to writing! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2022 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 26

Wholesome to see Nell and Anna having some lovely interactions even with the foursome about, gives you hope Nell can somehow help her down the road. You really feel for the people forced to work for them as they're definitely put upon and much worse given what we've learned so far.
There still might be hope for Nell yet, she is up against it but something tells me she has a bit of fight in her that hasn't shown itself. Whether or not that comes in time for Anna's sanity is anyone's guess but its there. The shittiness of the family always seems to shine through wonderfully even for longtime readers who know what to expect from the nightmarish group.
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Nell's holding out nicely given her family bloodline, maybe there's hope for her to stop the fearsome foursome. Granted she might need help from Oliver and company in that regard...maybe even Zoey if she feels like it. The point is you've given Anna a lifeline within the terrordome, a small one but one nonetheless.
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Damn that section was a read with a lot to unpack...
I was rather surprised to see somebody getting one over on the families but poor Anna doesn't get her happy ending just yet it seems. Still incredible to see tinies in the universe able to defend themselves in anyway against the insurmountable odds they are up against. I kind of have an idea about who the -commander- is but I'll leave that up to you when you feel it is time to reveal it. Byte really seems like a quality gent who could later benefit Anna's cause if she is lucky enough to get free again. I also question how she DIDN'T realize they'd have an entire organization behind them after what she's seen and witnessed from her time with them.
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Good on Anna and Byte!
Small victories but I have a feeling we will be seeing him again at some point but she kept her promise to Dufort and didn't get anyone else hurt...who didn't deserve it at least.

Author's Response:

Hey Adam,

Thanks for the comment once again. It's always appreciated. 

Nell and Annabelle will definitely have more interactions coming up. Nell is such a fun character to write, because she herself doesn't know what kind of person she wants to be. She's stuck between her conscious and her family. She's going to have to do some introspection in order to figure out where she stands.

I'm glad you like Byte! His backstory is an interesting one. I wanted to show how even Annabelle who seemed pretty pro-Shrinkee didn't know about people with HDD who lived outside of "society".

Again, thanks for commenting Adam! 

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2022 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 26

By the way I meant to add that I am very glad u made the protagonist a female, this genre is to inundated with shrunken men and I have no taste to read about shrunken men unless the story is very compelling( yours would have been) but I love Annabelle so much. I just thought u should know.



Author's Response:

Ha, thanks Ralgar, I don't regret making Annabelle my main character instead of--let's say--an Andrew. I think as a young woman, Annabelle perceives (and maybe even relates to?)  the giantesses in a very unique and specific way. I'll definitely be exploring it in upcoming chapters.  

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2022 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 26

Wow that was...AMAZING!!I haven't seen anyone's reviews just yet as I'm writing this but kudos to you for having the most interesting and engaging story on this website, easily!

The plot thickens!

Okay, I'm going to say it because this is obvious to me and probably everyone else but I bet the commander is Annabelle's twin that is not actually dead. Like, is the only reason Byte would confuse them so thoroughly. To think that Anabelle's twin is out there leading a revolution is amazing so I hope I'm on the right track. Byte seems like a cool kid and brought us the twist that tiny borrower like people exist on the world, living on people's homes and I'm all for it!Also that the governor belongs to a secret, rich people organization set against shrinkies was not that surprising but I still liked it.

I think is fascinating how Harper's dad was so soft and careful and dare I say kind?to Anabelle. The contrast between how they treat her and how they treat anyone else was strong this chapter. I want to look at the reaction of the parents of the other girls to all that happened, I don't know if is too much to ask?

So now they can't go back to college and they will go to their houses. I guess that's how we get backstories, with Anabelle spending time with them individually on their home. Looking forward to Leah and Harper the most not only because they are my favorites but their parents are also my favorites. I'm looking forward to see flaws on the girls, vulnerability, for them to evolve their relationship to Anabelle. I do want an imprinting ending after all!hahahaha 


Thanks for the good work, looking forward to the next!!



Author's Response:

Naoru, you flatter me :) 

I'm glad you're still enjoying the story, even with the sudden twist (though this is not the last or biggest twist in the story). I'm glad you caught General Abbot's reaction to Annabelle. You'll see how each parent treats her in further chapters. There will also be little slivers of insight into how the giantesses reacted to Annabelle's disappearance. 

Ha! And you definitely are not the only reader rooting for an imprinting ending. 


Thanks again for your comment!

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2022 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 26

Ok well first off congratz when u said this was a game changer, it really was, it takes it being a small number of bad things to a world wide disaster, and honestly every one of them deserves to burn, I mean the families and the daughters, the PRincess ( i do love them as villain's, but damn i dont thing there is any redemption for them any more, i was foolishly hoping there would be, but yea that isnt a thing i think anymore for me.)  

    U took this story in a very interesting direction that u did very litely hint at with the mother being so difficult to find info on.   

     OK so shrunken are having children ( that is in my opionion highly stupid and irrisponsble of the shrunken, u do not want to perpeatuate this damn disease ( which i now am beginngin to think was manufactured just like in a another story)).

     Ok so i am going to try not to ramble with this but i probably will.

This story has just grown well past any boundaries i thought u might have had.  So I was thinking there would be the bad end where she imprints on the girls. the not as  bad end where she at least maintains her humanity.  The end where she gets back to her Big family.  THe end where she actually ends up with some one who can properly  love her and take care of her.  That is now in doubt.  

    As i said earlier I was hoping that the 4 would in time be revealed to not be complete monsters and that there was hope for them, I see that now from this chapter and the previous 5 chapters that this is not a thing beyond the fact that for the first time in there lives they have someone they are actually caring about.  Like u said it is so toxic.  Now don't get me wrong i love the 4 as villain's ( and I love a good redemption story) but yea they need to die.  

     So now the resistance, they are interesting and i look forward to seeing more about them.  I will admit that it took me alot longer to figure out what was happening than it should have, I honestly thought it was either annabell hallucenating or losing her damn mind from the massacre.  Then things happened and i was blown away.   I disagree with the guy about not killing every one, they had them uncouncious they shoudl have killed them.  It really doesn't take much to kill us bigs and they could have doced their weapons with poison to kill every one their.  ( but this isn't a complaint against u)

     OK Annabell number one priority now is to get the imprinting stopped and kill poppy, because she is now a threat to the resistance and maybe a threat to normal shrunken beyond her precious Goddesses.  I dont know how to interpret agent x saying she killed all the shrunken at the former massacre (plz dont let that be true).  Poppy is to damn dangerous, but at that same time info can be kept from her, hmmmm she doesnt neccesarily know all that annebell knows ( zoey), so maybe annabell could learn to keep info from her.  BUt yea Anna needs to really get this therapy going.  Also I now retact my preivous statement that she needs to stay with the 4.  She needs to get away from them and stay gone, but i get why she stayed.  

     Now i have a statement here and i hope no one takes offense to this ( i understand if u do)  I view something like the HDD (the disease, not the people) as an existential threat to humaninty , and so while i would not take the extreme measures exterminating all who have it, i would ban all from having kids, and there would be massive penalties for those that did.  Including death.  I would take no pleasure in it like these monsters, but this disease would need to be wiped out.  I would also push for massive funding in elimanting the disease viah cure. I also dont believe for one second any of them actually believe that clap trap about saving the world except maybe Leah ( Naomi flat out told her she didnt.) 

     So about her mother  i thought she was going to be estranged from a family that was actively fighting the big bads and she just wanted peace, but now i dont know. I do think beth is the commander ( i really hope so or that she is alive at least).  

     Honestly i thought this chapter was going to deal with Oliver and the friends, not what this turned out to be.  I loved this chapter, for the first time i actually believe Annabelle actually has a chance to escape and find a refuge, and maybe have a good life ( if scarred).  

    I have no idea what to think of this whole blessed blood thing, personally aside from the imprinting thing it sounds like a good deal, really tired of the trope where just because u can heal your a freak.  U have hinted that those who come in contact with type 0s imprint on said type 0, and at first that's what I thought had happened with byte, (once I realized that there was something going on).    

     SO this turned into a big review, in addition to my other reviews, hope u don't that i have reviewed alot lately and will probably continue to do so i keep having thoughts.  Like I said this is the best story on this site and honestly i think u could get this published, ( u would need to do some editing and stuff but its that good).


SO this was a pretty small scope story that just got blown with open and I am very here for it.  I cant wait to find out where this goes.

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Author's Response:

I'm really glad you are liking the expansion of the story. That's what I was most worried about. I know a lot of people like the FF and want more of a focus on them (and they will remain an essential part of the story) but in order to go where the story needs to go, I had to open up the world. I did hint at how different this world is in the "Beginning" but I haven't really touched on it in a while.

Ralgar, I really like your comments! They help me write this story! It's always great to refresh and see that someone else has reviewed--it reminds me that people are still reading this insanely long thing.

I can't say too much about everything you've written (spoilers) but I can say that Oliver and Company (ha) will be returning.

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2022 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 26

Ok well that was a lot and I didn’t see tha coming at all, this is big and the commander is either sister or mother, hmmm.  Ok so what the hell did poppy do, earlier, she is blood blessed and apparently that’s not a good thing with already shrunken.


It seems nobody r is aware of this resistance.  This was a very interesting chapter and I have to admit that I really like it, this changes a lot of things. I will be rereading and stuff wow. I’m kinda blown away really.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Ralgar. You'll just have to keep reading if you want to know what's what.😉

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