[Report This]Date: February 14 2022 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
I was unsure how to approach this chapter because it is so touching. Annabelle reminiscing not only the hard stuff of her past, but also her mother’s touch at the end... God, you said the bound part would come next chapter, but, for me, the bounding already started there.
Once again, everything is very twisted When it comes to the relationships... to the point Harper’s parentes make no sense – They say and do all those things to Anna... and decide to give her their Family name. Is it because of imprinting or they are really just not all there when it come to shrinkees?
Changing topics, we saw how Anna desires attention and protection. Naomi is really the one I remember most when thinking about showing some real concern for Annabelle, but my gut teels me you have something big prepared for queen Leah and the governor (who is taking the stage as the most dangerous foul in the story). My gut tells me they have a lot in common (Leah and Anna) in terms of Family and the desire for a mother figure, a figure who won’t ever abbandon them.
I am even more curious about how will you develop each one’s feelings and desires... That’s it for now. I will not try to guess more than I already did, I want to wait and see what will happen now.
Thanks for the quick update and for always answering. It’s good to have this channel to Interact with the writers.
Author's Response:
Reading the comment makes me excited to see your reaction to the most recent chapter, Mr in A suit.
I know the relationship between Annabelle and the parents (and the FF) can be difficult to grasp (because it is so twisted like you said), but I guess it comes down to them sincerely liking Annabelle, but their lust surpasses whatever feelings of happiness they would like to provide for Annabelle. Like, "This thing is so cute and amazing, and I want it to be happy, but the faces it makes when it's in pain are too fun to ignore." I mean that's a dark interpretation of what I'm talking about, but it's similar.
As always, I can't comment on your theories because I just know that I'll spoil something. But just remember this comment when you read Leah's chapter.
I will say about developing their feelings for each other...this is 100% the most difficult part of writing these sections. Part of the reason the most recent chapter took so long to write is because I kept swapping out scenes. Finding the balance of push and pull is really difficult. I didn't want Annabelle to fall too quickly, but I wanted to make it known that she's not immune to the giantesses' charms.
Thanks again for your comment! You always make me analyze this story a bit differently.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2022 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
I see Harper naturally got her first, seems very trusting of the other three to agree to let her go first but it does seem safer than letting her be the last one to have ownership of the little one. Anna is hanging in there for all she's been put through and if she manages to make it out of this in one piece she deserves a nice piece of cake or something. We are also slowly learning how sneaky athletic Harper is, we saw some of it during the fight with the creeper who broke in but the swimming grace shows off a bit more.
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It's weird seeing somebody be assertive with the foursome even if it is their parents. I would've definitely figured they would've kept funding her lifestyle for years to come without her really needing to work or achieve anything beyond what she is now. Her attachment to Anna will certainly bring up headaches later when her time is up with her.
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Kudos to Anna for finding her inner peace enough to stop harming herself, sucks things ended up like that have thus far but small bright spots and all. She also helped brighten Harper's day even if it ended badly for her so her heart is still in the right place...even if she didn't want to be a sprinkle later on. Harper's mom using the middle name then mentioning her prior -activities- is only the kind of you could get away with in a fetish story or HBOMax show.
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Dear god that was something wasn't it? I knew the parents of the foursome were truly heinous but that was just...wow. Anna deserves a medal for that performance even more than the times with the main four. We haven't seen her alone with the other families yet but it would be hard to top the horror show of what she experienced here.
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A nice tended moment for Anna late in the day is rather nice, still trapped in hell but nice all the same. I also feel for Nell who doesn't deserve the crap she gets for being part of the nightmare collective that was born into.
Author's Response:
Ha ha! Yeah Annabelle definitely deserves some cake. As I'm rereading this comment, I think I may have subconsciously taken your description of Harper and used it in the most recent chapter, which is hilarious to me--so I guess thank you?
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Harper's parents--and all of the FF's parents for that matter--hold their children to a certain standard (at least when it comes to certain things). You'll especially see this soon.
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The middle name dialogue is one of the reasons that I love writing fetish stories. I think the juxtaposition of Harper being in trouble and scolded in such a juvenile way, with the reason her being in trouble is so funny to me. I love writing scenes like that.
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I can't wait for the Naomi chapter, because I know Nell is a popular character, so I'm excited to see how you react to her and Annabelle's scenes together.
Thanks for always commenting Adam, you're appreciated.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2022 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
After reading Ragar's reviews I do have to add some more on Harper's parents. I still think they are the best of the lot even if they are not my favorites. They are horny motherfuckers, who love their daughter and have teached her to be strong which is like, really good, considering the others are abusive towards their own daughters so yeah, they probably treated Anabelle sort of good by the parent's standards...in a sense. Also again, that scene was really hot.
Author's Response:
I mean the Abbots, especially compared to some other parents (you'll see), definitely are more willing to display affection. Which I really like, because they are the most physically formidable. I really like that contrast.
Thanks again for commenting, Naoru!
[Report This]Date: February 10 2022 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 27
I have to say, I never commented about it for some reason or the other but I always thought that from the parents there were two possibilities for parents using Anabelle as a sex toy: Leah's father as a way to somehow have a pissing match with his own daughter and Harper's parents because they are horny motherfuckers. And there you go! The sex scene was actually kind of hot but also kind of horrible. I feel like Poppy probably feels that Anabelle should be with the girls and not their parents. Is interesting that Poppy didn't appeared at all. No mentions of worshipping her betters or whatever. There is a criteria here, and not everyone meets it, just saying.
Is good that next chapter will be focused on bonding because while the Abbots are my second favorite parents with Warren on number one and the other ones being a meh on my book, I'm looking forward to tons of Harper. Harper's backstory, and a deeper look on who she is. I can only hope for Anabelle to appreciate her more but alas I will happy with whatever I get.
Author's Response:
Ugh, I can't wait for you to read Leah's chapter Naoru. I'm interested to see what you'll think.
And without spoiling too much, I'm very happy that you're paying attention to when Poppy shows up and what the surrounding circumstances are.
Also, I hope you like the Harper chapter. I think there are some moments that you'll really appreciate.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2022 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 27
So another thing I noticed and was surprised by was the parents actually willing to give a choice ( granted pic your poison type choice), still that is far beyond what I expected from any of the parents. And they were willing to have a conversation even if only a little, they treated her with far more agency and respect than I expected( which says a lot considering about where that particular bar is). They even said to relax which is an actual consideration and an attempt to help make what happened easier. Wow they actually may have treated her better then Harper does.
I don’t expect that from any of the other parents at all. I expect full indefference to actual distain from from naomis parents to Molly’s respectively. Leahs dad I expect full on mental and emotional manipulation from him.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that's an important thing to notice. The BSA's relationship with Annabelle is really unique. They definitely don't view her as a person, but they want her to be happy while still being obedient. However, their wants and desires will always be more important than Annabelle's happiness.
And super astute point about the other parents Ralgar! I can't wait for you to read the upcoming chapters.
As always, thanks for commenting.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2022 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
Ok I have thoughts for later but first off that was hot as hell, ummm I really liked that spicy scene and hot damn I felt for Anna but damn did I ( honestly if I was in generals position there would be no way I could resist doing that( does that make me a bad person to)?) find that hot.
The bear scene is very worring for Anna. Also yes just like Anna I found Harper to be the most immature of the lot prob followed by Naomi ( really u attack your sister, and then call her immature and dramatic) Also yes I was right about her being drawn to the whole working out thing ( swimming in this case) just not as strong of a pull as I at first thought.
So we have started to learn about their back story and some of Anna’s ( what’s up with the mom) so this should be good.
Author's Response:
Hey Ralgar,
Glad you liked the adult Abbot's scene. It was definitely fun to write, I love writing characters in those spicy situations because you can find out a lot about them when they are...enthusiastic with each other.
The swimming was a good introduction to the working out, but the scene I was thinking of was in the most recent chapter. You'll see how Annabelle's reaction is maybe a little different than one might expect.
And yeah, I promise Annabelle's backstory is still coming up!