[Report This]Date: March 16 2022 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 28
So I have had more thoughts and my first is is that i love your long chapters. At this point it would be wierd if they were short so plz continue making them long.
NOw then, like i said I love what u did with Harper, u turned her from a nympho airhead bitch to an actual human being (whos still a bitch to any one she doesn't actually care about), She is intelligent , if not school smart, i do think she might be real world smart, she is cunning, and she can be very sweet when she wants to be, that date she had with Annebell at the end was very sweet and caring. So yea you did an amazing job with Harper and i cant wait to see the others.
So now about the imprinting i have reread that scene alot and the bear scene from the previous chapter and i am still not completely sure what the trigger is but i am not convicnced its the smell, or at least not the smell by itself. There is something else going on there i am trying to figure it out, cause like she said she has dealt with there smells from pretty much the start. I did like that Annebell was still herself for the most part, but damn if all she can think is to plz her owner, than damn, thats why i am rooting for Annebell staying herself but still with one of the girls.
Now the next girl will prob be Molly, and that should be interesting and fun, Molly was the one who had the least interest in Annebell except as a pet ( her ideas were fun though, i loved the ice water dunking) but she has come around, but like Harper she has insecurites but unlike Harper Annebell already is aware of at least some of them, so she wont be surpised by them and there for she wont be as vulnerable to Molly i think as she ended up being to Harper. THis should be interesting.
I am looking forward to both Naomi and Leah, I can't decide between the two who will be last, I agree with Mr suit that Leah likes the last word but so does Naomi, and while i am rooting for LEah, I have noticed that Naomi i think will suprise us, she has had in my opinion simultaneously the most important scene as far as imprinting goes and the least amount of screen time with Annebell, we have never had a real alone time with annebell and Naomi except for chapter 20 when Annebell made out with her after Bennet. I also think that she may be no where near as much a hardass nor a bitch as she acts. I think she be very vulnerable when we get to her. She wont have really interacted with Annebell for weeks by that point and i think she will be very cleangy, and very affectionate. She will also be fighting for Annebells attention from her sister, ( weather she wonts to admit it or not), I like Nell but i am far more interested in the 4. I also really want to see another vore scene by you, seriously u prob did the best vore scene i have ever read, it also helps that it was survivable by our protagonist. So yea i am really looking forward to Naomis chapters.
I am still very much a Leah fan and i cant wait for her chapter, she is going to be so freaking threatened by that point since she wont have really interacted with Annebell for weeks that yea she will be very dominating and in charge, and i cant wait to see those scenes. I really like when she put Annebell in the vase and shook it around, i liked how she said she likes to just stand above the shrunked and just totally dominate the poor bugs, ( sorry people). I look forward to her chapter as well.
So yea see u in the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Ha! I think I really screwed myself over with these long chapters, but I don't think I could stop even if I wanted to.
I'm glad you liked Harper's development (or I guess reveal of something deeper that was always within her). It's really interesting how you think about the imprinting process. I'm kind of really excited/nervous for you to read how the criteria works. I hope it lives up to your expectations.
There are things I'm excited for you guys to read in each one of these "giantess arc" chapters. They all have interesting scenes that I'm looking forward to writing, but...I will say as the arc comes to a close, it will only get crazier. I honestly am thrilled to see the reactions.
I'll definitely throw in a vore scene for you in an upcoming chapter. It's been a minute since I've done one.
Date: March 15 2022 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 28
Been awhile since I commented on a new chapter, wanted to apologize for that I missed the last few releases but I'm back and caught up fully!
It was so damn heartbreaking to see our girl go back to the giants, after she was in the clear with her escape. It does make things alot less grim though, now that we're aware of the resistance's existence. We have a force to oppose the BSA and I'm so happy for it. Tired of them getting away with these atrocities time and time again with literally nobody onto them.
And I have to say Nell might be my favorite character in this whole thing. I'm still holding out hope that Annabelle ends up imprinting on her, while maintaining her sanity and getting rid of the "Poppy" persona entirely. I'm personally a fan of relationships where the Shrinky is owned as a pet legally, but the pet/owner dynamic is very intimate and both sides are happy with it. I think Nell and Annabelle would be perfect for each other in a relationship like that, though Nell wouldn't want to ever "own" another human I'm sure.
Also holy shit Annabelle's sister is the leader of the resistance, that's fucking wild. I like to think I realized that before I was "supposed" to. When Byte was confusing Annebelle for her Commander I was like "why would he be genuinely confused... unless his Commander looks like... OHH." Annabelle's sister has been mentioned far too often for her not to have made an appearance at some point. I am almost certain however that she's going to get captured by one of the goddesses which would admittedly be pretty hot. I can totally envision a scenario where she swaps places with Annabelle and her captors are none the wiser. There's also Annabelle's stepsister, who is certainly not out of this story yet...
Harper remains my favorite goddess, though Leah is great too. Leah seems very genuine when she dotes on her Poppy.
Overall hope to see Annabelle get out of there soonish, I just can't wait for the sweet reunion with her sister, though I hope it isn't a bittersweet one, assuming they don't reunite both as pets for the girls.
Author's Response:
No worries Huggler, glad you're back!
Yeah, I had to introduce the resistance or this story would be a little too hopeless. I also like Nell, she's super fun to write. Although this story implies otherwise, I also really like the "legally owned" but all parties are happy trope. Nell's perspective on ownership and Shrinkees as pets will be explored and developed in upcoming chapters.
As for the leader of the resistance ¯_(ツ)_/¯ who can say who it truly is, am I right? ;) We'll just have to see.
Thanks again for commenting Huggler, glad you're still liking the story.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2022 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 28
I know someone said it already and I agree: the dream sequences in this chapter are amazing, and that is because they are ambiguous. They do not convey just a sense of fear and dread.
On one side, we have a portray of how Annabelle is seeing herself more and more like property of the F4 – and in doing so it makes sense she will start to feel attract for things as well – Harper’s feet and boobs – instead of the person - she can barely understand Harper is a person due to how big she becomes during her nightmare.
But then, we have the other side – the side of self-discovery – Annabelle apparently finding out she might like... feet... or boobs... but more feet kkkkkk. Anyway, it became a trigger for pleasure, it “felt right”, but also strange... different, something I can definitely relate to.
Harper is very secure about her sexuality and how others see her, so she is perfect to make Anna take a first step towards finding a sexuality of her own. On the other side, she is very insecure about how Poppy sees her – thinking of herself as dumb and less loved when compared to Nell.
Annabelle is surprised, since she never thought anyone was really paying attention to her – the complete opposite of the F4.
This two chapters with Harper are all about one side and the other, slowly giving glimpses of both – the psychological scars of Anna and her goddess, ultil they reach a climax where the captive wants her captor inside of her.
But, one question remains – for all the giantesses in Annabelle’s life: is it love? Would They just kill her if she wasn’t a type 0? Judging by Harper and Zoey obsessions even before shrinking, I’d say yes, Anna has charisma, she draws people, and they start loving her (even if in a very warped and messy way).
But for the tiny, it’s a question without answer, she will never be sure and she doesn’t see herself as worth, much less special. I am guessing this carisma is the base for her type 0 imprinting unique power.
Psychologically twisted, complicated and deep? Yes, and that is why I love this story in so many levels. Changes are happening, revelations on all sides, and, as I stated in other comments, I believe Nell and Leah will be very important in this process.
About Zoey... I can think of a couple of ways she might reappear, even as a pawn to Leah’s father, after all Annabelle can “never hope to fight against Zoey”. But I don’t want to think too much.
Right now the spotlight is elsewhere. I stick with Nell on top, Leah and Naomi together in second place... But I don’t want to be unfair with Harper and Molly, They are both interesting and amazing characters. Obviously I want Naomi and Nell arc to begin, but I think Molly is the next one.
I am also curious to see how each giantess will react when it’s time to say goodbye to Anna.
About Patreon, I never paid too much attention as I don’t have a lot of money, but I will try to help as I can and I am sure others would too.
Also, stop worring. It’s too late to change – if you start making shorter chapters now it will be too strange kkkkkkkkkkkk
As Always, thanks for sharing your writing and sorry for any misspelling. And sorry for taking so long to comment - work keeps getting in the way of everything and I end up writting late at night or in a hurry TT_TT
Author's Response:
Mr. In a Suit! Always so astute!
I'm so glad that you caught the sexuality thing. It will come up again in later chapters. The fact that Harper and Annabelle are both ridiculed for their sexuality, despite them having completely different expressions of their sexuality is a point I was trying to drive home.
Like I've said in other comments, Zoey will appear, but unlike other elements of this story that some readers have already predicted, I don't believe many will guess how she is reintroduced until it happens.
As for seeing how Harper and the others react when it's time to transfer Annabelle--I really want to keep the FF as separated from each other during this arc. I even debated showing the video chat and Naomi's call, because I want to focus on the FF as individuals.
I will say there is one hand off between two members of the FF that I will be writing in great detail. I'm going to be super honest with you Mr. In a Suit. This is the one part of the story that I have flipped flop on multiple occasions. There is something I have been building on since chapter two and not one person has commented on it, so I've debating if I want to write a scene with this element of the story included in it. I really don't want it to be a "jumping the shark" moment, but it's not like it hasn't been there the entire time. I think I'm going to hint at it strongly in the upcoming chapters, and if no one mentions it, then I'll leave it be. (Also this isn't an invitation for predictions or anything lol. I just don't want to ruin people's suspension of disbelief if I include something that wasn't conveyed well enough)
ANYWAY, sorry for the rambling.
Also lol at the long chapters--yeah, I've given up on trying to skim it down. It's not happening.
Thanks for the comment Mr. In a Suit, and sorry dumping my writing process in this response.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2022 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 28
Just the best story out there. I look forward to each update so much, and this latest chapter was a brilliant one.
Wasn't a massive Harper fan, but she's leapt in my estimations here - just so powerful - I couldn't have loved the first true inkling of imprinting any more.
Harper would certainly be the most loving of owners, but I can't help but my 2 absolute favourites are Leah and . . . Zoey! For me it's all about the dominance; they are the most sure of themselves, confident in the knowledge that they deserve to be worshipped. Whether or not Annabel imprints on Zoe, I can't wait til Zoe has her first knowing interaction with shrunken Annabel. Your descriptions at her unaware dominance (mountainous, glorious godly being) mean as soon as she *knows* she'll be impossibly powerful.
Patreon - I love this idea. Think you write wonderfully and would be 100% up for reading everything you write (as long as it's not too pricey).
Author's Response:
Thanks redfoot, I try!
Zoey is also one of my favorites. I'm glad that although I only spent a chapter on her, so many people are impacted by her character. I mean, I was banking on that because she's a pretty important character for this story.
So don't worry, she'll be coming up in upcoming chapters.
[Report This]Date: March 07 2022 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 28
So you were right. This was amazing, truly amazing, really, I loved every second of it, I'm SO happy that my girl Harper got time to shine!!I'm so excited about this I could cry lol
Anabelle having an imprinting episode that wasn't an imprinting episode was amazing. Like, all the other times it was because Poppy possessed her, but this time it was Anabelle, being herself and utterly adoring Harper. It was a pity that the revelation took off from the fact that Harper was trying on her own way to build Anabelle's self esteem up. Harper has the capacity to being a loving woman, caring, thoughtful. She clearly cares about Anabelle and even enjoys talking to her more than she enjoys having sex with her! She also has insecurities, fears, she is a human being.
Anabelle is clearly struggling. She keeps reminding herself of the shrinkees Harper has killed, how she treats those she considers lower than herself, she is constantly reminding herself of those facts, because if she doesn't all she will be able to see are Harper's good traits and that would be terrible for her because then she would fall for Harper and her own values make her feel that is a bad thing to do, not to mention her not feeling deserving of love. Is a constant struggle and it was wonderfully represented.
My scales changed indeed. Now Anabelle and Leah are tight for spot 1, like, side to side. I do legit think Harper is the one Poppy would be the happiest with considering not only her but also her parents and home environment. But then again Goddess Leah is still strong in my heart.
I think next will be...Molly, probably. Step up the difficulty on emotional problems and whatnot I guess?I don't think it will be Leah because she is supreme and will most likely be last to have the last word as she usually likes to do. Naomi would be nicee too, though I'm not a Nell enthusiast like most others. She is nice and cute but not particularly unique to me.
Keep up the good work, I love it!!
Author's Response:
Ha! I'm glad you liked it Naoru.
I'm glad you commented on the "self-help game" Harper put together. I mean, I thought it was cute ¯_(ツ)_/¯
I'm happy you appreciate the little characterizations I gave Harper, and I like that you're noticing Annabelle's mental state (you should keep track of that...it may be important :) )
I'm excited to see what you think of the most recent chapter. It's basically a direct contrast to this chapter, so I'm very intrigued as to what your thoughts could be.
Thanks for commenting again Naoru!
[Report This]Date: March 07 2022 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 28
Ok first love this chapter Thankyou for it.
annabelle/poppy is in very much danger here, this was the first time she really lost herself ( yay for subconscious belle, go girl) but it did seem as if annabelle was still annabelle even lost so some of my concerns for the imprinting have been lessened if not out right gotten rid off.
By the way great job on humanizing Harper, u actually made me really like her even when she was being a bitch to the staff. She had a right to scold the staff she just went to far.
I mean Harper has been my least favorite of the girls until this chapter cause yea I honestly thought she was dumb, but congratz on making me realize she does have a brain and that she honestly does love annabelle and I think she may actually love her past being a pet still not equal, but far more then a thing or pet, not sure how to classify that.
If u can do that to Harper I can’t wait to see the others.
Yea poppy is so love starved that this will be a very difficult fight for her.
I’m still team Leah by the way but damn if u didn’t just make a very strong argument for team Harper.
I am indifferent to the patreon thing if u do make one I will prob subscribe and it would be nice to have a more direct communication between us and u ( I love that u comment on each review). But if u choose to not that’s ok. To
I will prob leave another review later cause I am still thinking about her losing herself to the feet and smell which to be honest I loved that scene, u write such good smut that I almost forget it’s smut. But yea I have more thoughts on that I just need to make them make sense.
I do have a question ( don’t expect an answer to this except maybe much later) I am trying to figure out what ploys criteria is for defining who is worthy of worship, why the 4 and maybe zoey, why not cloe or the parents I mean the parents could most certainly protect her if it was just that, so what is the criteria here that poppy is looking for.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the kind words, Ralgar. I also can't wait for you to see the next giantess.
I will say that your question definitely will get answered in the upcoming chapters. It's a great question and I can't speak on it, but I can also say that I have been thinking about the criteria a lot in the most recent chapters (it's exhausting and tedious, but when the reveal is...well revealed, I want to make sure the criteria holds up) and I have had to be very careful in how Annabelle interacts with giants in each scene (that's kind of a hint, but not really).
[Report This]Date: March 07 2022 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 28
Zoey will have her day, mousie hasn't gotten permission to escape just yet. Harper's athleticism does add a level of hotness too her beyond the lusty blonde tropes, her being able to fuck you up legit is pretty great.
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Harper is definitely a monster but I kind of agree with Anna here, there is really no need to be rude on Twitter or whatever it is. It does make me route for her more though knowing she's still keeping her morales despite all she's going through with the Fearsome Four. Seeing Harper's human side is warming much like seeing Molly's at times, still definite monsters but you can see there might be SOME good there if the upbringings were not so horrific.
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I'm actually shocked Harper given being the blonde rich girl Goddess HASN'T made Anna kiss her feet more often, it really seems like it'd be one of her go-to's to cement her status as above everyone else sans her fellow nightmare sisters. I do admit Poppy hyping Harper's feet is amazingly hot, I hope Anna does get herself some help one day but still hot.
For a moment there I thought Anna might actually be imprinting on Harper and all thanks to her tootsies but it appears she has came to her senses. Not sure where this goes for Anna but that's some dangerous waters she was treading there, a new side to her that she hasn't really shown before outside of Poppy taking over.
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Holy fucking hell the first part of the wedding nightmare was chefs kiss beautiful, basically a scenario I've thought of happening for years in one of these type stories or some variation of it. Anna might not be able to come back from this hole she's digging for herself, Harper may have finally won the psychopath lottery.
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There's the horrifying nightmare of a woman we're used to seeing!
Though quick thinking by Anna to at least save somebody some great pain and suffering. Not sure it would've worked if the other three had been together but luckily they weren't for poor Kate.
Who knew enslaving a tiny person against her will was good for one's self confidence? Harper seems genuinely human here and Anna seems almost like she is learning towards her over the others a little. I can understand that as Harper seems like she's one of the lesser evils along with Molly at times but Harps has the hotness to carry her through the rough patches.
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Well damn, wasn't expecting all that from Anna but completely justified and if she had to pop off to one of them she picked possibly the safest one of the quartet to do so. Harper if she had even a bit of a less insane upbringing really seems like she'd be a quality person, her reasoning for doing what she's done to Anna is way off base of love but the more you learn about her the more you really feel she's never really felt actual love without being a pawn for somebody or something.
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All the feels here...
It seems Anna's resolve is easily broken by our blonde titaness, the rage and vigor is still there but Harper seems the best at defusing it with her terrifyingly wholesome charms. Not sure how much it will matter later but if Anna's not careful Poppy just got her leg up in getting her point across so to speak.
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As for who is next...
I'll say either Lea or Naomi, somebody more forceful and strict to counterbalance all the sugary sweetness of Harper's visit.
Author's Response:
I love how you're still hung up on Zoey (don't worry, I am too). She's 100% coming back.
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You'll see especially in the upcoming chapters that Annabelle's morals are pretty solid. She's gonna stick by her beliefs (to the frustration to many a ready no doubt)
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I won't say anything about the feet/imprinting scene, but I do think it is hilarious how you are sympathetic to Annabelle's plight, and in the same sentence noting the spiciness of the scene. You make laugh every time.
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I'm glad you liked the dream sequence. It was 100% of the reason it took so long to upload this chapter. It was a scene I added in, because I wanted to convey Annabelle's psychological struggles (like you said)
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" Harps has the hotness to carry her through the rough patches" is my favorite part of this comment.
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Based on your sympathy for Harper, I'm interested to see how you respond to the most recent giantess within this arc.
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As always, thanks for the comment AdamX. I always like to know what you're thinking.
Date: March 07 2022 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh boy, it's happening, the imprinting. The usage of nouns was brilliant in your depiction of Annabelle truly losing control, replacing "Harper" with "Goddess". The description of the imprinting incidence, where Harper literally becomes a goddess, reminds me of another story on this site, "We help each other get on" by Greenanon, where the giantess' scent makes the tiny guy lose himself and worship her. It's played in a less frightening context, since the giantess character is actually gentle, but it's fun to compare and contrast these similar scenes. Heck, because those scenes were played with a wholesome perspective, it makes your tale by contrast, all the more harrowing.
Harper was probably going to be the "easiest" for Annabelle to handle, simply because she's obssessed with her the most. The other girls appear to be tempered with a sense of pragmatism that Harper simply doesn't possess, especially Leah. How Annaabelle will confront them one on one will be interesting. I suspect before the end, happy or sad, Poppy will inevitably have her day. You might be heading for a role reversal where Poppy is in control, and Annabelle is the voice of discontent, making Poppy's goddesses "bleed" in a figurative sense, before her eyes.
P.S: Happy secret ending where Annabelle imprints on Oliver and commandeers his fully armed and operational submarine plz.
Author's Response:
Hee hee,
That's really cool that you caught that, Divediveburners. I haven't read the story you're referencing but I'll definitely check it out. Harper most definitely is the most willing to bend to Annabelle's will when it comes to certain things.
I can't say much about how Annabelle will interact with the most recent giantess in the upcoming chapters because it's still developing, but I will say that it will more than likely surprise you.
Also I laughed loudly at your proposed happy secret ending. Funnily enough, a lot of people don't see Annabelle + Oliver as a happy ending.
Anyway, thanks for commenting, Divediveburners
[Report This]Date: March 07 2022 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 28
LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I SO want Poppy to end up with Harper! Their interactions are as sweet as they are wrong. Plus they are so hot!
Author's Response:
Thanks IamtheWalrus!
I'm glad you're liking the story! Harper is one of my favorites, and her and Annabelle's relationship is still developing, so I can't wait for you to see how their story unfolds.