[Report This]Date: January 01 2023 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
Hello! Passing just to wish you a Happy New Year. May 2023 be full of
peace and inspiration for all of us!
Author's Response:
Happy belated New Year, Mr in A suit! Thanks for still reading!
Date: December 09 2022 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 34
I always forget to leave a review after I’m done reading lol. But a great chapter as always! Really disappointed that Naomi didn’t go through with swallowing Camilla, that scene was turning out really hot, especially in front of Annabelle. But I know you want to flesh that out more so I understand. Always looking forward to the next one of these. Really hoping Nell is secretly really cruel too but I doubt that’ll happen. One can dream though right 🤣
Author's Response:
Ha! I love your sadism, GhostWriter.
Vore is not off the table for the rest of the series, especially with Naomi around. As for Nell...I think she's a bit more complex than most would believe.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2022 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 34
I made a little something for you!I wasnt sure how to send it to you since I dont know your social media or email or anything but I made the formidable four for sims 4!I uploaded all of the screenshots to my twitter, I really hope you like how I did them!
https://twitter.com/NaoruReimarch/status/1592361933243809797
Author's Response:
This is soooooo cool! I love seeing how you guys view the FF. These are really good, and I've never even considered the Sims as an outlet for character creation. Thanks Naoru, this made my, like, year.
Also I appreciate Harper's abs.
Thanks again
Date: November 14 2022 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 34
First off I loved chapter 33 with her sister, it revealed alot i think. I loved the way u described the base, and i love how they get around the city, it does make me wonder how they get around the world though, i imagine flight would have alot of problems. HONestly the former commander sounds kinda like a coward, and a moral coward at that. If u had lied like that to me u can forget about and fondness i might have had for u, ( this is how feuds can start). He did die in not a bad way though, i mean if your going to die, die doing what u love. But clear the air before u do seesh.
NOw chapter 34, well Naomi's parents are about what i thought, and that is terrible, I want to say that Mollys mother ( use that term lightly) still ranks as the worst but these two are terrible, i mean playing both daughters off of each other, thats wrong. Well taking the blood is concerning, but we know the resistance has plans in the works.
So we didn't get as much Naomi as i hoped, but that has been the pattern for the other girls to, so i am looking forward to time with Naomi. Like anther reviewer said and i have said to, Naomi has seem to get shafted with the on screen time with Annabelle compared to the other 3. Not a criticism, you have a lot of balls in the air, and already this beast is massive, somethings were going to have to give, but that is the reason i am looking forward to next two chapters, which by the way i am really glad for, i was wondering how you were going to balance naomi and nell in just two chapters.
SO Nell is getting access to Annabelle behind Naomi's back, I see no problems with this going forward what so ever.( sarcasm in case it wasn't apparent). To be honest I just don't see Nell as a workable solution to Annabel's problem and I am willing to bet that Nell was her own hang-up's that will come out during this next chapter ( to be honest would take an act of GOD for that to not be the case with this particular set of parents of the year candidates).
So yea I am really looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response:
Ha! Yeah, Grey definitely died doing what he loved. I think Artemis will hold onto conflicting feelings about her mentor and what he ultimately ended up deciding.
Also don't worry, Naomi will definitely get her time in the spotlight. You're right, this story is massive, so I'm trying to make sure I'm not missing anything or any plots.
I'm excited to see what you think of the upcoming chapters as Naomi and Nell' personalities start to become more pronounced...for better or worse.
Thanks for your thoughts Ralgar, glad to see you're still enjoying this story. I always appreciate your enthusiasm, it keeps me writing.
[Report This]Date: November 10 2022 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 34
Something was bothering about my last comment, but I could not pin down what. Now I know. I got so carried away about the new information regarding type 0 and forgot something crucial about this arc: Anna also has a sister, we just got confirmation she is alive and their relationship is the complete opposite of Nell and Naomi.
I focused so much on the feelings that I believe Nell harbours for Anna – and could lead to some desire and imprinting – that I forgot Naomi and how she
could also fell some form of true love (a.k.a respect) towards Anna.
Yes, she is cruel, but equally warped. This last chapter goes to some lengths to make it clear a trait of Naomi that has already been brought up several times: how she tries to hide behind a mask what she really feels and is. You see, if Naomi really hated her sister and acted like Leah and the others, she wouldn’t be one to pull Nell out of harms way.
But she did. The chapter made it clear she were the one who did. The chapter also made a point to make Anna remember her own sister while showing us how perverted Mr. and Dr. Sano are as they brought up both their
daughters.
And in that perversion, what do they want? Their daughters to love each other, but only in name, only as a brand (and that is exactly what the F-4 are: a brand to Naomi, as the heir, to stick to). My Goddess, I pieced all this while at dinner!
It didn’t even occur to me as I read that Anna might work towards healing Nell and Naomi’s relationship. But it might! That way we would have not only
the start of Naomi’s redemption, but Anna gaining true allies – and maybe romantic interests – within BSA.
Judging by Artemis priorities, Annabelle will need Nell and Naomi.
Sorry, sorry. My other comment focused too much in one piece of information instead of looking at the chapter as the start of Nell AND Naomi’s main arc. Sisterhood is something central in the narrative and you left the Sato sisters arc as the last, a possible turning point in Anna’s misery at the mercy of the BSA.
I don’t expect, if it happens, that Naomi just completely change in a single day. And she will most likely feel a rivalry with Nell when Anna is involved… but they will no longer be enemys or the heir of the Sano’s talking to the ugly duck of the family. They will be sisters. And sisters who fell deeply in love with the same shrinkee who is suffering because of them and their families.
I hope you see this new comment before posting chapter 35. Again, I am grateful for all your effort. Thank you and until the next chapter.
Author's Response:
This is such a well-thought out point, Mr in A suit.
I can't speak on what hasn't happened yet, but Naomi and Nell's relationship most certainly has some parallels between Annabelle and Artemis'. If you've read the newest chapter (Spoiler for ch 35), you probably saw a snippet of Nell and Annabelle comparing their better-liked sisters.
Whether Naomi and Nell grow closer as a result of their shared love of Annabelle is yet to be seen. It may be the very thing that shatters their relationship permanently...
Thanks again for the comment, Mr in A suit.
You always make me consider my characters in a deeper and new way.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2022 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 34
Poor Anna get chipped like some common kitten...not that there's anything wrong with kittens but she's peoples! This likely hinders her plans of escape greatly but her determination seems to be shining through even if she's seemingly given up trying to deal with the never ending stream of bullshit thrown her way. I am encouraged that she's seemingly now ignoring Poppy which is a good thing in itself given her ideals on praising the Foursome over her own humanity.
Anna seems to have gained an ally in Tessa if she makes it past the next meeting anyways. Add her with Nell, the Freedom Fighters and Stephen and she might make it out of this yet. I mean it is highly unlikely given how things are stacked against her but at least she isn't alone in her fight. Plus there is still her tank of a Step-Sister out there surely coming to claim her mousey from these false idols.
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Why this segment did not angry up my blood about mermaids being different colors! I fully expected there to be a rampant discussion on red mermaids vs blue and instead we get all this giantess stuff.
Anna is a really good sport to put up with all she has even from her fellow tinies, she really could use a win of some sort or just a meatball sub. Though I am surprised nobody has really tackled having an army of tiny beauty slaves though.
Given the amount of Giantesses in this fetish that there hasn't been someone to either shrink or gather up their own pre-shrunken glam squad.
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Well at least she has some positive news to send back to Dufront so kind of a win!
It really does seem like the not so good Dr. created this mess but Naomi couldn't exactly murder him...well until she fully got her inheritance so she took it out on the poor girl. Cammie was very smart though in accepting her fate whilst trying to educate Anna in not fighting too hard to avoid more suffering for herself and others.
I did kind of have a feeling she'd be the model they chose when first mentioned so it was nice not to see her end up eaten during her big hope spot.
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Those BSA jerks are going to keep using that mother card until Anna eventually has to snap and kill them in their sleep. Not sure how she will but if there was justice somewhere in this world or hers it would totally happen.
Something tells me however even if she does not wake up that Naomi's replacement Poppy is likely not making it through the night at least not in one piece.
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Anna getting stabbed in the chest with a needle and nobody offered her any coke prior, very rude.
That said the line about children has given me pause since knowing she can't procreate with the Foursome leaves me to fear they'll find some -other- way to force it upon her. Likely with horrifying results for the offspring/Anna even -if- she is well protected by the Foursome.
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Spiders? Really? After everything that Anna has had to survive you throw giant spiders at her like she's Jill Valentine or whichever one fought the giant spider. Shame on you!
Good thing Nell was there to help her and we've discovered she seems well versed in forms of hacking/getting around BSA created safeguards...good to know...good to know.
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The plot seems to definitely be thickening with this power play by the Sanos to try to steal Anna right ou from under the Foursome without them knowing. A bold gambit but will it pay off in the long run.
In the meantime it is nice to possibly see Anna getting a break from the asshatery of her life to spend some time with Nell. It will be nice to see her get to enjoy things again and have conversations with people who aren't baby talking or trying to shove her in places she doesn't want to go.
I personally think Nell is a scapegoat for some nefarious bullshit to be revealed later but hopefully this somehow backfires on the lot of them and gives Anna/Nell an advantage in her pursuit of freedom.
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1. Cammie seems to be able to handle herself and understands things better than Anna when it comes to swimming upstream. I root for her escape but hopefully it doesn't lead to an unfair demise via things out of her control.
2. The Sanos are pretty much tied with Leah and Molly's parents as the shittiest of the bunch. The only ones really who really seemed not fully horrible were Harper's and only because they seemed more focused on being perverts than really ruining Anna's life.
3. I think Nell will be wonderful for Anna! The rest of them not so much but those two together seem like the best possible outcome for Anna beyond her family...well most of them or her friends.
4. You really missed the boat on that section not being included in Spooky Month.
Author's Response:
Hey AdamX
God, your reviews always make me laugh.
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Annabelle getting chipped was something I'd planned on for a while, but with certain plot points coming up, I needed it done soon. Yeah, it'll dampen any hopes she may have been capriciously entertaining for escape, but who's to say what will happen in this crazy story...
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LOL @ the mermaid thing. I really was flabbergasted when I realized how those topics had overlapped like that, it was completely coincidental. And I agree, there should be more tiny beauticians! Although, I doubt the FF would want Type 1 Shrinkees touching them.
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Yup, Camilla lives...for now! I'm joking, but I think the Duforts' story should be wrapping up pretty quickly--for better or worse? Gonna have to see. That being said, I liked writing about the tiny model. She's very resourceful and snappy.
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Ah, you were on point with Annabelle's poor substitution's fate. He never had a chance.
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Can't say anything about the potential for offspring, but it is a pretty grim thought.
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Hahaha, Annabelle and bugs (the real kind, not the slur) are just not a combination that works out well for the Shrinkee. And good eye noticing Nell's aptitude for bypassing BSA tech...
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I do also like Nell and Annabelle moments because I try to limit the amount of inner monologue Annabelle has, and Nell's presence is a good way to develop both their individual characters and their dynamic as a whole.
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Regarding your number 4 comment, Dude...I always have plans of the perfect time to release these chapters, but people keep making me be an adult and fulfill "responsibilities" so I'm always just a little off. For example, the upcoming chapters after the Sanos revolve around Christmas and New Year's. I was kicking myself throughout the holidays.
Anyway, thanks for your thoughts. Always love to see what crazy comment you're going to leave for me.
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2022 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 34
I had planned on commenting chapter 33, and then saw 34 was out. What
a day! And I totally support more chapters for the Sano arc! God knows how sattisfied I am to see Nell and Anna together.
Anna became exasperated because she didn’t stand up for Tessa, but she has no real power in business matters and it’s just too cute how Nell became so selfaware of her opinion. Anna just can’t see it because: 1. usually she is the one being selfaware of others; 2. Nell is bigger than a building to her.
But, despite her lack of power, Nell acts out whenrever Anna is involved – she is probably the first person to treat Nell with kindness and friendship inside the BSA and the same is also true to Anna. They are lonely and have a lot in common.
Does that mean Nell will help with the Dufort’s reunion? Maybe, but she will certainly want to keep Anna to herself. The reason is simple: Nell will imprint on Anna the same way Steven’s owner did. If you asked me now, I’d say neither Dr. Sano nor anyone knows what Anna really is.
Everyone assume she is just type 0 because she has the healing factor, but, as Dr. Sano said, she is one of a kind, something that has been pointed many times in the past. She is stronger than Bitsy, Steven is not imprinted but Poppy only appears to her and we can assume her healing factor is also stronger. The first one in almost a decade? So she can very well be something a little different.
Yes, Poppy is obsessive but over any and all giants and giantess. Poppy doesn’t really care who, she will call any girl her goddess. Why? If everyone
can be, no one really is to her. The only one Poppy really cares…
It’s really something to think. Seeing how Naomi treats her, how she is not used to praises and is not regarded as a heir, I can understand why Nell would even be willing to imprint on Anna if it meant forging an unbreakable bound between them.
And Anna and Naomi? Oh I can see a dream sequence: Naomi has Poppy in her hands, but she is not the big one here. Soon a shadow is cast upon the two as a certain stale stench impregnates the air. Naomi doesn’t understand, but Annabelle remembers the aroma of Nell’s socks.
I will comment more on Artemis, but I need to think after this last chapter.
You always put a lot of effort and I just want you to know that I am grateful. As always, thank you for your dedication and for sharing on the site. I might
not comment as often as I did due to work, but I am reading. I am going to follow this story till it’s over!
Author's Response:
Hey Mr in A suit,
Another thought provoking comment. To be honest, I haven't given much thought to Annabelle's Naomi nightmare yet, but your idea is interesting. Though, I'm not sure how much I want Naomi and Nell to interconnect just yet.
As always, your theories are always fun to read.
I'm glad you're liking Nell and Annabelle's dynamic. Their relationship will start showing some interesting parallels to other characters pretty soon.
I'm struggling to come up with something else to say that isn't a spoiler, so instead I'm going to leave with: I think you are going to really enjoy the upcoming chapter.
Thanks again as always Mr in A suit.
And don't worry about commenting. Whenever you can, I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: November 07 2022 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 34
Another enjoyable chapter. I do have to acknowledge that Naomi seems to always get the short end of the sexual scenes. All the other girls and afew parents have had full on scenes with Ana but not Naomi. I don't want to judge that too hard since we still have more chapters but hope we finally get something spicy with Naomi soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tigerchevy and yes your comment was definitely a huge factor in the Naomi scene that I included in the most recent chapter (I don't even know what chapter we're at right now tbh.)
I was mostly focusing on Naomi and Annabelle's spicy scene in an upcoming chapter (that, I can't wait for your reaction). But I added this scene because I realized you guys were right that Naomi seems to be getting the short end of the stick for "traditional" (LOL) sex scenes.
So yeah, keep telling me what you guys want to see, and if it fits in with the story I'll have no problem adding it!
Thanks again, Tigerchevy!