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Reviewer: Skull Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2023 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 35

Also, I would love it if you start writing on Wattpad. 



Author's Response: I might expand to other platforms for other stories, but I already have trouble regularly uploading to just this one lol.

Reviewer: Skull Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2023 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 35

Please, try and finish this book. It's amazing. I love it



Author's Response:

I have no plans of dropping it! Sorry for the delay and thank you, Skull!

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2023 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 35

I assume you have tonnes on at the moment, hence the lack of update.

Hope it's all positive stuff and life is going well.

Can't wait for next chapter when you do get round to it :)



Author's Response:

I was, thanks for your support though! I appreciate your patience, redfoot!

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2023 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 35

So first off I hope you had a good new year.  

    I really liked this chapter it had a couple of surprises. I really liked the Naomi and Poppy scene, it was hot.  I also loved to see more Naomi, she is so interesting, I am still trying to get in her head, so I am still looking for ward to her next chapter, and I am really looking forward to seeing The Poppy/Naomi scene, ( though i do have two request since you do ask for them, can u do more with Poppy and being around butts, and could you do a scene with Poppy as a sponge when the girls are showering or bathing, the idea of using tinies as a sponge or rag to clean yourself is hot,( mind this is your story, so if you don't want to I am ok, I like most things you have written in this story, even the stuff I normally don't like.

     So you surprised me with Nell, I wasn't expecting for Poppy to be interested in her, but you pulled it off.  So this will be an interesting direction to go in, and honestly if she is going to really imprint on anyone short of Cloe, ( yes i am still rooting for Cloe), Nell is probably for the best, ( i do still think Nell isn't the solution, but if she is stuck with the BSA, then Nell would at least take her wants into consideration, and might actually help out other shrunken in time). 

     So of course this will cause even more fracture between Naomi and Nell, and might even completely destroy that relationship, though mind it probably was headed that way anyway in time.  Also I do wonder how it will affect Naomi, if it will cause her to double down or actually take a step back and reconsider her approach to Poppy. At first glance I think it would cause her to double down, but there is a slight chance that it might cause her to take a step back, after all the other girls haven't been any different in there approach, so the others haven't been forced to change, but Nell does act different, and They have scene how Poppy responds to Nell, ( and they know poppy is going through the motions of loyalty).  So it does make me wonder, and honestly I would really like to see one of the girls actually change a little at least and maybe become a better person, at least a little, ( honestly I think Molly has the best shot at this, but I am rooting for Naomi a little to.  So this is turning out to be even a better arc than I anticipated.  

     I am interested to see where that think with Lucky Days ( such a wierd saying), and the cherry tomatoes thing goes, you brought it up a few times.  Mind I still think Naomi will be involved in Zoey coming back into play and I am so ready for it.  THere is alot to this story I am still looking forward to.

Also I am like the others have said ok with the parents taking a break this arc.  I can really only take so much of them before I want to strangle each of them.  




Author's Response:

Hey Ralgar,


I am in fact, having a good new year.


I'm glad you're liking Naomi, there's definitely a lot more of her coming up. I'll take your suggestions and see if I can implement them in later chapters if there's space. 

Lol I'm glad you're a Chloe fan--I am too. 

Nell and Naomi's relationship is already so strained, that I think Annabelle imprinting on Nell behind Naomi's back would cause some serious consequences for the sisters--or even the entire Sano family.

Also, I get the whole thing with the BSA adults, lol, they can be a lot. 

I always appreciate your support, Ralgar.


Thanks for commenting! 

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2023 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 35

awesome chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks rubber, I try :)

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2023 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 35

Another wonderful chapter, thank you - having some difficulty with the fact my sister is called Nell. As it's a slightly unusual name, it's too associative. I hope you don't mind but I copy and pasted into a separate document and changed her name to Marissa haha.

This isn't the reason, but I'm also hoping Nell isn't the one Poppy imprints on. I like the fact that one of the evil FF will get their way, or even better, Zoey.

Happy New Year to you!



Author's Response:

HAHAHA, I'm sorry for briefly traumatizing you. I'm glad you were able to fix that issue.

I get the sense that Nell (or Marissa to you) is too kind for a lot of people. If you want Annabelle to suffer then I guess I see your perspective. 

I do wonder if you'll think the same when as the story goes on.


Thanks for your comment, redfoot, it made me chuckle. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2023 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 35

It is nice to see Anna getting some reprieve from her constant torture at the hands of the foursome. Getting to honestly express her genuine feelings with somebody who will listen is refreshing for both her and fans of her eventually regaining her freedom at the end of this. Nell is a tremendous influence and ally for her thus far in their time together.


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Putting Anna right back to work I see.


At-least there was a bright spot in she might have achieved something helpful for somebody without it leading to more bloodshed or mangling from the BSA. A small victory for our perilous heroine as she fights the good fight against the insurmountable odds she's up against right now.

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A really touching scene unfolding here.


Nell seems like the best friend Anna has right now outside of Stephen and Bite...and in the same way Anna might be the only friend Nell in her own struggles with the foursome. This is a breath of fresh air for us in Anna's corner and maybe putting even more in Nell's the more time she spends with Anna and their relationship grows.

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Something tells me if Anna wasn't against the entire fucking world that she could play the foursome off one another to formulate a plan of escape from them. Much more difficult with the BSA behind them but the cracks seem to be definitely there in terms of each wanting Anna for themselves.

Perhaps maybe even Nell could give the powder keg a little nudge to set the explosion in motion.

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Well well well...a lot to unpack here.


1. If Nell is somehow friends with or indirectly via another party somehow connected to Zoey this will be a game changer in many ways. Even more so if the foursome or Zoey learn about the others -true- natures involving Anna.

2. That was incredible!

The way you described Nell destroying the mantis underfoot and Anna's reaction was tremendous. I never suspected Nell saving her life would have the next time Anna had to watch a life snuffed out underfoot or the person snuffing it out.

3. What a twist...

General human kindness might be the one thing that gets Anna to imprint on anyone after a lifetime of getting shit on by just about everyone in her life. Not sure the outcome of the story but if Nell wins I look forward to the nuclear winter it will no doubt cause.


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The Sano parents have gotten their time to shine by poking and prodding Anna like a lab rat,

They are also the only family with a dynamic like Nell to play off of Naomi and her ferocity.



Author's Response:

Hey Adam thanks for the review!

Nell really is a great way to keep Annabelle sane. Something as simple as chess is a pretty big reprieve for Annabelle.

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Yeah, Annabelle is desperately trying to gain something from being humiliated by serving the FF. At this point, she's mostly given up on saving herself, but securing the Duforts' safety doesn't seem too out of reach.  


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I'm sure I've mentioned it before, but I do enjoy writing Nell's and Annabelle's relationship, because it's one of the few times (outside of Steven and Byte, like you mentioned) that Annabelle gets to be herself. There's also something more powerful about their relationship being between a Shrinkee and a non-Shrinkee.


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As much as I'm enjoying the back ground of the FF, I honestly cannot fucking wait to write them all together. I think it will be really interesting to see how they interact with Annabelle as a group after they've all had their one-on-one extensive bonding time with her. Maybe you'll get to see those "cracks"--or maybe their bond truly is unshakeable. 

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1. Hee hee, well I guess we know how that panned out.

2. Thank you! I don't a lot of chances to emphasize Annabelle's size through other small beings, so I kind of wanted to milk it lol.

3. Hahaha, then that might be the perfect reason to have Nell win (I'm joking...or am I?)


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As always, thanks for your review AdamX!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2023 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 35

This may sound weird but I'm starting to really dislike Nel. She is so nice and considerate and naive, she is just...boring hahaha it would be one of the worse endings if Anabelle imprinted on her, she is just so bland and boring. Also she is cutting into Naomi's time and we cant have that!I hope next chapter gives us more Naomi, the true Sano goddess.

As for the parents is fine. They are the least interesting ones of the parent group so is okay. I'm saying uninteresting a lot and it sounds like I'm hating, but I love it as always!I just have my favorites hahaha

Happy new year and thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Hahaha, yeah I get it. But rest assured, Naomi will get her time to shine. Also, I'd keep watching Nell if I were you. She might end up surprising you...


Happy Belated New Year Naoru! Hope you're still enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2023 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 35

Idk if my comment got the spicy scene with Naomi or if it was already planned but either way I'm happy it happened. Great scene and great chapter. Honestly I miss the chapters that were more ff and poppy focused and less BSA.



Author's Response:

Lol it definitely was. I had another spicy scene with Naomi (it's still coming up soon), but I added that scene because you were right--Naomi/Annabelle spice was a bit lacking. I definitely don't mind taking suggestions as long as it fits within the story.

And yeah, I miss having all FF interacting with each other/Annabelle. Don't worry, they'll be back soon!


Thanks again for the idea, Tigerchevy!

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