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Reviewer: Skull Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2023 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 36

Your book is amazing, and the suspense is killing me! I pray to God you are done with whatever it is you are going through and give us the next chapter!

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2023 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 36

Missing this. Best story ever written on this site.

Hope you're safe and well WoP :)

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2023 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 36

Sorry for taking so long!I forgot to check for a while hahahaha

Okaaaay so you were right in telling me to watch out for Nell. Her having the same desires as Naomi, but hiding them so Anabelle wont dislike her is...interesting, I have to say is a lot more than I gave her credit for, though I still like Naomi more. 

And talking about Naomi, things got tense with chef Dufort, poor Camilla and Naomi being incredibly petty. I'm really happy that Anabelle managed to get a win, finally, and save her, at the cost of...giving hell toa child molester??I seriously dont get Anabelle sometimes. If I was her, and had been so horriblu bullied, no one would ever get me to shut up, I would be bringing hellfire to Zoey and all the bullies. But oh well, I guess she has her reasons. And oh my god Zoey keeps getting worse and worse and more abusive, obsessed and deranged. And Naomi is not far behind, though Naomi is better because she would never beat Anabelle.

Im still kinda starving from Naomi content, too much Nell, more Naomi hahahaha enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: zura98 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 09 2023 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 36

I loved Nell here. Specially the foot part.

I loved that as the other giants she also has dark desires for dominance. It is a great twist that she has this side and not only the good girl one.

The way she stomped the insect.with her feet.

The way Annabelle got drawn to Nell's feet power.

The way Nell placed her soles in front of Annabelle, looming over her.

The way Poppy urged her to kiss the soles.

The way she firmly pinned her underfoot against the floor. And then kept her there, forced to endure.

The way she gave excused herself, with obvious lies.

And the way Poppy wanted to surrender herself so Nell would unleash her hidden desires.

I believe that all together made cheer for Nell. Some part of me wants Annabelle to imprint to Nell or at least end under her control.

At the end, the relationship between Nell and Annabelle it is the most different compared to the other girls.

Don't know what you have planned but I hope that we will see more Nell and her feet.

Anyway, great job with this story!

Reviewer: CromoAng Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2023 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 36

(First of all, I don't speak English, and my knowledge of it is low, so if something is wrong, or is not understood, there is the reason)




This is without a doubt one of the stories, not just about giants, that has hooked me the most. So much so that I fear for Annebell, with everything that has happened before and during the story, I genuinely wanted SHE to have a happy ending, or at least a healthy one 😢, but I don't know, the more I read, the more I get the feeling that the writer is going to give us an average ending between good and bad at best (and yes, the bad part at the end would be taken by Ann).

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2023 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 36

First and most important: good to know you are feeling better and hope you get fully recovered soon.

About the last two chapters, the ticklig was by far my favorite part! Often an playful act, it’s also a symbol of intimacy. It’s a touch that invade our space, causing a loss of control and at the same time undeniable… pleasure. That’s what I imagine Nell experienced when Anna pulled the splinter out. She liked it and actively searched excuses for more.

Repeating what others already said, Nell and Annabelle interactions are the most wholesome and intriguing. Did Anna enjoy it? She denies any pleasure for herself, going as far as calling Poppy a pervert, but I am inclined to believe all this denial is due to her situation – having seen so much suffering and death, having been abused and tortured herself, Anna is uncapable of allowing any sense of pleasure or happiness that is not through Poppy.

Both have problems. Nell can’t stand up to Naomi and be honest about how she fells towards her new friend. And Anna also denies any pleasure for herself, going as far as calling Poppy a pervert for something might very well be her own lust at work.

But wasn’t Anna the one first impressed with Nell feet to begin with? Only after that Poppy begun to have ideas of touching and cleaning her sole. At this point neither are being honest with each other. There is also the aditional problem that Nell is regarding her as Poppy like all the others. Why not use her true name?

Because as Poppy she can stay forever with her. Yes, I am a romantic and foolish foot lover, but what can I do? I hope Nell is able to prove and open herself to Anna. The problem is her family, especially Naomi.

Talking about Naomi, how woud the entiltled punk-rock giantess react if Anna ever said she liked Nell feet more? That she found them beautifull and Nell even more beautifull? Would she do it without Poppy’s help and aware Byte might be watching? Acknowledging one simple desires as her own might be the first step to start turning the tables.

There is more… a lot more. For Annabelle’s sake Nell is willing to go far and that might be the entire plan those monsters of a parents have. But I need to think more about all that happened.

Again, thanks for your dedication, even droping a chapter when you are recovering. But please take care of your health first.

Have a good easter and until the next chapter!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2023 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 36

The interactions between Nell and Anna are the most wholesome in the story, the dynamic they have really shows against the madness of the rest of the people Anna is forced to interact with any given day. The splinter scene was the most genuinely kind moment Anna has seemingly had since entering the Fearsome Foursome's homes.

Nell leaving her foot on Anna does leave me pause but I do also sort of hope if Anna can't escape this nightmare scenario she ends up with Nell. Poppy is definitely a monkey wrench but the extended foot smother while worrisome for Anna seems like something they could both come to enjoy together in life. Like maybe we've lowkey discovered a lifelong friendship/pairing of two people shit on by life who finally have somebody else to make their own better.

The music scene was also rather touching since it was something FOR Anna to enjoy versus something for Anna for the FOURSOME to enjoy. It also helps Nell learn a new skill that she might be good at and increase her self esteem with Naomi and the others routinely knocking it down whenever they can.

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Byte is fearless like a tiny Batman.

Ready to face danger at the drop of a hat to help the cause of the tinies in this tragic laden world they find themselves in. He definitely cut it a little close with Naomi waking up but his exit skills are to be commended. 

I do hope they manage to free Daria and her people though, the more allies they can muster for the cause is surely beneficial to the mission when fighting literal titanic killing machines with no moral compass.

As for the big day I am sure it will be onmious and another moment of terror for poor Anna's memory banks if the Foursome or their families are involved. Whatever it is they have planned for tomorrow hopefully Nell will be there to brighten her mode after the ordeal that is surely to come.

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Well fuck there seems to be a lot to unpack here...

The dinner scene was as gruesome as I was expecting highlighted by Naomi piercing the guys skull Jason Voorhees style with her fork. I do hope Tessa's work does find its way into the world at some point so her death was not in total vain. Something like that could have really saved Anna from this hellish nightmare world.

Naomi getting one over slightly on Anna is kind of expected given their power and ability but sadly used for completely petty reasoning. It was wonderful to see Anna get a win even if took all her resolve and gumption to achieve it. I truly hope the Dufronts are at least allowed to be happy together from now on so her win doesn't get undone by the whims of her captors.

things heat up even more.

Anna really needs a hug right now...

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I think Nell would be the best case scenario for Anna if she is never able to escape the BSA or return to her friends/family. She has been the one bright spot in the bleak existence she's had so far and a calming influence. She also seems to be helping Nell grow as a human being by encouraging her instead of belittling her at every turn.

I think Naomi would be a fiercely protective owner over Anna and likely even out pantshittingly terrifying Leah. Her dedication to keeping Poppy -safe- would definitely eliminate a lot of her dangers in life...and other tinies/people along the way likely.

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Hope you get well soon or are recovering/recovered from your illness.


Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2023 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 36

Man you keep teasing us with Camilla 😩 that end was legitimately gonna be my favorite scene of the whole story if Naomi swallowed her (or at least very very high on the list). But, I know story must come first so I don’t blame you lol. Always excited to see new chapters to this story!! Your writing continues to be great 

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2023 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 36

     First off welcome back, I will admit I was starting to get worried that something happened.  I am glad your health is getting better.  

     So I noticed that Naomi's arc has been increased to 4 chapters then, which i am ok with, this arc is surpising me alot.  Honestly i didnt really like Nell at first but this chapter actually brought forth an aspect I didnt expect, that is that Nell and Annebell are very close to my ideal Giant Tiny relationship. ( where the Giant does genually care for her tiny, but the tiny is there to be played with, but she respects the tiny and wants good things for her.  So dang it this chapter just made me start rooting for Nell. Congrats.

    Now Naomi, you had hinted that she was perceptive, but damn all of that from one meating and one mention of Dufort, that girl is scary.  She is also far colder than i realized, damn to eat the  daughter in front of the father, damn that cold.  Also, im opinion very stupid in the long run, but any way yea that was cold.  Also, THat really jumped up Naomi, she will be the Girl to watch I think from now on.  I take back what i said about Maybe Naomi possibly changing for the better if she discovered Nell's relationship with Poppy, though honestly she has to suspect if not out right know.  

    Byte would u plz tell Annebell what is up, for the love of all that is holy stop blue balling the poor girl.

     SO the teacher, honestly I dont feel sorry for him, teachers who do  that to students deserve what ever happens.  Also dont think I didnt catch that implication that Zoey actually protected Annebell, (why, i havent decided yet) but yea, This Zoey arce continues to be super interesting and i am so ready to see where u are going with it.

      I am very interested in the next chapter and hope it can come soonish.     But plz take care of yourself in these crazy times.

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