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Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2024 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 38

Another incredible chapter. Thank you. And so pleased to see you're back.

Can't wait to read on, hoping for an 'aware' meeting of Zoey & Poppy - the latter to feel smaller than ever!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2024 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 38

Poppy is coming hard for our young heroine, the fight is getting near the end it seems unless she has a last second hail mary in her playbook. I still think Neil might be that Hail Mary despite her missteps as she is the only one she's might bigger than her since that fateful night that seems to respect/care for her as more of a person and not just a pet.

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Woah an abrupt --- there...

Makes me wonder if somebody is kidnapping poor Bella against her will again but it seems rather risky given its in one of the Foursome's home and the person appears to be full sized.

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Well hell this turned terrifying fast..

Incredible work via Naomi to get this all set up for Bella to face her fears...well just this one not the several others since she met the foursome. I fully expect something really horrible to be in the lesson plan for Mr. Acker but at least Bella will get a little piece of mind...and likely more nightmares on top of it.

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A lot to unpack here...

For once Naomi WASN'T the true monster here, a rare showing for anyone from the Foursome with what we've learned about them. Bella got a little bit of justice in her bleak world so it was a minor win even if she had to witness somebody's flesh dripping off their face to achieve it. 

I'm not sure if she'll find closure from this but in this one instance horribleness actually benefited the world of the BSA instead of just them. It was brutal but removing him from the table brings a lot of people closure if they will never know it and saves a lot of people from falling into his trap.

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Now there's the haunting nightmares I was expecting!

At least it wasn't Naomi encouraging Chloe to eat her or Chloe outright eating her so a win for the subconscious of our heroine. I like to think if she ever escapes this she will never want to step foot in another classroom for as long as possible.

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A heartwarming moment with Naomi, I'm beginning to think with better parents the foursome might have ended up a lot better off.

Naomi's anger at least comes from a place of understanding as people were dicks to her and her mother long before they possibly started the BSA thus we understand why she is as frightening as she is to outsiders. Like the others this was a heartwarming look into the underside of the monsters Bella has been forced to bare witness to over the past few months.

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Her past becoming known?

Does this mean the Foursome will face their toughest task yet in taking all the all mighty Step Goddess?

Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Type Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2024 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 38

I thought that I would lose interest because of how long an update took. But after reading it, I almost cried.


Memories 😭

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 38

So, first off welcome back, I have greatly missed this story.  Still is an awesome story and i really want to see how this ends ( I am so torn on which ending i want other then i dont want a full imprint, but do i want her to end with Cloe( good ending) or girls ( ranging from ok to bad to very bad (leah)).

   Yea any pity I had for the teacher went by by when He tried to shift the blame.  THat was bullshit and honestly I think he was lucky to die, I would rather die then live under Sanos oh so gentle and caring ( sarcasm) hands.  

    NOw that we are done with the individual chapters I rank as the Girls coming out ahead in this depraved race is Naomi, Molly, Harper, Leah, Nell.  Nell had them all beat right up until the end, Sorry girl but yea you really arent any better just better as pretending to be human.

    I am so ready for the back story of Anna, you have teased it now for years and I am so ready for it. 

See you next time.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 38

awesome, i can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: amerdism Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 38

Goddamit themore I hear about Annabelle’s one good relationship, that being her friendship with Chloe, the more I want them to be the ones who get together in the end, not romantically but ya know, as the person who takes care of Annabelle due to her size.

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