Hmmm well I am sorry I are sick plz get better soon. Well none of this bodes well. I can’t wait until next chapter then, when ever it is, and Thankyou for this update,

Man just as I begin to mostly tolerate the giantesses u go and remind me just how terrible they really are, very spicy scene and very dominating , also every thing with poppy is getting horrifying now that we see what she can be like,. Yes I am rdy for your behemoth of a chapter when ever u are capable.

Author's Response:

Thanks Ralgar, I've been feeling better. Lol I always think comments like these are funny, because some people really like the giantesses (understandable, I love them) but they forget that they are insanely cruel to certain people. 

I still have some scenes to write for the behemoth chapter. It's not my favorite chapter, but it's a necessary chapter. It's plot heavy, but full of giantesses scenes and action. It's probably my most action-filled chapter so far. 

I hope you guys like it. 

I do apologize but I was wondering when the next chapter might be.  I don’t usually ask this question but your story is incredible and I am very ready for what happens next.

Does she decide to actually unload to one of the girls ( very unlikely), does she get in touch with dufert( poor guy). Does she decide to become a willing pet ( again very unlikely,).I can’t wait to find out the answers to these and more questions.  

  Also I do have a question, let’s say some how situation reversed at the current point in the story, pst chapter 24, I mean Anna becomes big and the 4 become small, would she kill them at this point or keep them alive.  I think she would at this point keep them alive if reluctantly I do think she is starting to care for them. Early in the story yeah no question dead.  But after the zoey incident and the Bennett’s incident I do think she does somewhat cared for them if still hates them. I also think hate and love are two sides of the same coin.  So hmmm yea.

so yea I don’t normally ask the question of how long but i am very much looking forward to the next chapter.  Also hope u had a good holiday.

By the way I’ve been meaning to mention that my sympathy for her father will completely depend on what we find out when we finally get her details ( which by the way u are a total tease,( and I do mean that in the nicest way).  But her father up and disappeared for a year after her sisters death, that for me is grounds to be dishoned as a father, I lost one child u still have another u don’t just up and vanish especially after giving your remaining child a wrong phone number and, and depending on who’s mistake that was ( meaning annelles for calling the wrong number for a year or him giving a wrong number) may even make his abandonment even worse. 

So I will wait judgement on him, but if he is found wonting I will say this, Anne should stop protecting him and let girls do what they will.

my opinion of fathers who abandon their child is very low.

Finally something that gives Annabelle something to work with! I think part of what made things so grim was that things seemed completely hopeless. Annabelle's descent into imprinting was looking inevitable. Poppy kept overtaking her thoughts and Annabelle had no real way of stopping it, now she has some form of defense against Poppy and that really makes things interesting.

It's a fun dynamic considering the giantesses adore her, and are pushing her towards imprinting, but now she'll be able to frustrate them presumably with this new information she has, at the very least delaying her imprinting for awhile. As long as they don't know what she's doing, they can't reasonably get upset at her for not imprinting, after all in their mind it's out of Annabelle's control. 

I was so damn ready to say "fuck these other shrinkies" before the reveal that Steven was an ally. I kinda figured one of them would be after your response to my last review, but still ended up being a pleasant surprise.

I can't ignore the looming feeling that Steven and Bitsy are in danger from the other giantesses though. I don't THINK they'd try to kidnap them even if they could, after all what use is a type-0 whose already imprinted on someone else. But if they found out Steven hasn't imprinted I could totally see them trying to mentally break him and keep him. 

The one other thing that I thought about this chapter was when Annabelle made Bitsy cry. It seemed like she was able to get through to her somewhat. With the lack of research done around type-0's I wonder if it's possible to revert the imprinting process... 🤔

I know the question wasn’t made to me, but I will give it a shot because it’s interesting and fun LOL - Leah: political sciences and economics; Molly: law and business; Naomi: fashion design and arts history; Harper: ...?

Also, some questioned why the families didn’t simply took Bitsy and Steven. This is just my especulation, but they might have had plans, but choosen to abort because Annabelle entered the scene.

I do have a question and it maybe imaterial, but what was Annabelles major, and just what was she planning  on studying besides Shakespear?

Also what are the 4 studying to? I’ve been think and I don’t recall it ever being mentioned, not that I think thee girls really care (except maybe Leah and Molly).

By the way yes I love the long chapters, I have always preferred long chapters to short, ( though only problem I have is even long chapters do eventually end).

I do want to know more about this worldd u have made though.  It is very surprising to me that people in power would know about Steven and that he is with an apparent regular person (read peasant) and not arrange things so that something happed to Riley. (Not that I do want something happen rather the opposite really) honestly Steven really surprised me, I was not expecting a normal person to have a type-0. 

The fact that u can apparently ward off the imprinting is so huge though.   Poor Annabelle is going to have such a hard time with that.  

Also at the very end of this story will Annabell sing?

I have to say that this is all very moving and it hit close to home to me. Anabelle's journey through her trauma, all the abuse she has gone through, and all the coping mechanisms she has to deal with that pain and trauma are what truly sets this apart from other GTS stories out there and I'm happy to have a chapter dedicated to it. It opens a way to heal for her, and possible endings for this. Maybe one where she doesn't imprints buts ends up staying with one of the girls?I mean, Leah would love this since she has shown signs she likes Anabelle more when she is either unwilling or just...challenging perhaps?then again, I think instead of "choose one and imprint" the better advice should have been "Pretend to imprint" which would make things easier for Anabelle indeed.

I like the relationship Steven has with Riley. Of course Anabelle doesn't, but just like Steven can't understand her situation, she can't understand his. He hasn't been abused and Riley doesn't uses him to pleasure herself, she seems legit nice, so I'm okay with them being wholesome.

I think this chapter gave us a lot of insight on Anabelle too, like, she is scared of being close to people because she is scared of losing them probably after her sister and mother's deaths, she has trust issues, and she doesn't think she deserves love, which I think is VERY important as to why even when the FF clearly do love and care for her, she still thinks of every excuse as to why they don't love her and just want to use her, other than the having her kidnapped and stuff.

As a last bit I think Steven lied to her about hearing a voice. He is a good actor, clearly, so is no surprise he deceived Anabelle. I think Poppy is like...the voice of her...species??Like in elfen lied, where Lucy had the voice of her instincts to kill humanity. Idk I may be wrong on this one, but I think Poppy is not a normal shrinkie thing like Anabelle thinks. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter but this was great

Thanks for the birthday wishes!

It seems you have roped Anna into some sort of kama sutra type thing here. She is already under enough stress without the added bonus of having to see others whose minds have melted away, although it is unclear at the moment if their bondings were as forced/bad intentioned as Anna's is trying to be.

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These are some hardcore cultists trying to break sweet Anna. She has been holding on for so long but I wonder what lengths they will go to try to finally break her willful spirit.

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Anna raises so solid questions about the mortality rates of Type 0 owners. Humans are big meatsacks filled with pokeable organs that are easily fallen thus leaving poor Bitsy alone with hell knows who or what. Maybe at the mercy of he Foursome's families knowing their reach and resources, she seems like she wouldn't deserve that.

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I see the Fearsome Foursome has employed their iron will once again upon the other Type O owners. Molly does seem to be the one who I -would- say might help Anna escape later due to her self image issues being something Anna could use in her favor. Shitty yes but Molly is not exactly innocent so karmic balancing out and what not.

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Well another wrench thrown into the gears, Steven does seem like a genuinely nice guy and thus far Riley seems to be the best of the owners I've seen by not trying to enslave or break her tiny. I'm not really sure where it all goes but Anna has been getting some legs up lately so this might finally give a little peace somewhere.

Author's Response:

Hey Adam, I love that you comment as you read, it makes looking at your reactions so fun!

Some of my own comments:

I really like the idea of the "after." Right now, the FF are so focused on making Annabelle imprint that they haven't considered what happens after they're gone. It's an interesting idea that really none of the characters has really discussed in detail yet.

Although this story is primarily about Annabelle and the FF, I really enjoy writing scenes where they interact with other characters. Even when they're being "hospitable" the FF are still consistently cruel and selfish. 

Steven and Riley's relationship is really interesting and I plan on delving into it a little bit more.

Thanks for another great comment, Adam!

Hello again, the only thing that i could think i would really like to see is a chapter for one of the fours pov, ( which might be spoilery territory, but u did say soon we would be getting in to there stories anyway,) . I have read this story twice now and getting rdy to read a third time ( it is just that good) and that i is the one think i miss, is seeing a chapter from pov of the villians, especially during a poppy episode.

Honestly the best outcome that i can think of for Anna is that she imprints on one of thie girls, (by the way I hope Rachel isnt an indicator of what Anna will be like when she imprints, that would take it out of bitter sweet to down right depression at least to me).  I also cant see Anna sucessfully escaping and being able to stay gone, she is worth billions and the only reason she isnt in a lab or elsewhere with people worse than the 4 (ergo their parents) is becuase of the 4.  IF she got away i see that becoming open season on her adn now everyone is going to come after her. People have done worse for millions let alone billions.  

So inconclusion while i love a happy end ( which would be either her father or honesly Cloe,( Nell is to beat down to protect her) and i have suspions about Oliver, I think realistically she needs to imprint and really bond with one of the girls ( if not all 4:P.)

Also i am rooting for either Leah or Harper ( prefer Leah, I think she could really protect Anna in the long run, Harper would be the one  i think would acutally care the most about her post imprinting, ( though really  i am acoutally rooting for all 4 ( a little becasue I will not be surpised if harper went all if i cant have her no one can kinda thing if she imprinted on any of the others like seriously theyu are all monsters but there is something not right in that girls head. Also i do think that all 4 have bonded with her on a minor lvl like Rachel did, just that because they are so big compared to anna it takes alot more and is diluted alot compared to poor Rachel. 

ALso plz spare Rachel.