Reviewer: Butt Slave Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2020 4:08 PM Title: The Grass is Always Greener

I gotta say, I'm not into Carley threatening her tiny victims with non-sexual punishments. It's kind of hard to stay into a story when a woman is describing teleporting someone into a volcano.

I prefer it when each of a vicims' punishments, and every threat made by the victimizer, are tied to specific fetishes. I can't imagine anyone has a fetish for being teleported into a volcano. Sure, people are into the feeling of being dominated and unable to control the situation - but this feeling can be achieved in far more interesting ways.

I'm glad someone was finally turned into an ass freckle, but not much was done with it afterwards. I'm not into feet, so I can't really comment on the rest of this chapter.

Author's Response:

Ehhh, sometimes Carley is just going to be cruel for the sake of being cruel. When she's in a good mood or being playful, the torments will be primarily sexual. But with the people she really hates there is going to be more sinister and cruel torture purely for the sake of being cruel. 

 

Honestly this whole story is a bit experimental for me. Im not accustomed to writing just purely fetish chapters so I'm gonna end up trying to work in some character building, in whatever form that might take. We'll see how it turns out and hopefully you enjoy what's to come!

 

thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2020 5:41 AM Title: The Grass is Always Greener

Great to see this back, goths make the world go round.

Author's Response:

They really do, don't they? Thanks for the support!!