Date: September 13 2020 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 1. Another day another nickel
I love how this story is going so far.
I am a fan of nose stuff and sneezing. Are you including that ? It would be great to have a nice breast chapter and then switch to face/nose and have the mother getting an allergic attack and sneezing into her breast XDD Like... the breast people would get the perpective of her inhales and the chest/breast movements that would go with it apart of the sneezing itself (while the face guy would probably be sneezed away to doom... or maybe to other part of her body).
Just an idea/suggestion. Continue please :)
Date: September 12 2020 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1. Another day another nickel
Half an inch is way too big to be able to be on someone and them not notice, much less be able to say they are 'planet like'. Both of these are <1/32th inch size ranges at best.
Thinking about it your probably right but I'd like to think she's especially clueless. As for the other thing I was thinking less in a literal sense and more of a personal perspective type of way. Thanks for the commentary though I'll take it into account in writing the next chapter.