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Reviewer: DigestedAlive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2021 5:00 AM Title: Hot Tub with Extra Cream

Very good stuff. Thank you very much for writing it!

Reviewer: mush Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2020 8:07 PM Title: The Beginning

i hate it

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 6:43 PM Title: Bright Pink Nails, Bright Red Tampon

Overall this story has some interesting and descriptive gore scenes.  And despite errors in the earlier chapters, which i commented on already, I'm interested to see how it will finally end.

 

 I always wonder with stories that have an automatic return to normal size feature what it would be like if, after someone was crushed or mangle but still living, suddenly bloody bodies appeared when time ran out.  I just think it would be hilarious to see the unaware killers reactions.

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 6:06 PM Title: Miscommunication can be Deadly

Chapter 3.  Follows along with chapter two but makes you wonder if they had time to make it to the bedroom and climb a table, why not make their way to the safe zone and re-enlarge.  I did like the increased resilience provided by the shrink process to explain how the individuals don't die like expected and continue to suffer longer.

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 5:51 PM Title: Refreshments and Pest Control

Ok.  I'm commenting on the second chapter.  I enjoyed the first chapter but the second was a complete mess.  According the the writer the chapter was written by someone else and then edited by them.  Their are a number of incosistencies.  The daughter is swimming instead of walking on the water.  They all of a sudden have radios instead of cell phones.  The others, who didn't know where the kids went, all of sudden know katie was swallowed and want to rescue her.  Then they talk about meeting up with carl, but don't know he was crushed under the giant foot, even though the giant voices were talking about crushing a bug and supposeldy all insects have been cleared from the home.  I really hope the rest of the chapters are more consistent and as well written as the first.

Reviewer: Krizia Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 2:48 AM Title: The Beginning

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Author's Response:

https://discord.gg/9UfRwnF Hey guys, I'm an admin on Size: Space Sojourns and I wanted to invite anyone looking for RPing in a different setting. Our discord's theme is a spaceship travelling the galaxy, occasionally stopping at exciting destinations like a world ran by monster girl and pirate giantesses, to a giant space sorority, and even chilling on the ship with crewmembers of different sizes. Nearly all fetishes are welcome, just be sure to read the rules, hope you guys stop by and say hi! https://discord.gg/9UfRwnF

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