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Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 6:43 PM Title: Bright Pink Nails, Bright Red Tampon

Overall this story has some interesting and descriptive gore scenes.  And despite errors in the earlier chapters, which i commented on already, I'm interested to see how it will finally end.

 

 I always wonder with stories that have an automatic return to normal size feature what it would be like if, after someone was crushed or mangle but still living, suddenly bloody bodies appeared when time ran out.  I just think it would be hilarious to see the unaware killers reactions.

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