Reviewer: WhydoIhave Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2021 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Well it was a good read. The plot was solid, but there were a bit to much grammatical errors  throughout the story. I understood what you were going for however, but the flow of the story was a bit off. Maybe you could've had the dialogue on a seperate line. Anyways I hope to see where the story goes next chapter.

Author's Response:

I know it's too late to answer, it's that this novel is originally in Spanish and not in English,

I have the complete novel but after translating it it's different and it comes out with several errors