Reviewer: NullAJ2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

That was amazing and I hope to see many more like it! :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2008 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

See? I'm not the only one who thinks so. ;-)

Author's Response:

yeah, buti like i said before that was done intentionally. You hear more about that time period in the second story as that part of the story contains more mental turmoil and anguish that leads in the end leads to acceptance of his current state, while acceptance doesn't mean likeing or enjoying the situation acceptance is a start to many things, and I felt those thoughts and feelings fit better in the second story, as this first story ends better with things not all tied up in a neat little bow.

however, if that said. I do appreciate your thoughts and feelings on the story and they are much appreciated and mean alot.