Date: November 10 2020 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 4 Games and Deals
Loved the part with the tinies inside the sock. More feet/socks/shoes action would be great!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! And yes, I shall have some more feet/socks/shoes content in the future
Thanks for the review and for reading, hope you enjoy the future chapters!
Date: October 25 2020 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 4 Games and Deals
The best story I have read recently 😃, but please add more footwear and feet stuff and some disgusting tasks for tiny slsves
Date: October 25 2020 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 4 Games and Deals
Dude, your work is AMAZING so far!
I've just been reading "The Lives of Those We Use" as well! You really capture that paradoxically wonderful-yet-horrifying fantasy of people whose lives are stripped away irreparably to simply be used as tiny playthings for others...
I have a suggestion/request fot Phil and what he does with his tiny girl... I was thinking that maybe he could... Experiment with foot play? (And maybe later, a mixed size romance could bloom? Little more of a stretch, I know)
I'm a big fan of M/f footplay, but there's never enough of it! Some good sources of inspiration for that are RamsusXIII's story "Small Packages" on this site, BubblyJuice's "A Night of Shrunken Intimacy" on deviantart, and even this story here: https://www.coiledfist.org/article.php?story=angel_avonlady01 (except I don't like the violent ending ><)
Anyways, even if you end up not going in that direction, I'm still a big fan of your work already, and I cannot WAIT to see where you go from here!
Keep up the great work! ;)
[Report This]Date: October 25 2020 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 4 Games and Deals
Wow, lots of stuff happened!
First off, I'm glad you separated each section that relates to each character. Easier to identify them.
This Tamara person is interesting. It's like Kayla but more careless of her tinies. I mean Kayla has tinies serving her and she keeps them. But Tamara is buying tinies left and right and using them. Also cool that she uses points to bargain with people. Billy may have borrowed points from her, but we know he will shrink inevitably.
Jessica reminds me of Kelly from your other story. The girl that is not used to tinies, but is trying them out and slowly enjoying them. Her "Ass club roomates" seem to be somewhat popular. I mean, Ali freaked out when she found out. Lol.
Man, Phil is oblivious to this whole world. His roomate Jade is clearing farting on her tiny girl and this guy doesn't get it. I can't wait to see his reaction once he finds out. That's going to be funny. Also, I think it's interesting to see him taking a liking to his tiny. He likes her and I think he is starting to care for her. That's kinda sweet. Not sure it's going to last though.
Back with Jessica, that shrink game was crazy and creative. I think it's a great way to show Jessica that people don't play by the rules.
Which is something that the Ben kid was talking about his sister who didn't have street smarts. He wants to protect his sister by shrinking which kinda sounds dumb. I mean, if it works, why not, but I'm pretty sure these siblings could find other ways to succeed in this school. Lol. They saod they were smart, but if this is their best solution, I'm not so sure if they are as smart as they claim. Fortunately for Tamara, she gets a free toy.
Now we get Ms Evelyn. Holy crap, she is amazing! First, she wakes up with a guy licking her pussy all night! Wow, hopefully she gets Tom to do that one day since he is shrunken. Also, thank you again for adding a Tom to this story. I even like his introduction to this story. Dude gets dropped straight into her panties forced to pleasure her pussy all day. Damn, that's hot. Would love to see him pleasure her at night too. Might be hard to do with all the tinies she has. Ms Evelyn has Jill as well so it all seems tricky. Interesting to see her multiple tinies at once. I just love how horny she is! And the fact that she is 35 is the cherry on top. Amazing!
Great set of chapters and I can't wait for the next one!