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Reviewer: thopk38 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2020 8:22 AM Title: begginig of problems

Nice beginning.... I Hope you keep going

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2020 2:17 AM Title: begginig of problems

Good story. I hope you keep it up

Reviewer: Matanzamir2 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2020 8:47 PM Title: begginig of problems

Great start. I'm looking forward to see more!

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 30 2020 4:14 PM Title: begginig of problems

Great beginning of a story. Does he natrually lose height because of the fog or does physical touch transfer size? it will be cool for him to trapped in Tara's breasts



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Yo había decidido continue with the story. I hope you like it

Reviewer: facortes12 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2020 1:52 PM Title: begginig of problems

Thanks you very much! I will check all your suggestion! I will improve the grammar.

keep looking, it will get better!

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