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Reviewer: Kyomi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2020 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

the sense of scope in this story is incredible, and the fact that the pacing of the story remains in my opinion fairly stable serves to help that

Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

1. Yay, you're continuing this!

2. I really wrote that line? (Yes, apparently I did -- it's in "Homo Sum.") Damn. That's a good line, if I do say so myself. :P

Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2009 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

An excellent addition. Keep 'em coming!

 

(And yeah, the editing is always the least fun.)



Author's Response: Thanks DX. I will try.

Reviewer: Knot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2009 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love to see this continued, especially amidst my own struggle with writer's block. I love how meticulous this story is, and I am a big fan of your use of realism. Hope to see more soon.

Author's Response: Writers Block is hard to overcome. Some say to wait it out, others say to write through it.  I have always enjoyed stories with a sense of realism. So I wanted ot really emphasize that point in this one.

Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2009 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hooray! More! :P

Reviewer: Knot Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2009 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Almost anything I could say has already been said, so, just keep up the work on this amazing story. The sooner the better!

Reviewer: nostromo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 08 2009 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really cool reading, this story of yours asukafan! Keep going, by all means!

Reviewer: Vord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2008 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent, definitely can't wait for this story continue. Truly do love the micro-realm stories.

Author's Response: Thanks vord. I have been a long time fan of micro realm stories as well.I have a few started so hopefully i can finish this one.

Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2008 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this so far -- it's got nice development, and a scale that's rarely experienced for that long in a story. I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2008 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

AWESOME start. I hope you continue this one soon.

Author's Response: Thanks T1J, I do plan on completing this one. I just can't give a specific time.

Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2008 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Terriffic start, look forward to more.

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