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Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2021 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 54: No Advantages at an Away Game

And about the Man identity, I actually don't know, maybe he could be a new character, a matured daddy man that no one ever heard about before.

Also about what I said of Steven being stuck on this man dick being a new experience for him, what I wanted to mean is that maybe in the future when he does go back to his family again this kind of thing can happen again to him, like ending up in one of the womens vagina or assholes while a normal size dude fucks them and Steven presence being unaware by the giant man, at this point he would need to accept the situation he would be on for now on, he would be an addition/extra for the womens pleasure while having sex with some normal sized mans, I just imagined a scenario where Julia's husband comes back home while Julia have little Steve inside her vagina and then both goes and have sex while her husband is unaware about little Steven in there being pushed in and out by his cock and then he cums and Steve is washed away on his cum and into her womb he goes again.

Can't wait to see next chapter~ this story is really good~



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I believe I am going with a new character that hasn't been seen yet in this story. I still giving people time to decide if they want a new character or use an old male character in the story. The two other male characters that have been introduced in the sotry are Garrett and Julia's husband those are the two I am working with. if it is a new character, I will take the mature daddy into consideration. I do like the part of the woman being totally aware of a tiny Steve in her asshole or vagina with an unaware male having sex with one of the women. 

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2021 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 54: No Advantages at an Away Game

I would vote for Steve being stuck on the penis of the Man for now.

It can be a new experience that Steve will have to deal with when the date is over, he will be stuck on this unknow man penis for some time while being 100% unaware by him. And maybe this dude will have a date with another women that then Steve will be shoot out from the dude dick and into this other unknow women womb.

Not sure if this drug that was used on him is different since he shrunken even smaler than before and If it's different maybe he will be that small for a long time than before.

Can't wait to see more~



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Steve is stuck inside the man's dick right now. it is possible for him to be stuck there for a while. right now we are deciding if the man shoots Steve into Aunt Maria or holds off for someone else. 

 

The drug is keeping him small and it will keep him small for a long time. the drug is not having the effect of making him smaller than before. Everytime he goes in a women's womb, Steve is able to shrink farther than he has before.

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2021 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 54: No Advantages at an Away Game

Let's have Steve stuck in the anus this time!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Steve got to spend some time in the anus but people wanted him to go in the man's cock. it is possible for this man to shoot Steve in another girl's anus

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2021 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 54: No Advantages at an Away Game

Nice. Time for unaware threesome. I vote for falling inside the cock, and either being placed in an unaware Aunt Maria's womb later on, or since you said possible to add a new person, you could have Steve stay inside the cock until the guy gets it on with a different girl,  that is a complete stranger a few days later if the date turned out bad. That would both add a new person, and provide a way for Steve to be elsewhere with no clue how to get back home, especially if the girl is from a different city entirely. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for liking the chapter. Steve has fallen inside the man's cock and is ready to be delivered to somewhere on a woman. I like the idea of him being used in a different girl later on and no one knows about it for awhile. We will see where this goes

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