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Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2021 10:32 PM Title: Bonus chapter: New year, New behaviors

Love this one! the whole development of Steve training of being a pleasure toy for Kara was fantastic, and the part where she reveals to her drunk husband about the tiny he brought to her after having sex to another women was also amazing and even after he wakes up the next morning thinking it was just a weird dream I could fell that he imagined how much torture he would have objected the poor tiny thing but then decided it was just a hallucination and stop thinking about it, sealing Steve's fate for some more time in Kara's womb, I loved both couple interaction with a tiny man involved on it as well~

And my vote is still for Steve to spend his time with his Aunt, he still needs to put his training into practice if he wants to survive being a sex toy for the womens that decided to use him, also he needs to be prepared, because one day one of those mature womens can decided to keep him in her womb and never let him go, so is best for Steve to be prepared if he ends up having to live for the rest of his life in some womens womb as a sex toy.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the reivew. I was trying to find a way for Kirk to find about Steve because of reviews but have it so where steve could move on without Kirk feeling remorseful or obliged to take care of Steve. a forgetful drunk is what i came up with. it would allow Kara to call out Kirk's affair while still having a loving relationship. For Steve being in the womb, we will see more of Steve finally coming across that woman that will use him a lot.

 

for the vote, we are 0 votes for sister and friends, 1 for Aunt and friends, and 2 for Mom

 

 

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2021 6:35 PM Title: Bonus chapter: New year, New behaviors

Wow! You really outdid yourself with this chapter! I cannot say I like the male interference but I love the way you describe Steve's developments in his techniques. In order to get his nutrition by stimulating the women who carries him. I would really like to see him return to his mother and use his improvements to satisfy her. After all, there is no better or safer space for Steve than Kady's womb, is there? I can't wait to see the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I know that some people don't like the male interference but I had readers ask for it and I try to fit it in the story the best I can. The main focus is Steve so I try to limit male interaction with Steve and the original author doesn't want it either by his rules but alllows it slightly. I do like it also how Steve has to please the woman who is carrying him to survive until the pill and such comes to let him out. 

 

I will count your vote for Kady. making the vote count, 0 for sister and friends, 1 for Aunt and friends, and 2 for Mom.

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