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Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2021 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 76: Aunt going to get away with this

An interesting development. Well done! It would be nice to see that Steve develops an urge to enter Kady willingly. After he discovers that the outside world is cruel and cold Kady's womb is the only place he is protected from it all. Look forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I like the idea and will try my best to aim for Steve to choose someone to enter willingly. The world outside is getting more and more cruel to him as he continues to shrink. He would be considering trusting someone.

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