Date: December 07 2020 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 5: Miss Worldwide
While I'm not normally into these 'simulated/flashdrive' world style stories, this one has grabbed my attention.
I've read some of your previous works, and am hoping this one gets a final chapter.
Jen's total lack of shits given about the tiny digital people and there world does amuse me, especially ones who are trying to fight against her control or protest.
Like.....she could smash your entire existance with a hammer, or change your very biological/psychological makeup with a few keystrokes, and you're gonna act like you have any kind of authority or bargaining power with her.....seriously.
I kept thinking of her inserting the drive into one of her holes, and somehow remotely connecting the drive while inside (maybe through wireless connectivety/bluetooth) and she gets off while telling them exactly where they are.
Date: December 05 2020 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: Miss Worldwide
I don't want to say everything I like here, because otherwise it would be a very long text, so I'll talk about my favorite aspect.
The idea of r03;r03;an omnipotent goddess is already well used, and as much as history makes you believe that the goddess is omnipotent and untouchable, you almost never end up believing 100%, the story can talk about how badass the goddess is, how she has a thousand powers, how she can do what she wants, but still, you always end up thinking that this goddess is not that omnipotent.
This is because, in the vast majority of stories, the goddess is on the same plane of existence as the tinys.
Confused? Basically, if a goddess or giantess is on the same plane of existence as her victims, she logically can be touched by them, and as she can be touched, her brain unconsciously thinks that she can be hurt, however much the story forces she is invincible, this is something that lodges unconsciously in your head and never leaves.
And this is where the concept of her story shines, because in her, the goddess is NOT on the same plane of existence as the tinys, they cannot even see her.
She's like an unpredictable force in nature, she just changes their world with the push of a button, and they can't fight it.
The story gives an excellent idea of r03;r03;how weak and helpless they are, they cannot see her, touch her, fight her, all they can do is accept it, while her, in her own plan of existence, plays with them.