[Report This]Date: December 07 2020 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Gray Skies
A real gem on this site consisting of mostly pebbles.
Author's Response:
I'm happy you enjoyed the story! I will say I've certainly read a lot of good stories from other authors on this site though. In any case, thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2020 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Gray Skies
This might be my favorite story of all time here. I love it when the girl's power and sadism go so ridiculously over-the-top.
Author's Response:
Oh my, thank you very much! That's very nice of you to say.
I'm also an obvious fan of exploring the limits (or lack thereof) of power.
Anyways, thanks for reading! I'm happy you enjoyed reading the story!
[Report This]Date: December 06 2020 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Gray Skies
I finally finished this story and I love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Date: December 04 2020 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Gray Skies
Wow what a brilliant Story! Thank you! Please make more Storys with Laser Eyes! These are soo rare...
Author's Response:
Hello and thanks for sharing your thoughts. I'm happy you enjoyed the story!
I enjoy laser eyes as well. Laser eyes could show up in a future story perhaps if I feel it's a good fit so to speak.
[Report This]Date: December 03 2020 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Gray Skies
Finally had time to finish reading the whole story. All I can say is what a ride! Delta is the perfect character for this type of story. Her mannerisms and personality definitely show for a Omnipotent Goddess who treats everything as playthings, less than bugs beneath her feet. You are one of the best at writing Omnipotence stories and characters, in your stories. I only wish you had more foot play sometimes, with maybe sweaty, smelly feet to torture people with lol. That being said I cannot wait to see what you write next, no matter the theme!!! Such a talented writer!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy to hear the story was enjoyable.
I'm actually not the biggest fan of filth-play with feet though, so you *probably* won't see anything along the lines of sweat/stink there in my future works.
Date: December 02 2020 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Gray Skies
Honestly you're probably one of if not the best COSMIC OMNIPOTENT NIGHTMARES writers I've seen on this site. I really like how you characterize Delta's antisocialness and megalomania especially in the rare points when she doesn't have actual godhood. There's something really fun about the way you write people exploit breaking their universes, and I think that bleeds into how you invent all these horrible fates to subject humanity to. More than any of your other stories your raging horny for I Have No Mouth And I Must Scream shines through loud and clear as day.
If there's one thing I didn't like it was probably that the time dilation thing kinda falls by the wayside? We never see very huge jumps of time, or if we do they're sort of brushed over. There's no one in the real world (who isn't Delta) to really compare the sheer infinities she's subjecting everyone else to, which makes the final chapter's punch hit a little bit weaker than it should tbh. Which is a shame bc time dilation is a suuuuper cool concept and you seem to think it too.
By the way, I hate to shill other sites on here, but I think you might wanna check out Omnipotentgirls dot net, it's a GW type story hosting site but specifically for omnipotence stories, and a lot of the writers there would be riiiiiight up your alley.
Author's Response:
Oh my, thank you so very much! That's all so kind of you to say. Given the nature of the setting, there were definitely many horrible fates to explore!
I think you have a good point with the time-dilation stuff. It's difficult to balance the real-world disparity when there's not many active people in that real-world world: very true. For Delta, it was perhaps more a means of trying to preserve what she has going on, although she did use its tormenting aspects at parts. Still, there was perhaps more potential I could've explored. I do like it as a concept though, and it was explored a little in "Planet Flattening" for instance. I can imagine myself using it in the future though, so we'll see what the future holds!
As to that website, I have actually heard of that site once before, and I think I might check it out.
Anyways, thanks so much for sharing your thoughts! I appreciate the feedback.
[Report This]Date: December 02 2020 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Gray Skies
I just created an account to compliment you on this story.
I mean I began reading a few hours ago and nearly pauseless teared through until chapter 9.
I'm looking forward to more of Delta's Actions which will probably spin out of control quickly, someone as power-hungry as she won't stay in Bruce's Copy of the Minecraft Ripoff some crafty programmers whipped up after the original was "misstepped" out of existence for too long...
If I had godmode all-access to Paradise I would edit Delta's Name to "OZ_LoveMachine". (If you have no idea what that means google "Summer Wars Antagonist" and you will see why.)
Author's Response:
Oh wow thank you, that's nice of you do! I really do appreciate comments and the like, since they help me see what people like etc.
Happy to see you are enjoying the story, and yeah I don't want to spoil things, but Delta isn't exactly the easily satisfied type per-se.
I looked up that character you mentioned, very interesting!
Thanks again for sharing your thoughts thus far!
[Report This]Date: December 02 2020 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: Gray Skies
Haven't finished it yet, but over halfway done. What an epic! Love Delta! Def got a Cyberpunk feel to it. I love her attitude. She's the perfect person for this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Feel free to share your thoughts when/if you finish as well. I'm happy the character and the story seems enjoyed so far!
[Report This]Date: December 01 2020 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Gray Skies
Wow, 44 chapters! Don't have enough time to read all of it til the weekend, but I read the first couple and good stuff so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy it's enjoyed so far.