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Date: December 02 2020 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 20: Zero-day

" Paradise works, the way most everything program in our world works is to dynamically utilize storage and processing power from the USH computer farms built on the graveyards of the ‘old nations’. "

I felt like asking whether all of the raveged "old world" was just left behind to decay in radioactivity (which would be a massive waste) or if the USH was doing some repopulation projects or whatever.

Good thing that I waited with this question.

 

“How’s this for a Great Misstep?~” she said, chuckling." In hindsight it's kinda obvious that Delta would make that joke, yet I didn't thought of it before at all.

 

Maybe I should withhold this question just as much as the one answered in my first quote of this chapter but still: "Isn't the whole time-dilation thing even necessary at this point? With everyone stuck in Paradise anyway does Delta win anything with it?



Author's Response:

Oh thank you, there was a typo in that quote I now fixed in the story.

I think those questions may be answered as you read further in the story. I don't mind you asking them, but I wouldn't want to spoil anything before you're done, of course!

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