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Date: December 09 2020 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 26: Tournament Finale

Who would've thought that Delta knew Fall Guys? Wasn't that a little before her time? :D

Jokes aside, interesting set of chapters, except Delta's cruelty, it was quite the departure from the story so far, (granted we had the Make/Break-Landia chapters) but if you've the luxury of an omnipotent main character you can do anything you want of course.

With just minimal rework this three chapters could work as a standalone story called "Fall and Die,Guys", which proves that you did the concept well.



Author's Response:

Ha, yeah I wanted a sort of obstacle course challenge bit at a point for the story. I'm happy you liked the concept!

Also yes, you kind of get the idea of her luxury: she holds the power and is doing what she pleases.

Thanks for continuing to read by the way. I'm pleased you seem to be enjoying things thus far

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