Date: January 25 2021 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 2, Week 1: Welcome Class
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Author's Response:
Hehe thanks! When the next chapter releases I'd love to hear what your favourite part(s) has been so far!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2020 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 2, Week 1: Welcome Class
Wow, this story is already amazing from chapter 1. I mean, this woman is horny and I love it. You mentioned that she can't live without a tiny man in her life, so I'm assuming she keeps at least one with her at her house or something.
That accident in the beginning was great! I was actually surprised that she managed to kill him when she tried to use Todd for pleasure. In most stories I have read, the tinies are usually a bit more durable than that, so I'm curious if Mrs Johnson improved her shrinking remote to add some density to her tiny subjects.
I like the addition of Alexis. At first, I thought she was going to be a student, but a TA makes it much more interesting. As you mentioned, you could tell she has experience and I love how she casually just swallowed that third guy. Also, the part where she teased that the third guy was a previous student was perfect. Whether it was true or not, that's the type of sexy but scary stuff I'm into.
I think I'm in love with Ms. Johnson. She carries this dominant aura around her and I think the students could sense it. Alexis seems a bit sadistic, but Ms. Johnson seems like the naughty type. I'm wondering if she will have a special "detention" session with a student one day. (If it's sexual, I would gladly misbehave to be in detention. Haha.)
Man, this is a great start to this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
The legendary TomSpeedy! Thanks very much! I don't want to give away any spoilers but I will say that I have plans/answers to most, if not all of your thoughts and assumptions thus far. I will also say that technology has improved significantly in the 5 years since we first met Ms. Johnson, but it's still far from perfect (as we saw from the trio who didn't last very long in their presence). I thought having Alexis tease Noah about the student from the previous year was a nice touch as well. It raises a few interesting questions :) I'm glad to see you have questions about Ms. Johnson and Alexis. We've only just met them and the world still has a lot to reveal (a few subtle hints to this in chapter 1) so I think you'll enjoy what's to come!
[Report This]Date: December 06 2020 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 2, Week 1: Welcome Class
really well written and great story idea! I am more a fan of unaware, but also micro shrinking or transformation, but I love dark ironic plots with ho happy endings. a one way trip through a digestieve tract is always for example a great idea, I also love butt humiliation or anal vore.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for the kind words and suggestions! I think you'll be pleasantly surprised to see quite a few of these topics show up throughout the story. Some may come later than others but a lot of the ideas I have do include some of these points. I find writing unaware scenes a fun challenge to plan and write (and read!) so I have some exciting plans and ideas for these types of chapters! Glad to have you onboard for the journey!
Date: December 06 2020 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 2, Week 1: Welcome Class
Really love what's been included in the story so far, and super excited to see where it goes! Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much and I'm glad to see you're as excited about this story as I am! I've got big plans for this story and hope to be able to keep the chapters coming consistently!