[Report This]Date: August 10 2021 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 11: Part 2
Wow! This chapter was wicked!
It's just a nonstop action thrill ride and I like it. I also liked how fast paced it was. Lots of stuff happened in this chapter so there's a lot to experience. I could only imagine what Brayden must've thought.
I didn't expect a gas chamber lol. Part of me thought she would piss or shit on him. Lol. But since this was the first thing we saw, I'm glad the fart scene was first since it was kind of an appetizer for what happens next.
I actually don't remember who Candice and Josephine were. Were they also students, because Brayden recognizes them, but I can't.
Whoa, the part where Mrs. Hulme was debating on what to do with Brexton was great. Those are some sadistic ideas. Wow. But the cage idea, wow. I've seen giantess couples use a condom to trap a tiny before, but this is the first chastity cage trap I have seen for a tiny. That's creative. Nice.
Hmm, I didn't even realize there were only 2 tiny women until this scene with Rachel. Since they are so expendable, I'm very surprised how Rachel didn't even use caution with the 2 ladies. And one of them even cracked her rib. While, it was a hot sequence, I'm still not sure why Rachel used the only 2 ladies she had for that.
I liked the next scene where Shawn literally fucks a tiny guy deep into Rachel. That's one heck of a death. It might actually be mercy compared to what happens if he was indestructible. Then he would have to face their wrath forever.
Wow, that Josephine vore scene was incredible. Loved how Rachel compared to her a cream filled donut.
Damn, the way Shawn and Rachel flirt with each is awesome. Especially when they thought a delivery guy showed up. Part of me actually wanted to see what would happen if a delivery guy actually show up. Would they invite him in, would she shrink him? They seemed very exited and Rachel even wore that sexy thong. Rachel is naughty, and I love it. If she didn't kill tinies so often, I wouldn't mind being her sex toy, haha. She just seems so horny compared to all the other giantesses and I find that amazing.
I can't believe Brayden was actually used by Rachel like that. I thought maybe he would up next and survive, or maybe he didn't get used tonight and she tells him that he is going to have some fun with her tomorrow. But the fact that Brayden got used and Alexis showing up at the last minute was crazy! Very entertaining too. If Alexis had any delays, Brayden would have probably died.
Hmm, I wonder if Alexis rescued Brody from Shelby yet. Last time we saw him, he was stuck in Shelby's shorts. I'm curious about his predicament now.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Haha well I’m glad it came across as a fast paced action thrill ride! I only have so many truly sadistic chapters in this story so I need to jam them full with as many of my ideas as I can. You were pretty close with your initial jar guess! You at least had the general region correct lol. I agree though, it was pretty tame in comparison to what followed.
So Josephine was one of the first tinies Brayden met when he was brought into Mrs. Hulme’s home (Chapter 11, Part 1). She was the one who had spent quite a while inside her home and was able to explain to Brayden how her house worked. Candice was the tall (for a tiny) blonde woman who Brayden was forced to have sex with in Chapter 10 (Part 2 or 3). Originally she was one of Jaimey’s personal tinies (purchased by her mother) but Jaimey never really liked her. Technically Jaimey still has ownership of Candice even though Mrs. Hulme has her right now. We’ll be seeing more of Candice in the future so right now she’s still sort of in her origin story phase. (Now that we’re 100,000 words into this, it’s actually becoming a mental puzzle to remember everything I’ve written haha).
Glad you appreciate some of those ideas. The part where Mrs. Hulme was brainstorming ideas was sort of my hint that these are all ideas that I would’ve liked to have included, but simply don’t have the space to write it all haha. Perhaps we’ll see a few of these ideas show up in the future or in another story. The chastity cage idea though… I don’t think I’ve ever seen that in a story or in a picture so I thought it would be pretty original and unique :) I quite enjoyed that part and it was one of the central ideas that was used to build the rest of the chapter.
I wondered the same thing about the two tiny ladies when I was writing this chapter and the conclusion that I came to is that it’s an effective way to show just who Mrs. Hulme is. Perhaps long term she should’ve kept them alive and well, but she was in the moment and wanted to use them, so she did. I like to think she’s the type of person who lives for danger and hanging on the edge. So by putting the two women in those perilous positions, it’s just a really quick way for her to get hot and bothered. Plus we’ll see in a few chapters that it really wouldn’t have mattered if she kept them alive or not (at least it won’t matter for her).
And then we really dive into the sadistic stuff with Mrs. Hulme. Indeed, this was quite a sequence of fun. Poor Josephine, just a mere cream filled donut. Although it wasn’t included in this chapter, I found it interesting to imagine what Ryatt would’ve been thinking at the moment Mrs. Hulme bit down. He had literally just came inside her (she had basically been his personal plaything for quite a while) and then she’s swallowed by the woman he worships. I do really enjoy Rachel Hulme’s character though. She’s so unlike anyone else in the story. I tried writing that last sequence with the reference to a delivery man so we’d wonder why they were getting so excited and naughty (cause I mean there are probably very few women who would answer the door in a skimpy thong lol. Granted they did JUST finish having sex so she would’ve still be buzzing). My questions were: Have they played with delivery men in the past (normal or shrunken)? Were they expecting a delivery (perhaps new tinies)? Those questions probably won’t be answered in the story, but they’re things that are sort of better if they’re left to the imagination.
There is also the question that wasn’t answered of, did Mrs. Hulme know who Brayden was? Because she really didn’t object to Alexis taking him away. She just made that subtle threat to Alexis. That question is also meant to be left unanswered, but I think we’ll be able to interpret the answer by the end of the story. It was definitely a shred-fest between Rachel and Shawn lol. In Part 1, Josephine made the comment that she thought there were about 50-100 tiny people inside their home. Then there was also a reference to them shredding 90+% of them. Kinda puts it into perspective just how crazy those two got. Brayden was actually fortunate he was one of the last and that Shawn started to cum just as he was pushed inside.
Next chapter will definitely answer your last question. I’m not expecting the next chapter to be as fast paced and wild as the last couple have been, but I think it’ll be a nice debrief. Who knows, I have one kinda fun and wild idea in mind but I may save it for a future chapter. We shall see. All the characters have sort of veered down different roads lately, so the next chapter will see those roads curve and join back together again.
We’ve seen a few chapters now with misidentities so I kinda want to explore some other ideas now. There were some kinda-sorta unaware scenes in the last few, but I still want to try my hand at writing some true unaware scenes. Those are the hardest to write, but usually have some big rewards.
Glad you’re enjoying it! I am too!