[Report This]Date: February 15 2022 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 14, Part 1: Detention
Hello again! :)
So, we get to know a difference between disposable and personal tiny. Being "personal tiny" is a rise in status one gets by chance, so IF they get this rise in status, they must work VERY HARD to keep it.
When I think about it, I cannot help but go back to question what kind of person would be safer to be around for tiny. On my list of "safe bets" are the elders and single men, provided that they're not in a hurry to get into relationship. However, I would like to add members of clergy living in celibate to that list, especially men.
I'm also kind of curious whether politics in the USA are significantly different than in real life or not. After all, prison labor is a thing there. Prisosers are working in many areas, like building highways or working in call senters for very little sums of money, and in some states, even for free. It's a huge market with a lot of profit to make. I may be wrong, but I figured that if we intoduce shrinking people into this, the only real profit it would make is a possibility to cut down on expenses for maintenance of prison buildings, since tiny people need less space. In that kind of situation, I think it's safe to assume that they would only be shrunk for their time in cells and transports. That would also require a lot of supervisors, like more obedient prisoners who are very strong at the same time. And many, MANY shrinking devices to keep the convicts in check, which would be quite an investment in itself. So, in the end, they might end up just sticking to the old ways if finances prove to be too much of a problem, because I highly doubt they would give up on prison labor in this kind of circumstances.
In conclusion, unless this universe presents some very significant changes when it comes to politics of the US, the scenatio described above would be the one that makes most sense. I'm kinda curious about your take on that.
Next, I'd like to say something about the subject of what kind of person wouldn't fare well as a personal tiny. My best bet would be a person who's serious about religious stuff when it comes to world's big religions. Also, a person with strong sense of justice combined with some kind of mental disorder.
If I had to mentioned who would be best qualified, I'd say submissive pervert. They would be most likely to obey every order.
Looking forward to the next part of this chapter!
Have a nice week! :)
Author's Response:
These are all very good comments and luckily I think I’ve thought about and have answers to everything. Some of which are only working answers though considering we’re apparently designing a pretty complex world.
So I consider being a personal tiny a very very good thing. I picture it as being almost equivalent to marriage. On a scale of 1 to 10 where 1 is your enemy, 5 is a really good friend, and 10 is lifelong partner in marriage, being a personal tiny is an 8 or 9. It’s someone you love very much and would do anything for. Think of your most favourite pet in the whole world. You would do practically anything for it right? Within reason of course (and that’s the gap to marriage). So I would say that “work” is an interesting word because if you love someone to the point of wanting to marry them, of course you need to continue to “work” on your relationship, but it shouldn’t feel like work. It should feel like something that you just naturally want to do. So to answer your other comment, I would maybe suggest that a veterinarian or someone who studies and cherishes life would be a worthy candidate. However, if you form a deep bond with someone, you should feel entirely safe in their presence as well. You don’t marry someone with the intention of stabbing them in the back (unless you’re crazy lol). Now I would also say there are people who abuse their power over their tiny person, thinking they deserve more. But that’s just like abusive partners in our real world.
So disposables… These are probably the most interesting characters in the world because their backstory is so complex. Because there are so many interesting ethical and legal decisions behind them, the story behind these people will probably be forever developing. Financially, I picture (like you said) a whole bunch of savings in land, labour, and goods to house them compared to housing real life prisoners. But I also picture there being two other major incentives. One being an arguably safer world because they can’t escape (they’re teeny tiny). But another is that they sell for a boatload of money. I briefly mentioned in the story (Chapter 1 or maybe in A Night With Ms. Johnson… can’t remember) that celebs and the rich buy up these tiny disposables like crazy just because they’re incredibly fun to use. They basically turn into slaves. The ones who are masterful in bed or in the kitchen or in school are highly sought after. And the ones who aren’t can still serve some rather interesting purposes.
Politics wise, we’re definitely building towards a very different world that was sparked by a virus that was far more lethal than the one we’re currently facing. It sort of gave this world a fresh start. My goal with the story has sort of turned from “let’s just write a fun story” to “let’s write a fun story and see if we can’t present some interesting thinking points too”. I’ve been chatting about the story end and the world with one of my peer reviewers a fair bit and I think I’ve got a pretty interesting world in mind. Definitely different than ours… but similar in a lot of ways too. Think “more extreme” in certain aspects. By the end of the story, I’m hoping to create a bit of a “what if” scenario that gets you thinking. Sort of, “what if the world did more of…” I’m still working on the details so I can’t really get too far into it yet, but I’ll leave you with the word “optimize”.
Submissive pervert is probably the real winner in all of this lol. I think most people would probably cherish one of those… I’d say the most dangerous person to be around as a tiny person is anyone horny haha. Whether it be a male or female, I don’t like the tiny’s chances unless that person has a serious reason not to harm them. After all, we’ve already seen what happens when a horny Ms. Johnson gets a hold of a group of disposables she has no connection to…
Date: February 15 2022 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 14, Part 1: Detention
welcome back. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
More shall come!
[Report This]Date: February 15 2022 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 14, Part 1: Detention
Happy Valentine’s Day to you too!
And I’m glad we got another update! Detention time. Giantess detention is usually when things get spicy and so far, it seems like the fun is just getting started!
There’s 2 things that made me excited this chapter. First was when Mrs. Johnson was circling the chairs where the students sat in.
Part of me thought maybe she would sit in one of the chairs, but a student would be between her legs on the chair and he would hope she doesn’t close her legs on him. Lol. Who knows, maybe one of the guys could share a story like that since they are grouped together now.
Second is the announcement for the girls and Mrs. Hulme to join the same classroom. If this is one big reunion, I’m so looking forward to it! Is Mrs. Johnson going to pair up the boys to the women?
So there’s 7 girls from the announcement, then add Mrs. Hulme and then Mrs. Johnson herself. That’s 9 women and there’s 5 boys in the classroom. Now we need 1 more woman. Ah. Alexis. Perfect. Maybe each boy gets shared between 2 women. Lol, a little too much, right? Sounds too crazy to be true. However, it does give me some ideas.
Imagine Mrs. Hulme reuniting with Brayden again. Or Calvin with Allison. That would be kinda funny.
I’m really interested in this whole “don’t be a disposable, be a personal tiny man”. Being a personal tiny sex toy also seems pretty close to what Mrs. Johnson is implying so part of me wonders if that’s in store for one of these guys, haha.
The thong exercise felt a bit random, but I guess it shows how weak they are compared to Mrs. Johnson’s muscular disposables.
Also, the teeth task right now seems kinda random too. I think Mrs. Johnson is stalling or something. There’s gotta be a catch. Maybe some mouth play is coming up. Idk, but I have a feeling that Mrs. Johnson’s tongue is going to have some fun.
Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I love how random keeps popping up in this review lol. It about sums it up too. To be honest, the actual tasks the boys are faced with don’t really have a lot of meaning. They’re really just meant to be fun, interesting things to break up the story. Ideas that when you really stop to think about and ask the question, “what if I were in their tiny shoes” you’d probably say “that would be wild”. To me, the idea of even just being tasked with having to try to remove your teacher’s thong at only an inch or two tall is quite the thought. A simple thing, but something that you would never get the chance to do in real life. I picture Ms. Johnson beating home the idea of “being a disposable equals a sure, probably cruel death. But being a person tiny man probably equals a life of purpose and love” with this detention. Hinting that had the boys not been discovered, they probably would’ve remained disposables and been wiped out. Ms. Johnson ultimately wants to build men worthy of being personals and not disposables.
Although a very fun idea, it may come as a bit of a disappointment that Ms. Johnson vs. the girls won’t be directly shown. I do have a few reasons for it… First being, after what Ms. Johnson is about to do to the girls, the girls will probably be pretty edgy. Second being the story is meant to focus more so on the boys. Third being, a meeting between the boys and the girls will eventually go down, but on an equal playing field. And actually, as I’m writing this, there’s sort of a fourth. Although Ms. Johnson is teaching the boys everything they need to know about women, she’s also building up the power that women hold in the world. So if she shows the boys what she does to punish the girls, it kind of takes away a bit of that. The boys will get to see some of the aftermath though.
I do have another Brayden/Mrs. Hulme interaction planned, though it may or may not be directly between them… perhaps through someone Mrs. Hulme values. Mrs. Hulme still has quite a few interesting moments left in the story.
It’s going to be very interesting to see how well I can pull everything together by the end of the story lol. It’s a personal pet peeve to read a story and then have unanswered questions besides just the theme questions designed by the author. Same goes for TV shows. So by the end I’m hoping to have everything pretty well wrapped up. I like to think I know how I’m going to do that :) I’ve got a running list of questions to answer but I suspect I’m going to need to go back through our review discussions someday and pick out everything that’s still outstanding. It’s a work in progress and you’re all my guinea pigs lol.