Date: December 07 2020 8:35 PM Title: Devotion
I live your story. Steph od a wonderful character, and I think It perfectly shows her dominance on Całe. Great job and I waiting for more
Author's Response:
Awesome!
THANK YOU! I am glad you like it! More to come today!
Thank you for reading!
Date: December 07 2020 2:52 PM Title: Devotion
I've never reviewed a story this much I think. It's so good! Keep that slow pace towards submission/domination. I wonder if Caleb will have a moment of realization when he'll no longer be big enough to escape Steph's rule, whether he likes or not :)
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
I am glad to hear that! Makes me happy to know you enjoy it that much!
Caleb is on his own mental journey during all of this which adds to the fire:)
Yes, the slow build of Dom/sub is one of my more fave writing styles. its almost hard not to progress faster right now.
Date: December 07 2020 11:36 AM Title: Devotion
I LOVE the direction that this story is going in so far. I think it would be really great if when he starts to shrink a bit smaller later on, that the mentality of keeping him as a pet/slave really sets in. Even going as far as to get a cage to keep him in, and starting to sell all of his belongings since he won't need them anymore anyway ;)
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! Good things to note! didnt think of the selling aspect.
The pet/slave mentality is 100% going to set in more for caleb and Steph as he gets smaller but there will be some twists yet :)