Date: December 09 2020 10:06 AM Title: Who Is Life
Yesss!!
I loved the intimate action between Steph and Caleb in this chapter, it was also nice to see her reassuring her of her genuine care for him.
The imagery and description were again top notch, and seeing her tell him to have fun at her feet and worked his cock on her bare soles was so hot!
(is it bad to say I wouldn't mind if Chase eventually left, and it was just Steph and Caleb ? XD)
And her lubing up his cock with her spit was a great mental image too. Such a great read, the entire chapter.
Am hoping for some more intimiate one on one time in future.
Maybe Caleb overworked himself and passed out?
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!
I am glad you enjoyed this chapter. I stayed up prettly late working on it.
I wanted to make the scene feel as real as possible with the decriptions, hopefully my writing skills will improve to make later scenes even better!
That was a thought as well, but as i have the story planned Chase will be sticking around for the forseeable future.
I thought of that one off the brim of my hat so I am glad it was well recieved. I was just thinking to my self writing it like, Damn, that would be hot as hell in that scenario.
Stay tuned to see what happens next then ;)
Thank you again for reading!
Date: December 09 2020 8:52 AM Title: Who Is Life
I've always loved the "alternate world" social media idea, so seeing it here was awesome! I've done it quite a few times in my own work so it was really cool to see it made so well here. And Steph really has him under her control. I love how she can see easily remove any doubts he has without ever knowing if she's actually staying the truth or not. It sounds like she is, for now... but I know that the smaller people get, the harder it is to consider them as equal in size fantasies ;)
Don't overwork yourself! We're all looking forward to what happens next but don't burn out on us - we can wait a bit more if needed :)
Author's Response:
Yes! Bringing in the aspect of social media really helps fill in the world sourrounding the characters and what they are exposed to daily!
Thats what i was shooting for, Steph could be evil good, good evil, evil neutral, or is she the only hope for caleb to survive?
Haha yes, i am putting chains on these fingers to try and balance the levels of domination!
Thanks again!