[Report This]Date: May 20 2022 10:32 AM Title: Gringham
Again, another fantasy story I wouldn't read in a normal situation but, as it was written by you, I had to read, already knowing it would be good material.
And omg, Charlotte is so gentle and caring! I could call her 'the monster that isn't', as she eats people just because of her nature, is her to blame? She's even considering his human friend's lead and swallowing just criminals and other bad people!
And the interaction with Gringham village can make a whole turn of events in a way that she can lead other nagas to understand humans as more than food, despite their instincts... very interesting, and my favorite story of yours up to now!
Author's Response:
Thank you for another kind review Milla. You give me too much credit, though. My content is average, at best. I'm slowly getting in my head and may stop writing for awhile here within the week.
Oh, and if you come up with any ideas for a chapter for this, reach out to me again.
Charlotte was one of my favorite characters I've written in awhile. Making her mute and trying to prove her intentions without words was a challenge I gave myself.
Meeting her while she was still young made it easy to be her friend, but I wonder if she would have spared the protagonist if he had met her any later in life. She didn't exactly have a great introduction to humans when those bandits attacked her. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for another kind review Milla. You give me too much credit, though. My content is average, at best. I'm slowly getting in my head and may stop writing for awhile here within the week.
Oh, and if you come up with any ideas for a chapter for this, reach out to me again.
Charlotte was one of my favorite characters I've written in awhile. Making her mute and trying to prove her intentions without words was a challenge I gave myself.
Meeting her while she was still young made it easy to be her friend, but I wonder if she would have spared the protagonist if he had met her any later in life. She didn't exactly have a great introduction to humans when those bandits attacked her. :)
[Report This]Date: December 21 2020 2:15 PM Title: Gringham
Okay, I love how gentle this naga is! I knew vore was going to be in this story, but I love how this chapter didn't have any. (Tbh I only like the interactions between tinies/humans/normL-sized things and the creatures in Felarya, not the vore part) It was so smart for you to have her spell help us with the arrows that was surprising. I hope I see more chapters like this.
Author's Response:
I'll certainly try to keep things interesting if possible, I have a strong imagination sometimes. I also love gentle interactions between small folks and Giantess types who have so much power yet don't use it unless they have to.
There's probably going to be more vore eventually, I like those parts after all. So far Charlotte is set up to have to eat someone about once a month just to maintain her health. I'm trying to use Gringham to prove not all humans are evil, which will cause her to be unwilling to eat non-enemies.
I also sympathize with you, I don't like feet content but there's so many good stories out there with that in it.