Great story. I wouldn’t mind another one set in this world from Sarah’s point of view 

or maybe a man that was caught and sold by the bounty hunters. Is there a way I could commission it?

Sarah may have gone through Warren's medical records and done some investigation to discover he was the wealthy descendant of his father's estate. Do you think she's doing this for Irina so she can extort money from them later? Or does she simply like playing with new favorites and making matches for couples she wants to change and add to her list of playmates? I have no idea.

Is there a correlation between the size of a man and when he began drinking contaminated milk? It seemed that Eddie was smaller because he had been afflicted the longest and hadn't sought medical attention? Does this suggest that Warren, assuming he was 3'6" when he began milking, is unlikely to shrink more than 3 feet?

My question is whether or not Sarah would inform Irina that she saved him, in the midst of being arrested by male hunters, when he ran away. It's possible that Sarah will corrupt Irina if she attempts to be gentle with him, encouraging her to use force and start physically controlling him in order for him to cooperate and not run away from her.

The designer of the renderings of nurse Sarah while she was muscular but nevertheless human-sized in Jeff Stintum's Training of Jeff Stintum is unknown to me, nor is her whereabouts. Do you have any idea who's been doing Sarah fan art or commissions?

Your story has such a great premise!