Reviewer: VivettaVenray Signed
Date: September 16 2020
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
What a phenomenal story. An instant favorite and easily one of the best size/power stories I've read ever. I'm not just saying that cause the content matter and themes are to my liking (which they totally are).
The pacing is perfect. The prose is sublime. Every description has the right amount of succinctness to leave the perfect amount to the reader's imagination. The world-building is mixed in seamlessly. Annabelle is a very interesting character you just love to read about. Stuff like how she views human communication was just an amazing tone setter and character development wrapped in one.
I can't emphasize the quality enough. Chapter 5 in particular had so many things going on at once, but you managed to convey the chaos while keeping the writing to such a high standard.
I'm unable to list everything I liked though, else this review would be huge! Rest assured, this whole story is professional in quality if not beyond. A true mastercraft!
Author's Response: Very happy to hear you enjoyed! It kinda just came to me when I was reading Nanomachines like, hmm... this but with energy being ladies would be kinda neat to write. From there the inspiration kinda just took off. Definitely got a lot bigger then I'm used to writing these days in prose but it was super fun to do!