A man wakes up one morning to discover he has shrunk down to a few inches tall. Her wife must go to work so she leaves him in charge of her mother. This scares him a bit.
Really enjoyed this and John the small, hope to see more of your work.
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After a recent development disorder leaves him much shorter than he used to be, Reese has become academically demotivated, and worries he won't receive his diploma in his final few weeks of high school. But his sister, a recent college graduate who's twice as tall as him, moves back home. Her arrival sparks a change in Reese's attitude to start treating his family - and particularly his amazon of a sister - a lot nicer than anyone would reasonably expect. Eventually his sister realizes she might be able to save him from failing his senior year, and Reese does his best to more than thank her in return.
There was some kind of spam attack on the website which is why it says I have over a thousand reviews. The moderators deleted the fakes but I guess the site still says I have a bunch. The real number is like 250ish or something.
This story needs to go on hold until we get a few more chapters in how to train your father, 😆 🤣 😂
i understand how you feel! but this one is only a few chapters from the end, so i wanted to rush to finish this one first while still updating the father one every sunday. otherwise i'd have two stories that wont be finished for several more months if i gave them equal attention :P
Harry Cooper has it all - beautiful wife and daughters, flashy car, large house and a successful job. What happens when the world begins to grow around him and Harry loses everything? Will his family and colleagues look after him, or will they revel in their new found power over him? I think, perhaps, you can guess.
Love this story so far its my favorite scenario. Been trying to review all week but for some reason couldn't log in and had to set up new account. I love where the story is going and hope it continues. I think a cool twist would be mom and the girls planning a trip and getting grandma (dads mom) to baby sit for the weekend. Would love to see a BBW grandma. Keep up the good work.
Inspired by many of my favorite stories, and by current events.
A virus is spreading across the globe, one that shrinks men, and makes womens breasts grow.
This story follows a young man living with his mother and sister during these times.
After amount of requests I got, I decided to make a kofi, and I will prioritize writing based on donations. However, I will continue writing regardless if I go donations or not and eventually write spin offs in the same universe following other people.
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Love this story so far. It has the potential to check all my favorite check boxes, brother/sister grandpa/ granddaughter, grandma/ grandson, mother/son, father daughter. I do usually prefer the shrinkee to be at least 4-6 inches but find that usually doesn't impact the story. I'd like to see some lack of awareness among grandma and mom as far as the shrinkees seeing up skirts, down tops, up towels. Love the writing style and excited to see what lies ahead for our little friends and their busty owners
I guess I should have read chapter 5 before commenting, loved the unawareness of the boobs in the doll house. Hope mom gets a little raunchier. Love this story hope you keep it going for a while.
I think a direction to go in could be mom finds out about John being given to Sarah for the day and decides she cant let John out of her sight. He now has to go everywhere with her. And not all of her clothes have pockets. After some after work drinks she starts to think about the fun to be had with her little man, while remaining gentle and caring but meeting her needs also.
I was hoping busty grandma and shrunken grandpa were going to show up after they were mentioned. Maybe grandma is a more trustworthy babysitter.
I originally mentioned them just to get the mom out of the house during the initial shrinking. I havnt really read much with grandma interactions so I wouldnt know how to do it justice. I put my email on the newest chapter, feel free to email me if you have good examples or tips, and Ill try to add it. I also plan on adding one off side story chapters that could include those kinds of things with random people in the world.
A young man is living under quarantine with his mother, and decides it’s been too long since he’s seen his girlfriend. His overprotective mother doesn’t quite agree with this when she catches him trying to sneak out. When he insists on his freedom, the maternal instinct to keep him safe kicks in, and she decides to put her foot down… literally.
I hope tye foot stuff leads to her satisfying other urges. Great set up I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Sorry man, but this is going to be an almost entirely foot-centered story.
I hope you still enjoy it, though!
Marcus Tilden, a single father since his daughter's birth, gets laid off from his job one day after shrinking to less than a foot tall. Depressed about his sudden height loss and doubly miserable after becoming unemployed, he feels hopeless about finding a new career and being able to continue providing for him and his daughter. But after the two of them start spending more time together, he starts to develop a kind of job in itself just by serving his daughter and doing his best to keep her happy.
I like the mention of Marcus's mom being around. Leaves options for the occasional interactions with her as dwindles down, even for a whole spin off down the line if Marcus were to change hands.
lol yep that is 100% why i included it. she'll be popping by later on
Great chapter, I would loved to have seen her catch him in the laundry basket and I hope that is some foreshadowing lol. Would have missed that great conversation at the table though if he was still stuck in the basket. Can't wait to see how the night goes.
glad you liked it!
Definitely my favorite chapter so far. Loved twister. Would not be disappointed to see a rematch hahaha. Last couple foot massages had her with socks on, would personally like to see this with the socks off, maybe because Jessie complains she can't feel it as much with socks. Love the description of the shorts my absolutely favorite, Im always buying my wife cheeky shorts sexier than a thong to me any day of the week.
yeah her socks are comin off eventually lol dw, also got one of your suggestions coming in next chapter
Hahaha, I guess what I mean by action is more physical content between them. When she hugged him and lifted him off the ground, I think that was the first time. Would love to see a bit more of that kind of stuff is all. Lol
oh yeah dw its definitely coming
Story is more of a slow burn than I am usually into, but so well written I'm really into it. Im curious will there be more action coming up, like will she use her size to over power him at any point. I don't see her dominating him to be mean but could see a for his own good scenario unfold. How small will he get, will we see him hand held at any point.
"Im curious will there be more action coming up"
nope no more action for the rest of the story, everything else from here on out will just be talking 😁
im kidding ofc, i actually still have one of your ideas written down and set to come up here in a few chapters (day 16 i think)
That was probably my favorite chapter. The hug as great, would love to read it from her perspective. Cant wait for the next one.
yeah I know I don't show other character's thoughts other than Marcus but I'll sometimes describe what they're thinking so I sorta feel like I can get multiple perspectives that way
Story is definitely a slow burn but is written so well that I'm hooked. I would like to see a little more suggestive material. I think some interactions that would be good would be dad doing the laundry and picking up laundry from his daughters room. Would be fun to picture the messy room as he navigates his way through huge shoes and piles clothes adding to the laundry basket. Large leggings and shorts and then very large bras and undies. Would live to see tye daughter come in while he's staring at the large underwear before putting it in the basket. Would like to see how she responds, does she say something, is she mad or does she think it's funny, or does she say nothing and just take note mentally.
Down the line when he is smaller I think a cool way to move things would be for her to catch him masturbating. She could be mad at first, but maybe she the realizes that he has needs and she is the only female he can be around other than her friends. Because she will not trust him with anyone else. So maybe she cuts him some slack and throws him a peek every now and then.
Just my thoughts.
Story is definitely a slow burn but is written so well that I'm hooked. I would like to see a little more suggestive material. I think some interactions that would be good would be dad doing the laundry and picking up laundry from his daughters room. Would be fun to picture the messy room as he navigates his way through huge shoes and piles clothes adding to the laundry basket. Large leggings and shorts and then very large bras and undies. Would live to see tye daughter come in while he's staring at the large underwear before putting it in the basket. Would like to see how she responds, does she say something, is she mad or does she think it's funny, or does she say nothing and just take note mentally.
Down the line when he is smaller I think a cool way to move things would be for her to catch him masturbating. She could be mad at first, but maybe she the realizes that he has needs and she is the only female he can be around other than her friends. Because she will not trust him with anyone else. So maybe she cuts him some slack and throws him a peek every now and then.
Just my thoughts.
yeah lots of people are suggesting him cleaning her room and stumbling upon her clothes, so ill definitely be putting that in. if not the next chapter which i already started, then the one after. thanks for your review and ideas!
Oh I agree, I wasn't suggesting that she only wear thongs and I doubt the girl who said that to me really does. I just liked the visual I got from the statement it was funny but also suggestive. Regarding your story I pictured him struggling to fold regular sized underwear and the daughter laughing and maybe suggesting thongs might be more manageable for him. Or him coming across a thong and being embarrassed and or disgusted and her joking saying her ass swallows everything up anyway, maybe followed by a so he better look out lol.
yeah stuff to keep in mind. i like the humiliating dialogue aspects to my stories so i might do that at least. guess ill see what happens
I like the Laundry Ideas. Would work on several levels the embarrassment of collecting the her dirty laundry such as underwear then maybe struggling to fold things as his daughter would like especially as he gets smaller. On the thongs I remember a friend of mine telling me she has to wear thongs because her ass swallows everything. Turned me on to know end. Would be fun tonsee dads reaction to such a statement. Im sure she will think of other fun ways to give her dad purpose and for him to earn his keep.
lol im aware that some girls only wear thong sized, but thats not the experience of most girls, even thicker ones. not sure if i'd incorporate that aspect but i'll keep it in mind, thanks for reviewing :)
Great start. Is he going to get smaller. I'd love to see him get to the 5 to 7 inch mark. Hope to see more soon.
yeah but thats waaaayy down the line. after around 20 chapters he'll be 8 inches and then eventually down to 1
Maybe my favorite story to date after making a man out of him. My kind of GTS. After first chapter Inwas like where can this go and it kept getting better. Making videos was genius.
