Nice. I can’t wait to see what happens

This is a real fun story. I like all the characters and dynamics that each one has. James trying to figure things out and it causes him to lean on Carol more which is the source of shrinking. Excellent!

I do hope that the solution or attempts at a solution is Carol breastfeeding him or if he gets really small, to put him in her womb

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Yeah the curse is a vicious cycle, if she were an evil witch he'd be in some real trouble!

It is good to see that Natalie is becoming more aware of incidents like this with Tim and Aunt Julia but not the full scope. The accident she has with him really helps Julia's case that there can be accidents. If there is constant accidents, there might be some worries that Aunt Julia is doing something. Aunt Julia will have to think of something to get Natalie back on her side. Either by blackmailing Tim with photos, or torturing him to be quiet. She can also fabricate photos of Tim in dangerous places and say that Tim keeps putting himself in those situations. A lot of different options of how Julia keeps getting away with it.

It is great to see a yoga scene where the tiny person is put into tight places on woman's body during a workout.

Author's Response:

     So, one of the things that I addressed in my recent revisions was Natalie’s obliviousness towards what’s going on at home while she’s at work, along with Tim’s hesitancy to speak up about his mistreatment. I tried to address this and play up the blackmail aspect of the plot in this latest chapter, while still leaving Julia room to continue having her fun, but I also know that if I want to keep story somewhat believable, I will have to make some adjustments to the plot moving forward to ensure everything stays a secret. I think the torture route is the one I will ultimately take, but there’s also some gentle interactions in future chapters that I want to preserve as well, so I’ll have to make sure I get the right balance.

Aunt Julia really does have to make this afternoon enjoyable. She isn't going to have this chance again. (unless she steals some of the shrinking chemical.) I think that she should put him inside her vagina again. She knows how amazing it feels so she would want to do it again. Maybe keep him in there for a little bit while she does other things. Maybe Mckenzie comes by for Tim but can't find him because he is in Aunt Julia's pussy. He struggles inside giving Aunt Julia pleasure as Mckenzie searches. Mckenzie won't be able to search there on Aunt Julia. If not that way, I still think that the pussy is good. Maybe the nipple before, Aunt Julia forces Tim to cum into her nipple before putting him in her pussy. Just some idea rambling. I just think she needs to satisfy some sexual craving before Tim returns to normal

Author's Response:

Well, your scenario is certainly intriguing. Not sure it’s exactly what I want to add to this story for the end, but certainly a scenario that I will integrate into a future story, so thanks for the suggestion.

I think the rest of the afternoon is going to be eluded to in an afterthought, but I can certainly see Julia using Tim for one last “self-gratification” session. 😉

I would have to say that McKenzie is the best option to find Tim. If Sandra found Tim, she would most likely return him right away to Aunt Julia. Viewing the adult as the responsible one and not a shrunken teenager. McKenzie would be the sort of person Tim would want to find him. McKenzie would listen to Tim and would consider Tim's plight from the get go. She would believe that Aunt Julia is torturing him. Tim is young like her so she would feel incline to help him. But since she is a teenager, she views herself just as capable as an adult for any adult thing. Upon hearing the stories Tim tells hers, she could want to do the same thing as Aunt Julia did. Maybe asking him to walk over her body from boobs, butt, and pussy to please her. She might not be as rough as Aunt Julia but gets the image across that at his shrunken state that people might view him as a sexual toy. He decides to come back to his house after that. Aunt Julia finds him and Tim tells her what happen. Aunt Julia is fine with it as it is a weapon in her arsenal to use against Tim. With Aunt Julia making it sound like he visit the neighbor girl to bang, all of Tim's complaints against Aunt Julia don't sound rationale. It makes Aunt Julia sound good trying to help him and him just trying to have fun at Aunt Julia's expense. Thus, giving Aunt Julia a whole day to do whatever she wants with him and Natalie will not listen to his pleas. Even after the ordeal. I believe Mckenzie is the best choice for that. Or building a relationship between the two after the week is done.

Author's Response: I do like the idea of a relationship building between a Shrinkie and a giantess character; it’s something I’m definitely planning for my upcoming novel. Giving the main character some kind of outlet (gentle giantess) is something I am a fan of, even if they’re technically cheating on a significant other (I.e. My “With Great Power…” story). I also like my gentle giantess characters to be nice, yet playful, even if it gets the tiny person into trouble.

I have totally forgot about the dad. Aunt Julia will have to think of defense with him. Julia could get away with it if Natalie says there was no issue or shrinkage. But how long will that last without Natalie slipping up. Aunt Julia would have to worry about a third person going after her. Else she decides it is best to pack up and leave after this week.

Author's Response:

     Well, one of the things you’ll find in my stories is that there is a lack of giant male characters, primarily because I like to keep my shrunken encounters strictly between a tiny male and one or more giant female(s). The two boys in this story are the closest I’ve come to having giant male characters in my stories, although I have considered adding some giant couples encounters in other stories I’m outlining.

     For now, the father in this story is going to remain absent except for a few offhanded mentions. 

That was a fun adventure of Tim seeing how dangerous the world is out there. Also how hard it is to be found if lost. Julia would have to find tighter confines to make sure he doesn't escape like this time. Maybe placing him in her bra right on her nipple so she feels him.

It would be interesting to see if the neighbors catch on, either Sandra or Mckenzie. Especially Mckenzie. I think that if Mckenzie finds him, Aunt Julia can talk her into giving him back, but after Mckenzie has some fun with him.

Author's Response: This chapter definitely leaves some room for different scenarios involving the Peterson women, and I thought long and hard about how I wanted things to proceed over the next couple of days; although, to be honest, I’m still not entirely sure what I ultimately want. I want things to make sense, so I think I may leave it up to my readers.

Great chapter. Liked him being located on Aunt Julia's as she went to sunbath.

I do wonder if the neighbor girl will have any part in this?

Author's Response:

Yes, this chapter was inspired by a combination of a picture I posted on Deviant Art, and a personal fantasy of being trapped in a beautiful woman’s cleavage while she’s sunbathing.

In actuality, I retroactively added in the ending to this chapter after brainstorming the events that will occur later on in the week, so definitely expect to see the neighbor girl again 😉

Thanks for the review!

This story looks to be amazing. The aunt that wants to tease and use her body with a tiny person but also know it is her nephew. She wants to fulfill her fantasies while watching him with care at the same time. Also knowing that her sister will come back later. What can she get away with without Tim telling on her. Or will Tim start to like this sort of attention his aunt is giving him. I hope she gives him all the experience that mature woman would know how to feel good.

Author's Response:

Well, Julia certainly has some plans in mind for having fun with her tiny nephew, and she’ll discover a few more as the week goes on.

Tim, however, is certainly not fond of his treatment, and is going to do whatever he can to stop it, even tattling to his mother. Of course, Julia will have to find a way to keep her little nephew quiet, even if that means taking drastic measures.

Fun story. I love how Lemon decided to use Callum for her video. The way she teased him before swallowing him. I wonder what Penelope would think if she saw her brother hitting it off with her lamia.

Author's Response: I imagine Penelope is already a little frazzled by the whole thing, but eventually she'd be like "oh I should have known, you always were into weird stuff!"