This was a really good read, I finished the whole thing from start to end in less than two evening. I really like how you describe the emotional anguish and moral dilemmas the characters face. I could also see how your writing skills improved with each chapter. There are some minor spelling and grammar errors (e.g. "fowl" instead of "foul") but they didn't detract from the story.

But most of all I loved Justine. She's both very sexy and very believable (including her nascent vore fetish). I think that, all things considered, she's actually a very kind and forgiving person; she has done horrible things and has shown the darker side of her character, but I'd also say she has a lot more self-control and compassion than most other people would have were they in the same place, seeing how much injustice she has suffered. It's a nice change from all those stories where the the protagonist almost instantly loses any sort of moral compass and becomes like Godzilla after she grows.

Would be about time for Justine to get some clothes, though; it must really suck to sleep naked out in the open when one is her size.