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Summary:

Desmond, a vertically challenged young man, goes away to college and upon arrival, meets a outrageously tall volleyball girl. The two hit it off right away, but soon, Desmond begins to get smaller. Day by day, he loses more and more height, and he has no idea what is causing it. He has quirky adventures with college girls much taller than him, and he tries to adjust to his new circumstances. 

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Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Gentle, Maternal, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: The Slow Shrink Chronicles
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 267899 Read Count: 519244
[Report This] Published: August 01 2019 Updated: November 13 2023
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: July 23 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please tell me he's not going to be an idiot and leave the cellphone on...

Summary:

Chad and Pamela McCallum had everything they could hope for. The two formerly single parents had met, fell in love and tied the knot, merging their family's together in to one, mostly cohesive unit. Life was good!

But soon after returned home from a tropical paradise vacation, tragedy struck the newlyweds. Only a couple days back, Chad mysteriously shrinks to an inch in height, leaving everyone confused, shocked, and uncertain for the future. Will Chad and Pamela be able to cope with this "big" change in their lives?

One things for certain... the honeymoon is over.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Legwear, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50594 Read Count: 220373
[Report This] Published: March 31 2021 Updated: April 16 2024
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed half-star
Date: April 16 2024 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 (c)

Nice to see this stuff, in a fic with the gentle tag. It's almost like it would fit some OTHER tag like, I don't know, slave?

Fix your tags.

Summary:

Jerry finds himself the guinea pig of an experiment at a friend's party. He only wanted to impress his ex-girlfriend; the stunning, sexually assertive Jennifer, but when the experiment goes horribly wrong, embarrassing him in front of his friends, he is certain he has dashed any chance of winning back her love.

He may be wrong yet.


Categories: Humiliation, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124581 Read Count: 142053
[Report This] Published: April 14 2021 Updated: June 16 2021
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: May 21 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The State of the World

Uh, is this gonna get better anytime soon? Tags had gentle, but so far all there is humiliation and abuse, and now it has extra drama.



Author's Response:

The tone of the story is set to be fairly consistent, including the humiliation stuff

Summary:

After suffering a complete defeat at the hands of the Dark Lord, Shute is cast towards the world below, but there's a catch-- he's been stripped of his size! Will he ever recover? He's going to need some help in a world not meant for someone his size, if he plans to.

 

Previously titled as "Recovery"


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Crush, Fantasy, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15407 Read Count: 13668
[Report This] Published: May 31 2021 Updated: June 09 2021
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: June 02 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Encounter with a Demon

Mean is not the word I would use. Unhinged would be more accurate.

His reaction was also completely forced, which made no sense at all besides you wanting the story to take that turn.

 

Mind you, I'm not here to dive into the intricacies of a character's psyche, but this isn't good characterization.



Author's Response:

Unhinged hmm? I suppose I'm fine with that, as I don't want her to necessarily be mentally stable.

I just sit and type without any care, it's all just improv. But I'm going to roll with it, reactions don't always have to have a purpose or catalyst when someone's messed up in the head.

I do, somewhat, agree with you that this isn't good characterization, but I'm not a proper author, and on most of my entries and replies I'll readily admit that. Thank you for reading and reviewing, and leaving constructive feedback, but I'm unlikely to ever truly improve I think. 

Should you wish to continue to keep up with the story as it updates, keep in mind it's very likely gonna be cringe to read through.

Summary:

Tired of the giants' supremacy, Rennard, Milton, and Henry decide to strike back. Not trying anything too malicious, the three have a harmless prank in mind. However, they quickly learn how much things can spiral out of control, especially when giants are involved.

 

Set in a medieval style fantasy setting full of magic. Some plot, some action, lots of erotica. If you don't like feet stuff, this might not be for you, but the other tags make plenty of strong appearances (beginning of chapter 1 contains more specific directions on which chapters to look out for if you want things like insertion/mouth play).


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131883 Read Count: 132845
[Report This] Published: June 12 2021 Updated: July 02 2023
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 02 2023 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 - Farewell

Did she at least release the whole slavery contract thing? Pretty shitty of her if she didn't after all that talk about redemption.


"Overall, the whole story contains a bunch of ideas I couldn't delve into deeply because the story limited it, so I explore them in different stories."

More accurate to say that the story dragged on at parts and lost some cohesion because the plot swerved left and right at points, rather than say the story limited it. If you want to explore different scenarios like that, why not make a one-shot story thread?



Summary:

This is the story of Nick, a 25 year old man that was trying to improve for his girlfriend Maddy, but he may end up being the man she desires when her wish gets fulfilled.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Gentle, Giantess, Couples, Maternal, Slow Size Change, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 186126 Read Count: 269616
[Report This] Published: August 22 2021 Updated: April 27 2024
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed star
Date: February 24 2024 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Gaslighting. Really?


Author's Response:

I know it´s not the sweetest, but they had to do what they had to... but it won´t be for too long ;D

Summary:

 

Three years have passed since Maya found her little lover Six after the carnage she brought upon Saint Minervas hospital. Since then the worlds changed considerably, and only continues to do so as new key players in these changes make themselves known. With a new lover by Mayas side, along with her beloved Six, the world is ready for yet another change. How that change will affect them remains to be seen.


Reviews and critiques are greatly appreciated, not just by myself but by all writers.


If you wanna see where the series began you can check out my first story on the site!
https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10793


Disclaimer: Story has chapters that contain cruel content among other things. Also has sweet chapters as well. Any likeness to real-life individuals is pure coincidence.  

-Chapter 58 is now up-


Notice: No longer on hiatus!



 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Alpha-Beta
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 291472 Read Count: 118861
[Report This] Published: August 25 2021 Updated: April 30 2024
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed half-star
Date: November 02 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: On the Prowl

This promised to cut down on the sadism, at least from the description.


Nothing of the sort happened. It might not be bad, but it's still false advertising.



Author's Response:

Apologies but I don't really remember saying I'd cut back on the more sadistic aspects of the story. Could be my mind is running a blank on that promise though. But if it isn't then it really isn't false advertisement as such a promise wasn't made, at least to my knowledge at the moment.


Still I could be terribly wrong. Whatever the case is I am sorry that this warranted the low review. I do try to improve and hope that I can. That said i do appreciate the comment nonetheless as well as the feedback and hope this doesn't put you off from the story but will understand if it has.



Author's Response:

Apologies but I don't really remember saying I'd cut back on the more sadistic aspects of the story. Could be my mind is running a blank on that promise though. But if it isn't then it really isn't false advertisement as such a promise wasn't made, at least to my knowledge at the moment.


Still I could be terribly wrong. Whatever the case is I am sorry that this warranted the low review. I do try to improve and hope that I can. That said i do appreciate the comment nonetheless as well as the feedback and hope this doesn't put you off from the story but will understand if it has.

Summary:

It's been over a year since Jeremy's slept with someone, not to mention how much longer since his last girlfriend. So in an effort to rekindle his spirit for a night, he heads to a brothel--but the girl he chose isn't a normal kind of sex worker. And she's a bit familiar too... (it's his friend)

A gentle and friendly story, done as a commission :)


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11526 Read Count: 75624
[Report This] Published: September 06 2021 Updated: November 14 2021
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: September 20 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Completed: Yes

 

Just because genre tags ARE selected ahead of time doesn't mean that you get to redifine their usage. If it has not ended, it's not complete.

 

Wish this site had better moderation tbh.



Author's Response:

but it HAS ended.

you can watch tv shows before theyre complete, or watch ones that are, you can play games before theyre complete, or play ones that are. there are patreon stories on this site that you can pay to read that arent complete, and ones that are.

this site does have moderation, they recently updated the featured list, they cleared the spam attacks from a few weeks ago, they added new categories, sometimes they delete stories. they just dont see what im doing as a problem (or they dont give a shit).

BUT its not my intention to apparently piss off readers of this site, i've been doing this for a year and a dozen stories and nobody's mentioned ever cared but for some reason this story's brought out the people who are bothered, so i'll change it i guess.

Summary:

Levi decided to stay home while his family went on holiday. But as he shrinks himself with a forgotten shrinkbox, his sister decides to take him along as her secret plaything. 


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Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109392 Read Count: 235918
[Report This] Published: November 06 2021 Updated: January 02 2024
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: July 18 2023 Title: Chapter 12: Update!

Not gonna lie, this turned from hot into outright nonsensical silly.



Author's Response:

Ah ok, sorry to hear that.. 

In The Way by maristorm Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Finding himself inexplicably shrunk down to the size of a bug, Noah must find a way to survive the hustle and bustle of his town’s outdoor shopping plaza. This story will feature mostly crush/trample situations with sneakers/boots, unaware situations, with possible vore situations and other macro fun! 


NOTE: I wanted to write a story with some of my preferred aspects of typical GTS fiction, so expect more focus on footwear and unaware scenarios. Also, if you're a big fan of massive scale and a more realistic portrayal of what being bug-sized might be like, this one may be for you!  


Categories: Crush, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10377 Read Count: 30895
[Report This] Published: January 02 2022 Updated: February 10 2022
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: January 10 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Smashed and Embedded

Not gonna lie, the bug guts part was a major turn-off.



Author's Response:

I hear ya, thanks for leaving this! Tried out more gross elements last chapter between that and the gum to try to highlight the humiliation and "reality" of the situation. I'm not personally too into much of that sort of thing, however, so elements like that will likely be few and far between moving forward. Thanks for reading! 

Summary:

A collection of all my other gentle giantess stories that I didn't think were developed or long enough for their own posts. Mostly the same kinds of themes as in my other stories.


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Maternal, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 76538 Read Count: 155617
[Report This] Published: February 16 2022 Updated: July 02 2022
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: March 08 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Growing Day

No idea why this is in this story.


Author's Response: Yeah this one is definitely on the very edge of "gentle" and doesn't really fit in with a lot of my other stuff. I didn't think much before tossing it in here, I don't write enough mean giantess stories for a separate post and didn't figure it was developed enough for a standalone story.

Therapist by akanobody84 Rated: R [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Deleted
Categories: Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1 Read Count: 4588
[Report This] Published: March 03 2022 Updated: March 03 2022
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: March 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Therapist

That pic just ruins everything.



Author's Response:

Why's that?

Summary:

Meet Mike, a regular guy, the only difference is that he lives in a house together with the tallest and most carrying women he has met. What makes them even taller is that, at his 22 years of age, he´s only 3 ´tall.

The story will be about his life, how they all got to live on the same house, which is actually "his" house.

This story will be mostly gentle, but it may include some other things as it goes.



Categories: Adult 30-39, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34070 Read Count: 41668
[Report This] Published: March 04 2022 Updated: December 09 2022
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: November 11 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Why? Was this forced drama really necessary?

Summary:

Ever since Finn’s high school bully turned giant, he’s dreaded the inevitable day she corners him yet again. However, she’s decided that it’s time to make amends, form a friendship with her former target…and maybe something more. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53922 Read Count: 89377
[Report This] Published: May 26 2022 Updated: January 23 2023
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: November 20 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Party Queen

Toxic relationship 101. Kinda makes sense, given how she was an utter shithead beforehand, but I wish it didn't go down this route (and him capitulating instantly because he was told on the phone).

Summary:

 Ian's a regular young man in his early twenties wishing for an adventure. When his wishes come true though, he ends up in a world filled with multiple thick, buxom giantesses carrying a little extra between their legs. Will he be able to survive and come back to tell the tale?



Categories: Violent, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Entrapment, Futanari, Gentle, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38814 Read Count: 55484
[Report This] Published: August 28 2022 Updated: December 04 2022
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed half-star
Date: October 30 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hate this so much. The fic has a gentle tag and it devolved into slavery and torture stuff.

At least put the right tags if you want to go that route.



Author's Response:

Problem solved.

Summary:

A young couple on their journey to financial independence are hit by a freak accident that forces them to seek help from their Japanese Airbnb guests.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37988 Read Count: 107690
[Report This] Published: September 09 2022 Updated: December 26 2022
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: September 09 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Damn, that's some nice dominance being shown here. No over the top reactions, just sheer will making the lessers bow down their heads.

Hope it continues that way.


Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: November 07 2022 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Alright, I'll bite the bullet and ask: Is this how the story is gonna go? Them being broken up like that? Or is it gonna go back to couple under the authority of a dominant mother?

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: September 12 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

And this is where it takes a turn for the worse. Why? Just... why?

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: September 12 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Not really grokking this, would have much preferred it if focus have stayed on the initial four characters.

Summary:

Remy and his sister, Lori, are more than accommodating for their shy cousin Alice who is ready to start her new college life from their apartment. They're even willing to listen to their overprotective Aunt's conditions for letting Alice live away from home. That condition? Remy has to be shrunken down. How will he fare with apartment life at 3 inches tall with a literal big sister and a giant shrinking violet?


Categories: Feet, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 88456 Read Count: 114726
[Report This] Published: November 20 2022 Updated: May 01 2024
Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed
Date: June 12 2023 Title: Chapter 19: Nikki 4 - Super Tiny Plaything (Micro)

Please tell me she won't get away because she backtalked once. Please.


Author's Response:

Depends on how it'll get written. We'll let her mom handle it.