Reviewer: Trigger Signed
Date: June 14 2021
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
First of all, I sincerely hope you're doing better these days, cancer is real s**t and I hope you will get through it !!
For the review and sugestions :
One of the best stories I have read over the years searching for this type of content. I cannot describe how well writen it is, and the reader engament is tremendous, everything feels real !
For the vote you submited in chapter 15, in my opinion the best choice for you is "same as before, men shrink, women bustier". Why that ? Because that's why i fell in love with your story : an exotic and different settings than all of the stories on this site (and lots of other sites as well). For me, women simply growing huge is quite the same as lots of stories here (but that can be very good if it's well written obviously), and your unique aspect in this story (shame that new world order stories are so few in numbers) makes me want to continue on that aspect of bustier women slowly taking control of the world.
I also think that shrinking women, also with maybe breast shrinking in a certain aspect, can be good as an instant karma for certain people, to spice up things a little !
But just women getting huge is kinda boring imo, maybe following as a second or third strain, that could be cool, but keep the BE content !
Another thing I could suggest if that's okay, maybe the new strain don't happen overnight, and the shrinking and BE can happen during the day, so you can maybe detail it more ? That could set you some interesting things to describe !
Would also love to see Allison getting kinder to John, wholesome moments are better than cruel moment imo hahaha.
Hope you have time to read that long mologue and found what you where searching for when you told us to suggest you ideas and feedback for the next chapters of your awesome story !!
Author's Response: Thanks for all the kind words. And don't worry, for the shrunken women or growing women stuff, it would be super super rare. Like it would happen to only 1 or 2 characters.