Penname: Ralgar [Contact] Real name: Greg Rhoades
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To Break in a Pet by WriteofPassage Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 262]
Summary:

The lone survivor of a horrific Shrinkee massacre is left dealing with the four giantesses responsible for the bloodbath as they compete to become her sole owner. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 411107 Read Count: 248047
[Report This] Published: September 01 2020 Updated: February 18 2024
Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: July 16 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

     Well first of all welcome  back.  This chapter was amazing.  Leah has been one of my main contenders since i first started reading this story, and this chapter did not disapoint.

     Leah is probably the most selfish and and cold heart bitch of the 4.  I am not surprised that she would use Oliver that way, but damn how that played out still hurt.  I did at first think that he may have hdd, but then even worse i thought he might have leahs sensibilities where shrunken are concerned, damn that he gave up the music for only 5 grand, i get why he did, but damn dude.  I was right about Leah being extremely possive.  Damn girl owns her former best friend ( though honestly i want to really want to know whats in her head, cause i dont know if i fully buy her statement about how she see Toejam ( and damn poor girl has completely bought into their ideas)).  This chapter kinda made is clear that their is very little hope of Leah coming around to thinking of letting her go now, or changing her thinking on shrunken in general.  Damn her dad and prob her mom to. 

    I also caught that statement about Annebells mom, damn that sucks, I really cant wait for Annebells story.   But at this point i dont know how she will react when she finds out her sister is alive (probably), I mean she has thought her sister dead for ten years or more at this point, and her sister never contacted her, yea Annebell is not going to probably take that well at all.  Another person who has either abbandoned her or failed her, or turned on her, and whats worse is it is her sister ( who she has kinda put on a pedestal).  So yea that will be a very interesting encounter that i am looking forward to. 

    You know if the 4 were just a little different Annebell would have all but fallen for them i think, She is so starved for real love.  That is one of the reasons i think she may be succombing and that wierd imprint stage where she is annebell and not, ( also damn Leah for trying to take advantage of that, but fully within her character to),  Is that she has acknowledged on some lvl that these girls actually value her and she is being drawn to that like a moth to a flame.  Damn if they had got her away from the massacre she would belong to one if not all 4 for sure.  Also I caught that statement that she maybe imprinting on all 4 of them, i want to know how the girls will handle that if it is true, which what i have been rooting for from the beggining.  

    



Author's Response:

Hey Ralgar,

Yeah, Leah will always go right for the soul of something, rather than a short-term infliction of pain. Out of the FF, Leah is probably the most "indoctrinated". Toe Jam's story isn't finished, so any lingering questions you have about their relationship will most likely be answered in upcoming chapters.  

Good catch, Ralgar. Spoilers for Chapter 33: Annabelle's reaction to Beth/the Commander being alive will be interesting for sure. It's a complicated situation, so there's going to be a lot of complicated emotions. 

You're also so right about the FF and Annabelle. I mean they're objectively heinous people and Annabelle is still struggling to resist the urge to sympathize with them. If they weren't how they were, I think she would've imprinted within a few weeks, if not sooner. 

As always, good points! 

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: August 21 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

     So i have been rereading the story for the last month, and first off i want to say again this is the best story on giantessworld.  This story is still holding up, and i will say favorite section is so far the beginning to around chapter 10.  I am also massively enjoying the giantess individual chapters.  I am really looking forward to Naomi's chapters and then the back story for Annabelle, and then the climax of this story.

     So I have noticed there is something wierd going on with Naomi.  She has had weird interaction's on screen with Annabelle and may very well be the most caring and understanding of the 4, which is weird to say since this is miss vore fetish.  I don't think Annabelle has thought on her very much, but I am thinking that she may actually be in the lead for imprinting.  Naomi showed some understanding in chapter 3 when she took Annabelle to her room to put on night clothes, and then there was the vore chapter, and then the kiss chapter, and now the bear incident, where she smelled Naomi on the bear and it started a micro imprint.  There is also the fact that she is very unwilling to so her caring and loving side to anyone, not even around the girls ( maybe especially).  So I really want to get in to Naomi's head and see what is going on.  

    Now this weird imprinting episode that has been going on is interesting.  I think what's going on is that she has finally been around one girl at a time enough that the presence of the others is no longer a factor, so she is pinging off one and really imprinting, Harper was the smell, but also the fact that she isn't around the others now, and the past connection, Molly was the fact that she was sleep deprived and Molly stepped up and protected her ( from the BITCH).   Leah does what she does best and simply dominates and overwhelms little Annabelle.  So I am very interested to see what happens with Naomi.

     I also don't think the meeting with the resistance is going to go how Annabelle hopes.  I think if the commander is who we think it is, than i expect Annabelle to perhaps run and let Poppy out for a bit, cause she will not no how to react to that situation. Also I really hope we get a meeting with mother, who is still big, I think that would be a very interesting meeting, cause her mother has apparently abandoned her As well.  There is only two people in story currently who haven't abandoned her, Byte, and Cloe.

     I am rooting for her staying with the 4, but not imprinting.  I think that is where she could do the most good long term for shrinkies as a whole, cause i do think, (as long as she does ward off the imprinting) she could eventually at least curb the worst of the 4 excesses towards shrunken.  and since they will mostly likely come to be in charge of the BSA that might change the BSA.  Now for an actual happy end for Annabelle personally she would be with Cloe, sorry Byte, but a tiny needs a giant, and a giant needs a tiny.  As Annabelle said Cloe is her best friend, and Cloe will fight for her.

     So I am really looking forward to the next round of chapters when ever u get around to posting it.  THis promises to be one heck of a ride.

     PS. Cant wait for Zoey's return, ( which i am pretty sure will be caused by Naomi).  Also i am really curious to see what the BSA is going to do to facilitate the imprinting.

     

    



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Ralgar, your words mean a lot.

You're comments on Naomi are very astute. Can't say much but this will be delved into pretty soon. 

As for the imprinting episodes and their catalysts...you are definitely in the right frame of mind with how you're viewing them. 

Oof, yeah the resistance plotline may not go the way some may expect it to. 

Interesting comments on Annabelle's mother. If she is still in fact alive, can you explain why you would want her to still be unshrunken? Just curious.  

And also interesting what you wrote about Chloe...

I want to comment more things, but I'm going to wait a couple of chapters so I don't mistakenly spoil anything. 


Thanks for your support Ralgar!

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: November 14 2022 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

    First off I loved chapter 33 with her sister, it revealed alot i think.  I loved the way u described the base, and i love how they get around the city, it does make me wonder how they get around the world though, i imagine flight would have alot of problems.  HONestly  the former commander sounds kinda like a coward, and a moral coward at that.  If u had lied like that to me u can forget about and fondness i might have had for u, ( this is how feuds can start).  He did die in not a bad way though, i mean if your going to die, die doing what u love.  But clear the air before u do seesh.  

     NOw chapter 34, well Naomi's parents are about what i thought, and that is terrible, I want to say that Mollys mother ( use that term lightly) still ranks as the worst but these two are terrible, i mean playing both daughters off of each other, thats wrong.  Well taking the blood is concerning, but we know the resistance has plans in the works.

     So we didn't get as much Naomi as i hoped, but that has been the pattern for the other girls to, so i am looking forward to time with Naomi.  Like anther reviewer said and i have said to, Naomi has seem to get shafted with the on screen time with Annabelle compared to the other 3.  Not a criticism, you have a lot of balls in the air, and already this beast is massive, somethings were going to have to give, but that is the reason i am looking forward to next two chapters, which by the way i am really glad for, i was wondering how you were going to balance naomi and nell in just two chapters.  

    SO Nell is getting access to Annabelle behind Naomi's back, I see no problems with this going forward what so ever.( sarcasm in case it wasn't apparent).  To be honest I just don't see Nell as a workable solution to Annabel's problem and I am willing to bet that Nell was her own hang-up's that will come out during this next chapter ( to be honest would take an act of GOD for that to not be the case with this particular set of parents of the year candidates). 

     So yea I am really looking forward to seeing what happens next.

     



Author's Response:

Ha! Yeah, Grey definitely died doing what he loved. I think Artemis will hold onto conflicting feelings about her mentor and what he ultimately ended up deciding. 

Also don't worry, Naomi will definitely get her time in the spotlight. You're right, this story is massive, so I'm trying to make sure I'm not missing anything or any plots.

I'm excited to see what you think of the upcoming chapters as Naomi and Nell' personalities start to become more pronounced...for better or worse.


Thanks for your thoughts Ralgar, glad to see you're still enjoying this story. I always appreciate your enthusiasm, it keeps me writing. 

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: December 17 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

     So my interest in her Mother being big, is granted mostly kink related ( mother/daughter stuff), how ever there is the aspect that her mother left after Her sisters " death".  This also tied in with the fact that she didn't want children, I think it would be interesting for her to see her daughter shrunk and probably going see this was why I didn't want children.  Would she be cruel, indifferent or would her mothering side try to come back ( mind I don't think Annabel would except and help from her mother by choice, but that's the rub and the interesting part, if her mother is still big, ANnebell would be in no shape to ignore her mother, i mean her Mother could force the issue of helping her or what ever, yes I'm kinky and wouldn't mind seeing a mother daughter scene, but i don't think it would fit this story,. (Poor Annabell, most of us want to see her have a very bad time).

    So yea that's why I would like to see her mother, and her still be big.  Of course her being small would also have alot of potential, I really don't want her to be dead.  Of course that would mean even more characters in this already massive story.  

    I was wondering, if there was any chance of an update this month,(christmas gift) other wise see you next year. Hope you have a Merry CHristmas and a Happy New Year.



Author's Response:

Haha, everyone wants Annabelle to be miserable. But without going into spoiler territory, I've been going back and forth with how I want to deal with the whole issue of Annabelle's backstory/parents. You've given me a pretty interesting perspective. 


Thanks Ralgar!

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: January 14 2023 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

So first off I hope you had a good new year.  

    I really liked this chapter it had a couple of surprises. I really liked the Naomi and Poppy scene, it was hot.  I also loved to see more Naomi, she is so interesting, I am still trying to get in her head, so I am still looking for ward to her next chapter, and I am really looking forward to seeing The Poppy/Naomi scene, ( though i do have two request since you do ask for them, can u do more with Poppy and being around butts, and could you do a scene with Poppy as a sponge when the girls are showering or bathing, the idea of using tinies as a sponge or rag to clean yourself is hot,( mind this is your story, so if you don't want to I am ok, I like most things you have written in this story, even the stuff I normally don't like.

     So you surprised me with Nell, I wasn't expecting for Poppy to be interested in her, but you pulled it off.  So this will be an interesting direction to go in, and honestly if she is going to really imprint on anyone short of Cloe, ( yes i am still rooting for Cloe), Nell is probably for the best, ( i do still think Nell isn't the solution, but if she is stuck with the BSA, then Nell would at least take her wants into consideration, and might actually help out other shrunken in time). 

     So of course this will cause even more fracture between Naomi and Nell, and might even completely destroy that relationship, though mind it probably was headed that way anyway in time.  Also I do wonder how it will affect Naomi, if it will cause her to double down or actually take a step back and reconsider her approach to Poppy. At first glance I think it would cause her to double down, but there is a slight chance that it might cause her to take a step back, after all the other girls haven't been any different in there approach, so the others haven't been forced to change, but Nell does act different, and They have scene how Poppy responds to Nell, ( and they know poppy is going through the motions of loyalty).  So it does make me wonder, and honestly I would really like to see one of the girls actually change a little at least and maybe become a better person, at least a little, ( honestly I think Molly has the best shot at this, but I am rooting for Naomi a little to.  So this is turning out to be even a better arc than I anticipated.  

     I am interested to see where that think with Lucky Days ( such a wierd saying), and the cherry tomatoes thing goes, you brought it up a few times.  Mind I still think Naomi will be involved in Zoey coming back into play and I am so ready for it.  THere is alot to this story I am still looking forward to.

Also I am like the others have said ok with the parents taking a break this arc.  I can really only take so much of them before I want to strangle each of them.  




Author's Response:

Hey Ralgar,


I am in fact, having a good new year.


I'm glad you're liking Naomi, there's definitely a lot more of her coming up. I'll take your suggestions and see if I can implement them in later chapters if there's space. 

Lol I'm glad you're a Chloe fan--I am too. 

Nell and Naomi's relationship is already so strained, that I think Annabelle imprinting on Nell behind Naomi's back would cause some serious consequences for the sisters--or even the entire Sano family.

Also, I get the whole thing with the BSA adults, lol, they can be a lot. 

I always appreciate your support, Ralgar.


Thanks for commenting! 

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: April 01 2023 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

     First off welcome back, I will admit I was starting to get worried that something happened.  I am glad your health is getting better.  

     So I noticed that Naomi's arc has been increased to 4 chapters then, which i am ok with, this arc is surpising me alot.  Honestly i didnt really like Nell at first but this chapter actually brought forth an aspect I didnt expect, that is that Nell and Annebell are very close to my ideal Giant Tiny relationship. ( where the Giant does genually care for her tiny, but the tiny is there to be played with, but she respects the tiny and wants good things for her.  So dang it this chapter just made me start rooting for Nell. Congrats.

    Now Naomi, you had hinted that she was perceptive, but damn all of that from one meating and one mention of Dufort, that girl is scary.  She is also far colder than i realized, damn to eat the  daughter in front of the father, damn that cold.  Also, im opinion very stupid in the long run, but any way yea that was cold.  Also, THat really jumped up Naomi, she will be the Girl to watch I think from now on.  I take back what i said about Maybe Naomi possibly changing for the better if she discovered Nell's relationship with Poppy, though honestly she has to suspect if not out right know.  

    Byte would u plz tell Annebell what is up, for the love of all that is holy stop blue balling the poor girl.

     SO the teacher, honestly I dont feel sorry for him, teachers who do  that to students deserve what ever happens.  Also dont think I didnt catch that implication that Zoey actually protected Annebell, (why, i havent decided yet) but yea, This Zoey arce continues to be super interesting and i am so ready to see where u are going with it.

      I am very interested in the next chapter and hope it can come soonish.     But plz take care of yourself in these crazy times.

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: September 01 2023 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Wells it’s been three years now since this amazing story was started.  I hope everything is going great for u. If/when u return I will be here.  


Ps really hope everything is going good. 

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: September 11 2023 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

So I will be leaving a review for the latest chapter, but for now i am rereading this story, and i have a question. If at all possible can u plz kill the parents, ( particularly Mollies parents)? Also in a very gruesome manor, I don't usually ask that but i just got to Mollies chapter again, and every thing I said the last time still stands, but yea I want Mollies mother in particular to suffer a very bad end.  Believe it or not I am actually ok if the girls live, i actually like them, (as characters, they are still terrible people).

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: September 23 2023 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

WRite I dont know if you are aware but this site does have aging issues, so U might look into other sites for you story, just in case this site ever does die.

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: February 19 2024 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

So, first off welcome back, I have greatly missed this story.  Still is an awesome story and i really want to see how this ends ( I am so torn on which ending i want other then i dont want a full imprint, but do i want her to end with Cloe( good ending) or girls ( ranging from ok to bad to very bad (leah)).

   Yea any pity I had for the teacher went by by when He tried to shift the blame.  THat was bullshit and honestly I think he was lucky to die, I would rather die then live under Sanos oh so gentle and caring ( sarcasm) hands.  

    NOw that we are done with the individual chapters I rank as the Girls coming out ahead in this depraved race is Naomi, Molly, Harper, Leah, Nell.  Nell had them all beat right up until the end, Sorry girl but yea you really arent any better just better as pretending to be human.

    I am so ready for the back story of Anna, you have teased it now for years and I am so ready for it. 

See you next time.

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

So another thing I noticed and was surprised by was the parents actually willing to give a choice ( granted pic your poison type choice), still that is far beyond what I expected from any of the parents.  And they were willing to have a conversation even if only a little, they treated her with far more agency and respect than I expected( which says a lot considering about where that particular bar is). They even said to relax which is an actual consideration and an attempt to help make what happened easier.  Wow they actually may have treated her better then Harper does.


I don’t expect that from any of the other parents at all. I expect full indefference to actual distain from from naomis parents to Molly’s respectively.  Leahs dad I expect full on mental and emotional manipulation from him.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's an important thing to notice. The BSA's relationship with Annabelle is really unique. They definitely don't view her as a person, but they want her to be happy while still being obedient. However, their wants and desires will always be more important than Annabelle's happiness. 


And super astute point about the other parents Ralgar! I can't wait for you to read the upcoming chapters.


As always, thanks for commenting. 

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 28 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Just wondering if there will be an update soon



Author's Response:

I'm aiming for some time this week (hopefully). I wrote a huge chunk yesterday. I keep adding scenes haha. Like I just wrote this dream sequence that I may or may not keep. I just want to make sure I squeeze all I can from Harper before I move onto the next giantess. 

Sorry for the wait!

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: November 22 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Well after years of reading stories on this site, I have finally made an account to leave a review to this fantastic story you have written, i have gotten into this story and i  am very torn on how i want it to play out ( part of me wants her to bond with all 4 of them) another wants her to find some one who will properly help her and treat her as a person as much as possible ( considering the BIG handicap). 

THere was a line in a chapter (last line actually) that has made me wonder ( that being why doesnt she kill them all) and to be frank all the girls ( and there parents deserve death) deserve life permaneantly, but i really like this villanesses and i almost want them to come to actually see annabelle,  and really accept her ( still play with her of course, also where annabelle has learned to accept and even care for them, this wouldnt be a bad end i think.

This is one of the best stories on this site, and it is very interesting.  I really cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

I'm honored! As a chronic lurker I understand the lure of the lurk.

We share similar sentiments, Ralgar,  on one hand I have my outline solidified and I know how the story ends, but there's a part of me that is super attached to the hypotheticals. If people are interested, I might publish a few "What if" chapters at the end of Annabelle's journey.  

Thanks for your review, Ralgar!

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: December 11 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Hello again, the only thing that i could think i would really like to see is a chapter for one of the fours pov, ( which might be spoilery territory, but u did say soon we would be getting in to there stories anyway,) . I have read this story twice now and getting rdy to read a third time ( it is just that good) and that i is the one think i miss, is seeing a chapter from pov of the villians, especially during a poppy episode.

Honestly the best outcome that i can think of for Anna is that she imprints on one of thie girls, (by the way I hope Rachel isnt an indicator of what Anna will be like when she imprints, that would take it out of bitter sweet to down right depression at least to me).  I also cant see Anna sucessfully escaping and being able to stay gone, she is worth billions and the only reason she isnt in a lab or elsewhere with people worse than the 4 (ergo their parents) is becuase of the 4.  IF she got away i see that becoming open season on her adn now everyone is going to come after her. People have done worse for millions let alone billions.  

So inconclusion while i love a happy end ( which would be either her father or honesly Cloe,( Nell is to beat down to protect her) and i have suspions about Oliver, I think realistically she needs to imprint and really bond with one of the girls ( if not all 4:P.)

Also i am rooting for either Leah or Harper ( prefer Leah, I think she could really protect Anna in the long run, Harper would be the one  i think would acutally care the most about her post imprinting, ( though really  i am acoutally rooting for all 4 ( a little becasue I will not be surpised if harper went all if i cant have her no one can kinda thing if she imprinted on any of the others like seriously theyu are all monsters but there is something not right in that girls head. Also i do think that all 4 have bonded with her on a minor lvl like Rachel did, just that because they are so big compared to anna it takes alot more and is diluted alot compared to poor Rachel. 

ALso plz spare Rachel.



Author's Response:

Hey again Ralgar!

Without going into spoiler territory too much, one of the FF will definitely be the pov of a pretty important chapter (probably my favorite chapter). 

Anna is up a creek with her entire escaping plot. I think she's coming to terms that it may no longer be a viable option for her. 

Lol and I'm glad you like Rachel, because that's who Annabelle ends up imprinting on. Haha, I'm just joking (or am I?)


Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: December 12 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ok this changes things a lot.   Hmmmmm I need to think on this, I do still think she will need to stay with the giantesses though, I mean there is no way she will be allowed to get away permeanently but hmmm I need to think on this.


that guy is really naive if he thinks he can compare to Annabelles situation at all.


sad thing is I really do like the 4, they are good villains but I do wish they would actually start to really care and reciprocate to Anna ( they do care but it is so twisted).



Author's Response:

Yeah, you're exactly right. The FF do care about Annabelle, but in a way that Annabelle (and most decent people) would classify as toxic. And as for Steven he has shown so far that he means well, it's just he has no clue about the greater evil that hides in the shadows of the FF's power.

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: December 12 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ok well now, I do retract my previous statement about imprinting on the 4, with no longer just being an absolute matter of time, hmm so now she needs to find some one who is absolutely in her corner, and has the strength to stand up to all who come after her if and when she escapes cause honestly if she doesn’t find some one like that she is better staying with one of the 4 ( Leah), it sucks and is really not fair, she and the ever many shrinkies and other they and those that support them have killed, but she has an unknowable number of people about wanting her( which doses raise the question about steve and his owner and how they have apparently been left mostly alone, though known about.

I do like the 4 but they do need a massive come to Jesus moment.  

Also I do have questions about the spicy scenes mostly like she is 3 inches tall and like how is she able to do enough to send them so freaking crazy orgasms, is it the pure thought of domination they are doing in which case that proves the lie to leahs theory about them not being people. I certainly don’t get off to the thought of owning my animals and it doesn’t give me a sense of superiority. So huh interesting thought.



Author's Response:

Lol the imprinting game has changed, hasn't it? I think in the behemoth chapter, I address the Shrinkee-registration process with a bit more detail if I'm not mistaken. If I don't, I'll make sure to include it later. It should explain why Steven and Riley are left alone. 

Ha! As for your spicy question, I think it's a combination of things. The domination mindset is for sure a factor. Also, Annabelle may be tiny, but she knows what they like (to her chagrin). 

I think the FF perceive Annabelle differently then they would an animal (despite how much they would deny it). I won't go too much into their mindsets in this reply, but one, two, or all of them may be suffering from cognitive dissonance. 

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: December 13 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

By the way yes I love the long chapters, I have always preferred long chapters to short, ( though only problem I have is even long chapters do eventually end).

I do want to know more about this worldd u have made though.  It is very surprising to me that people in power would know about Steven and that he is with an apparent regular person (read peasant) and not arrange things so that something happed to Riley. (Not that I do want something happen rather the opposite really) honestly Steven really surprised me, I was not expecting a normal person to have a type-0. 

The fact that u can apparently ward off the imprinting is so huge though.   Poor Annabelle is going to have such a hard time with that.  

Also at the very end of this story will Annabell sing?




Author's Response:

Lol, so dark Ralgar! Riley deserves better lol!

No, but like I said in a previous reply, the next chapter goes into the registration process a little. I'll probably expand in later chapters if you're still curious. It's funny, I've made up an entire world with rules and regulations, but you guys only see like 6% of it, because that's what relevant to the plot. 

As for Steven, it's been surprisingly fun to write a normal character. His conversations with Annabelle are really interesting to write.

Regarding Annabelle's singing...I'm not telling :)


Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: December 13 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

By the way can u do any more feet content, normally feet isn’t my thing but the way u wrote it early in the story was down right incredible and I kinda would like to see it again.


Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: December 14 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I do have a question and it maybe imaterial, but what was Annabelles major, and just what was she planning  on studying besides Shakespear?

Also what are the 4 studying to? I’ve been think and I don’t recall it ever being mentioned, not that I think thee girls really care (except maybe Leah and Molly).



Author's Response:

Okay so I normally respond to comments right as I upload the newest chapter, but I had to reply to this, Ralgar. Sometimes your comments scare me because I've been working on the next chapter now, and I just--as in an hour ago--wrote a section where I mention one of the giantesses' majors. So far I haven't mentioned the others in this chapter, but I might add it since you seem interested.  

I just had to tell you because sometimes I think you guys are hacking into my writing document. Lol and you're right about which giantesses actually care about their studies (I don't think I've ever had a chapter showing Harper or Naomi actually study haha), 


Curious, though what do you think they study? (Hint: most of them are double majors). 

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed
Date: December 16 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Let’s see hmm Leah mostly likely political science and business. Naomi I would think business and maybe fashion, Molly literature and business Harper... maybe how to American blond 101.  I have no idea on Harper. She seems find to be a trust fund kid.Anna I have no idea.

I can’t wait until u bring Zoey back because I am really curious to see how a) u do bring her back and b) I really want to see the 4 and Zoey really go at it. In all there glory.



Author's Response:

Like Mr. In a Suit, you definitely got some right. I love that neither of you can guess Harper's major (I laughed too hard at How to American blond 101). I actually think I hint at one of their majors in the most recent chapter.

Zoey coming back is one of my favorite chapters, Ralgar. I think you'll be surprised how it happens.  

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