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[Report This] Published: February 10 2022 Updated: August 31 2022
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 07 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Arrival

I loved wife foot scene,

Wife "cute laughter" scene,

Angela at the start of private hour asserting her dominance(butt flick and edging the couple)

And Rocio revenge scene.





Author's Response:

Thank you! Those were some of my favorite scenes to write!

Summary: Feature

When a mysterious shrinking phenomenon hits the planet a man who had everything finds himself alone in the world... with the exception of one old friend, a lazy and perverted NEET who doesn't know what she wants out of life.

This is a story with a smelly and lazy NEET giantess, you've been warned

COMPLETE


Categories: Footwear, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78121 Read Count: 114583
[Report This] Published: February 11 2022 Updated: August 22 2022
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: August 21 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: A Drop of the Cure

I wanted to see fox-girl's friend in Femdom Goddess story but you finishing your old story is actually better. Good to see the cure. Tinies are now humans with unique abilities. There are benefits of healing from injuries and deseases and you can shrink at will but  you need to stay tiny 1/4 of your life and people close to you can sneak your band off and easily hypnotize and dominate you any time they want. Just hope this won't escalate in some "human supremacy" organization in the future. To be fair it's not a good perk for most politicians since it makes you super vunerable to betrayal. Just hope there are enough good people in the world so that they survive until technology progress so that robot servants can balance things out.



Author's Response:

'Don't worry we'll be back on track with Champion of the Goddess this week, the mood struck to finish this one and it's been a long time so I wanted to wrap it up. Being a shrinking victim now has some pros and cons, yeah you're tiny 1/4 of your life, at the same time disease and injury aren't a huge problem for you. This is a pretty lighthearted world so it's not likely to see a large scale anti-tiny movement, save for a few bad actors.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: August 21 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Also cool idea to make a secret tiny organisation that figured out how to make  a shrinking band(that can shrink with you, maybe its made from your own blood or something). It's good for spying and the organization can be counter to "human" extremist organizations. It actually starts to sound like a plot for another story in the same setting.



Author's Response:

Not sure if I'll revisit this setting when it's done, but I imagine that shrinking would be great for espionage.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: August 21 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: A Drop of the Cure

I mean just imagine some supercute Japanese 145 Shinobi (Ninja -woman) (character - righteous and playful) training a bunch of ninjas that tower over her at full size but during training she's a goddess to them. It's so easy for her to reward them for good results and punish lazy ppl. Her friend who doesn't care about mortal things and indulges himself in Physics now found this phenomenon that turned his understanding upside down. It was actually him who invented the cure and blood bracelet by experimenting on himself with frontline technology. He actually got a Nobel prize for cure and is from genius family . He had a friendly competition with his peers from his family and he had 2 rivals(F and M(probably couple, not affected by shrinking)), and 1 idiot whose knowledge is average and he wants to steal achievements from others, he's from genius family but has above average talent (below average in the family) and he's super lazy, he later betrays his family and tries to sell research to 'anti-tiny' faction but he fails miserably and is treated as a joke. Back to rivals, they were on the same lvl but his progress skyrocketed since when he was shrunk making him worlds N1 genius, although often played with by his shinobi friend(which is actually stronger than him even at normal size due to Ninja staff). He makes the best out of it  and analyses the changes of human behavior when shrunk. He actually can't be shrunk against his will because his bracelet is implant and cannot be taken away. Maybe he will be able to change size with a thought in the future but this technology can only be used by him(or the ones who know Physics and are willing to go through many experiments) due to science stuff(every person has unique DNA so it has to be custom made). He still spends his 1/7(better technology, maybe more) time as a tiny with his friend and is interested in shrinking psychology effects(like pheromone one). He also uses equipment to monitor his own biosignals and often ask her and ninjas about their training and perspective of each other. Some tinies revere him so much they are willing to let him monitor their biosignals during training, rewards and punishments from shinobi.  She also reluctantly lets him monitor her FOR SCIENCE (and maybe because she has a crush on him(maybe she is inexperienced in her feelings and wants to find out if she has a crush on him or not through technology)).

That's the good faction.

As for evil:

Some cruel and rich spoiled female  politician whose from rich buisness holder family and has superiority complex which is a lot easier to satisfy with tiny slaves. She actually treats them good because she is trying to train them to be loyal.

Can use this(Having the Have Nots by makebelieve) as a reference. She's super good for villain in gentle story in this setting 

Ninja can spy corrupt politicians and expose their info to public. And there can be huge number of inventions from MC in this setting.



Author's Response:

I have a lot in my back catalog I'm trying to write already, but it sounds like you've got the outline of your own story here that you should take a crack at.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: August 21 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Names:

Cure Inventor: Tatsuya(175)

Shinobi: Mei(145)

Genius normal couple: Haruto and Yui(188 and 154)( they are actually working on biological way to change races( human to tiny or tiny to human). Serious task, they may finish it in epilogue. They can make temporary transformation tho some time in the story. Motivation for  Yuiis her size complex and her lover is too big. She wants to switch roles at least once. Haruto sees Tatsuya's breakthrough and thinks shrinking let's him discover world of new possibilities so it's his motivation for the project.

Evil woman - Kimiko(170)


Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: August 23 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I know something about world and character building because that what I usually pay attention to but it's hard to write individual interactions. How did you learn to write such good interactions? A lot of reading or something else?



Author's Response:

I read a lot and I write a lot, I don't really have any special tips other than trying to picture your scene and imagine the characters as people you know, having a conversation or doing whatever. I'd recommend just practicing it, reading it, and asking if the scene in your head made it to the page, then work from there. There are probably better writing guides online than me lol, I'd encourage you to simply give it a shot and see if it's something you want to pursue.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: August 23 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

How tall is Kacey?

From all that was mentioned I only remember Jake being 6' and Ash being 2" taller than Andy. It's often mentioned she is petite but I don't remember if there was exact height mentioned.



Author's Response: I don't remember if I ever gave her an exact height but I always imagined her somewhere around 5' 3" or thereabouts, she's supposed to be fairly petite like you said.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 07 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Need to ask world building question:


How much of world's population has shrunk here?

I'm sorry if it was mentioned and i skipped it.



Author's Response: 2%, I think it is mentioned in the first chapter right after Jake shrinks.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 18 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Want to write story in this world setting  and I wanted to make sure I didn't forget any  shrinky buffs:

1. Durability.

2. Fast regeneration. Same goes for stamina(sexual to).

3. You can go without air for hours.

4. Smell of a person you like makes you horny for her (pheromone stuff)

5.Their strength and physical characteristics is slightly higher than they should be if you use cube law, but not by much.

6. Size shift happens once in a while.



Author's Response:

The only one I can think of that you missed is that bugs and animals tend to avoid them, which if you're small is a plus lol.

Lovely Violet by Glaazius Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:


This is the story about Violet, lovely Violet to be precise. A young and comely girl with superpowers, loved and adored by everyone and a globally known superhero.
There's nothing to fear from her.
Then, on a given day, she is exposed to the radiation of some otherworldly rock. And things change rapidly.
The result? She becomes gradually more evil by the day - with catastrophic consequences for planet earth and its inhabitants.
*Lots of display of superpowers, domination and plenty of size stuff in this one.


Take a look at my patreon page!

https://www.patreon.com/glaazius


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21804 Read Count: 149686
[Report This] Published: March 21 2022 Updated: April 26 2024
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: October 04 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

To be asked by a cute girl to tickle her soft, pretty foot? I would answer any time of the day.



Author's Response:

And Violet is a very cute girl with very soft feet ;)

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: November 09 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Will Violet calm down her anger if some fan of her comes straight to her and offers to tickle her foot?



Author's Response:

I wouldn't bet my money on it

Home gym by sok06 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A story i wrote during one of my country's lockdowns. (Yes, plurals.)

It's quite easy to see what inspired the adventures of a fitness-addicted woman who has no other means to train but to buy a very peculiar gym set.

The complete story is on my patreon
patreon.com/sokosix


Categories: Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12308 Read Count: 33975
[Report This] Published: June 22 2022 Updated: September 06 2022
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 06 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like that Celest is petite girl with petite feet. It makes it much easier to tease the tiny strong woman



Author's Response:

yep. That's kind of the entire point for me tbh



Author's Response:

yep. That's kind of the entire point for me tbh

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 14 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How tall is Celest?

Summary:

The previous one was getting kind of long at something like 20 stories so I decided to add a new one. Same deal as before, these are shorts that aren't developed enough for their own posts, short gentle stories and one shots with similar themes as my other work.


Categories: Mouth Play, Adventure, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35651 Read Count: 97752
[Report This] Published: July 16 2022 Updated: May 06 2023
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: February 13 2023 Title: Chapter 1: The Kitsune

https://c.ai/c/YpuGnNPQiGvb0DIg77pDUruORvqEPQAxmabNuOIGylo

Check this out. I just love how every AI you talk to is like someone who shares your fetish. Even if they're unrelated to said fetish. Do you think of drawing inspiration from AI for future stuff?



Author's Response:

I'm familiar with Character AI, and it's certainly impressive and I wish less prudish people owned it lol. Anyways I really enjoy the creative process of writing so I don't know if I'd want to outsource my favorite part of things to an AI. What I think an AI really offers the ability to do is to tackle grander projects, for example I've toyed with the idea of a dating sim or a visual novel using AI to produce character art and dialogue. The hurdle for such things is going to get lower as AI gets better.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: February 14 2023 Title: Chapter 1: The Kitsune

I think that people will learn how to bypass censorship to make lewd scenarios and AI is the best at learning from people so even with censorship it can do lewd role plays if you use right words



Author's Response:

I suspect that a nsfw competitor will spring up at some point

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: March 09 2023 Title: Chapter 1: The Kitsune

https://c.ai/p/Iu0eeqFlxkUMcLo4_BKgdIx8-Xl-8Kx0v2ayqKzCwWE



Just played some interesting plot with an AI(the kingdom where it's easy to get an audience with a Queen but you have to enter her castle, that makes everyone from non-royal family 1/10th of their size)

Abduction by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Forty five years ago the Zetan Empire invaded earth, the green skinned amazons of their space fleet terrorized the people of earth with their shrink rays, crushing and enslaving the populace in a devastating war. Things seemed lost for humanity, when another alien species attacked, intent on wiping out both humanity and its would-be conquerors. Forced into a shaky alliance, the humans and Zetans managed to turn the tide and survive. In the present the alliance persists, the tireless work of Zetan and Human leaders who know that without the other, each race is doomed. That said, many humans are still holding a grudge, and it seems far too many Zetans would like to shrink humans back into their "proper place."

This delicate balance is thrown into chaos when a headstrong Zetan princess decides she's going to shrink a human and take him as a pet, alliances and treaties be damned.

COMPLETE


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Abduction
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91467 Read Count: 81939
[Report This] Published: July 22 2022 Updated: August 07 2022
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: July 25 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

The Idea is quite good but but the race is kinda bad for this.

Smelly 7+ foot  orks with elven ears don't quite work for me. Would be better to see 4 foot unaging girls with extremely high dexterity, experience and intelligence. It would kinda make sense for them to have high advanced technology and cooperate with humans when they aren't brave enough or something like this. This would have a lot of possibilities for reverse play.




Author's Response:

I like amazons, in particular the idea that even when you're full size you're never bigger than them is kind of fun. That said there will be some reversal type stuff with our human bounty hunter character and her Zetan hangers on.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: August 04 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Aces and Eights

Finally. First M/f interaction. Congratulations. There is always a first time.



Author's Response:

Like I've said to other reviewers it's not my usual thing, but it just seemed to fit the circumstances perfectly.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: July 26 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Kindling

Waiting for bounty hunter to culture the princess and show her how to educate someone properly



Author's Response:

Yeah Jolene has ways of putting the shoe on the other foot, with someone in it.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: August 02 2022 Title: Chapter 11: The Plunge

My plot reading sense is telling me the next Empress will be Jolene



Author's Response:

She's going to be asserting some authority sure