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Champion of the Goddess by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Vann is an adventurer, or he'd like to be, he doesn't have much in the way of strength, and despite years of trying he doesn't have any magical talent either. Desperate, he makes a plea to the divines, and finds his way to a lost temple where a forgotten goddess is willing to raise him up as her champion, granting him immense power. The catch? Well, she's the goddess of Female Domination, and the rituals and acts she demands in exchange for her blessings can be quite... interesting, as can her punishments for disobedience. Luckily Vann has his friend Tyra, herself a lady knight and experienced adventurer, to help him navigate things, and she's quite eager to make sure he performs those rituals correctly...

A comedic fantasy story about a mage in the service of a femdom goddess fond of size changing, and the adventures he has along the way.


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59649 Read Count: 54039
[Report This] Published: August 10 2022 Updated: September 15 2022
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: August 18 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens

To previous guy: cute girl fox that is over 100 y o is not a beastkin. It's some kind of fox spirit. Beastkin are usually human experiments or descendants of spirit and human while spirit is naturally evolved beast that is a lot more magical than average human and it's very hard to find one. 

To Author: cute barefoot loli is always a good addition. Hope next one is a constantly flying witch that doesn't like shoes.



Author's Response:

A little bit of Enid's nature will be explored in the next chapter, she's a little bit of a mix between the western, more particularly Anglo/Scottish idea of the Cunning Folk (NOT the fey/fairies), and of course the Japanese spirit which is ironically more well known in the US despite our heritage. This is reflected both in her disguise as a western crone style witch, and her true nature as a fox-girl, while her actual abilities are a sort of mix between what both are said to be capable of.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: August 24 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens

Immortal elves? The first time I see ones. Usually they just live 10 to 100 times longer than humans. Immortality usually preserved for divine (like  champions in this case), transcendents(who transcend the species(demon king, maybe his 4 main subordinats, human heroes born with supertalent in everything once per 1000 years or so, elven royality that possess superitem or some blessing from some primordial elf(blessings are limited in number, usually 12)) or some evil witches who need to sacrifice something for eternal youth. This is how you make sure there is no overpopulation or some kind of race domination. The more you live the harder it is to make kids and immortals can't have immortal as a kid without paying a price or at least have to limit it to one.

If you make an immortal race that can procreate then world will collapse from overpopulation and that race dominating others.



Author's Response: These guys are a lot like the Tolkien elves in that they do truly live forever, but they also reproduce and mature very slowly, and many of them never procreate at all. This being the kind of story it is you might say that they definitely have a sex drive, but for most of the time it's truly a recreational thing for them. As far as dominating other races, if you've got one elf who has practiced the sword for a thousand years against a hundred humans who have practiced the sword for six months, the hundred humans are going to win. Overall this story's elves are generally a benevolent lot, so they're easy friends with humans even if a lot of them are assholes.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: August 28 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens

What I mean about immortal elves is if they procreate ince every 100 years and don't die they will have the same numbers as humans if not more



Author's Response:

Most settings with immortal elves have them reproduce a lot less than that, for example in Lord of the Rings Elrond was like 8,000 years old and had two children in that time. For this story Eletha's over 800 and the only time she considered stopping for children was when she thought she was going to have to "save" Chadwick's lineage. The thing with an immortal species is they also don't need to prioritize reproduction and expansion the way a mortal one must.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 08 2022 Title: Chapter 9: A Test of Faith

Epilogue next? Damn, that ended too fast. We saw Mistress action only in 1 chapter and there was no barefoot play with an elf. I like elfs in this setting because even if they dominate someone they can't make them miserable because of elf's "perfect" body: soft dainty  pale feet, clean because being dirty is against their pride, tender toes that do not hurt even if they push you around.



Author's Response:

I was thinking we probably have 1 more chapter of the main plot and then another chapter of Vann rebuilding his temple and so on, I will be sure to get some barefoot with the elf in for you

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 15 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens

Elytha foot moment in last chapter is as good as I expected from you. I'll probably reread it later for inspiration. Thanks.



Author's Response:

Glad it hit the mark! Generally I try to throw review requests in when I can, the audience also lends itself to inspiration haha. Anyways the Eletha feet scene definitely fits the story and the character so thanks for the suggestion.

Ambition by HerrDanke Rated: X [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Victoria lives in a universe similar to ours, except that people with magical abilities represent around 20% of the population there. Society has adapted to these special indivuals to the point most of them use their various levels of power only occasionally. People with magician jobs are actually few, excluding magical outlaws.
In this story, Victoria is getting tired of her studies. She decides to shrink and domesticate her whole class to prove that she can become a great witch instead.
Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Buy Modivigil 200mg tablets online
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4592 Read Count: 3263
[Report This] Published: September 07 2022 Updated: September 24 2022
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 07 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking rampage

Always good to see the "clever" witch's magic backfire. Good story, I hope to see Layla's weekend with Victoria.



Author's Response:

Glad you like! This is in fact one of my favourite twists in GT stories so you may read similar stories in the future hehe

About Victoria's weekends, I haven't taken any writing decision yet, but I'm curious about your expectations. Please tell me if any =O

The Japanese Experience by SweetSalt Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

A young couple on their journey to financial independence are hit by a freak accident that forces them to seek help from their Japanese Airbnb guests.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37988 Read Count: 107917
[Report This] Published: September 09 2022 Updated: December 26 2022
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 09 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like cute Japanese girl. Especially gentle.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 09 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn. 7 inches feet are tiny. Well. Not for the couple.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 09 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What's the height of mother/daughter?

The Neighbor Girl by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Allison has a genetic condition that causes others to shrink when they come in contact with her skin or her body fluids. With this affliction she's lived a life in isolation, terrified of how the world would react and worried about accidentally hurting those she loves. Her life changes when she accidentally shrinks her downstairs neighbor, Clark, but he's not scared of her at all... in fact, he wants to ask her out!?

A romantic story about a shy girl coming to terms with her shrinking power, and her boyfriend trying to get her out of her shell.


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59487 Read Count: 81602
[Report This] Published: September 16 2022 Updated: October 02 2022
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 23 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Bumping into Each Other

- I'm not sure how to oppose a lab. The best way is probably to go to some television agency and show your ability.

After that you can open your YouTube channel or just go viral on Twitter due to popularity boost from TV.

Then you can go to the police and say that your friend is in the lab against her will. After that you post a video or something where you talk about lab, Sadie and police involvement.

There are many forces in play in every country (except for russia, it's absolute monarchy where everyone is a slave except for putin) and if you're known to everyone they'll fight each other to earn a favor from the unicorn. Downside is that you will be feared and someone may want you dead but as these guys said:

- Noone will kill the only unicorn in the world if they can study it. 

She will definitely be protected.



Author's Response:

Yeah nobody is going to try to kill Allison, or even Sadie and Clark for now, they're just too valuable. Not sure if you've ever seen Firestarter or read the book, but it's the same concept, the target is simply too valuable. Also we'll explore it a bit but The Lab, while affiliated with the government, is operating in shadowy and quasi-legal areas that their superiors might not know about or approve of, Kendra is obviously having a bit of a moral crisis about the whole inevitable betrayal too.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 30 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Bumping into Each Other

Damn, does he know what Allison can do? If not, why didn't he talk to the guys who failed. If yes, then why antagonize the size witch?



Author's Response:

He knows some of what she can do but not the whole story, plus he's a little desperate and mad at this point. Antagonizing the size witch is a fun way to put it lol, yeah he's going down a path the wise avoid.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 25 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Bumping into Each Other

I hope it's temporary for Sadie. She's better of like a cheerful doll - girl than a giantess.



Author's Response:

Don't worry she'll be back in her dreamhouse before you know it.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 22 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Bumping into Each Other

“Heck no,” Sadie said excitedly as Allison placed her on the

coffee table, “I’m on vacation, I’m staying a doll! "

She's so cute. My favorite character senses that tingled from the moment she was mentioned were right.



Author's Response:

yeah she's fun, isn't she? Poor girl wants to be a doll so bad lol

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 18 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Bumping into Each Other

Also, Sadie is quite kinky. It would be interesting to see her in action.



Author's Response:

We will get to see Sadie in action.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 18 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Bumping into Each Other

Will Sadie be in F/fm type of action? Rather than seeing another giantess, having companion on your tiny adventures is better. If you ask to be shrunken once, you should do it again.

Hoping not to see gene replication technology. Although it would be fun to see some power hungry woman trying to get the gene only to get shrunken to 6 inches or so for life.

Maximum the government can do without causing too much harm is making some temporary shrinking serum at the end of the story.



Author's Response:

Sadie will be in F/f and other types of action too, obviously she was shrunk before and she'll end up shrunk again, even if it's been years at this point in the story. As for what causes Allison's condition it will be explored a little bit, they don't necessarily want to replicate her genes just replicate the ability in any form.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 17 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Bumping into Each Other

I was scrolling for good new stories, not looking at the author and when I pick something interesting based on description:

It's you again. What a surprise. How are you writing so much good stuff?



Author's Response:

I do my best lol. I have a lot of stories I'd like to do at some point sitting as outlines on my HD and I like to try different story structures out. Hope this one ends up being good!

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 18 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Bumping into Each Other

Inconsistency: 

She's not a man-shrinking mutant. She can shrink both sex. Also, does it work on animals? Insects? Not having to worry about mosquitos anymore is sure cool.



Author's Response:

She calls herself a "man-shrinking mutant as a kind of offhand remark, she does shrink women as well. Also yes it does work on animals and insects, but they can sense the chemical that causes the shrinking and will do what they can to avoid her or her victims. Call that great minds think alike because I have that particular detail about the mosquitos and ticks written in my notes lol, it's kind of a minor plot point in a later chapter but not a huge spoiler.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: September 17 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Bumping into Each Other

Can you mention height? At least for Clark and Allison 

Author's Response:

I'll be sure to include it next chapter but for now

Clark 5' 10"
Allison 5' 4"

Sadie 5' 4"

Brick 6' 2"

Angie 5' 1"

Zapped! by Altair Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

This story is set in the world of Runeterra and features characters from League of Legends and Arcane.


A down on his luck inventor is forced to steal and sell one of his own inventions on the streets Zaun. Little does he know that his buyer is none other than Jinx herself but will Jinx be as terrifying as rumors would lead him to believe or something altogether different.

This story features links to artwork commissioned from Synthetic Sinner which has been included here with their express permission. You can find more work by them as well as information on commissions on Twitter @SinnerSynthetic.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fantasy, Gentle, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22601 Read Count: 8800
[Report This] Published: September 19 2022 Updated: October 25 2022
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: October 05 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Zapped!

Gentle Jinx? That's something unexpected.



Author's Response: Definately inspired by the softer side of Jinx featured in Arcane. Hope you have enjoyed the story thus far.

Familiar by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Brendan has troubles with money, with his girlfriend, with roommates, and after a particularly rough day he takes a walk by moonlight to clear his head. While out he encounters a mysterious girl who has an intriguing offer for him, one that might solve his problems. The catch? She's a vampire, and unlike most this one doesn't drink blood, she feeds by draining her victim's size. Will Brendan find what he's looking for as the servant of a vampiric mistress? Or is this another relationship that's going to drain him dry?

A Halloween themed tale about the smutty adventures and relationship between a size vampire and her familiar.

COMPLETE Happy Halloween 2022!


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58254 Read Count: 49974
[Report This] Published: October 03 2022 Updated: October 31 2022
Reviewer: akilmilo Signed
Date: October 22 2022 Title: Chapter 1: A Walk by Moonlight

The world with Hell and Heaven is rarely populated by ghosts and undead. Maybe Hotep can traverse to another universe?



Author's Response:

Yeah multiple dimensions is very much a lovecraft thing so I figured she could, Hell as it is in Welcome to Hell isn't around in this one.



Author's Response:

Yeah multiple dimensions is very much a lovecraft thing so I figured she could, Hell as it is in Welcome to Hell isn't around in this one.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.