Penname: Kessler [Contact] Real name: Charles Ment
Member Since: June 28 2022
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Deliverance by Kardo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A young man at a bar assaulted for his diminutive stature is saved by a good samaritan who holds a dark secret. 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 324818 Read Count: 357514
[Report This] Published: February 24 2021 Updated: October 09 2022
Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: September 04 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Rescue

You'd think there would be more effort put into the direction of just growing all the specks up to normal size.



Author's Response:

"If only there was a way for me to undo The Diminution. The only limit to my abilities is that I cannot reverse the effects of shrinking. If I could, then I could just make the speck population into normal-sized people. That would be the best solution for everybody. Jisoo thought, and cursed her own weakness in that regard. There were few things she could not do with her power, but that was one that was unchangeable. 

 

Once a person was reduced, unless they were a part of her own bloodline they could never return to their original size. And even then those of her bloodline as she had discovered could be shrunk permanently if the xirang was removed altogether. " - Ch. 58 Negotiation.


Jisoo is physically incapable of growing specks to normal size, hence why she thought it would be a better idea to make everybody else smaller.

Summary:

Levi decided to stay home while his family went on holiday. But as he shrinks himself with a forgotten shrinkbox, his sister decides to take him along as her secret plaything. 


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Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109392 Read Count: 236322
[Report This] Published: November 06 2021 Updated: January 02 2024
Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: October 19 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

I really hope Levi gets some sort of payback or justice for this bullshit but with as far as things have gone it seems unlikely there can be a satisfying ending like that since it would be hard to come up with something suitable that fits the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. I'm just trying to have a bit of fun ;)

Summary: Feature

When a mysterious shrinking phenomenon hits the planet a man who had everything finds himself alone in the world... with the exception of one old friend, a lazy and perverted NEET who doesn't know what she wants out of life.

This is a story with a smelly and lazy NEET giantess, you've been warned

COMPLETE


Categories: Footwear, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78121 Read Count: 114328
[Report This] Published: February 11 2022 Updated: August 22 2022
Reviewer: Kessler Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: A Drop of the Cure

I like the bracelet solution to the shrinking problem. It gives both a convenient way to let the shrinkees go back to a normal life as well as an easy source of future size related fun and drama, both willingly and potentially having the bracelet lost/stolen with the potential problems that could cause. This story might be ending but I'd love to see a story with this as the overall premise rather than it being the end point, it seems like it has too many fun possibilities to only appear toward the end.

The need to return to tiny size for a quarter of the time seems a bit strange though, what kind of problem could that solve for them? Is it actually necessary or a "just to be sure" kind of thing like Jake being told to stay small even after healing immediately in this chapter? The obvious answer is to get the healing benefits again during that week, but does that mean the size restoration hurts them in a way that needs periodic healing by shrinking again or that they're worried that it might do so? If it is a serious necessary thing could they get the same result just by shrinking back down more often for shorter time periods?



Author's Response: I had this idea that whatever counteracts the shrinking isn't good for your health, so it's basically letting whatever is causing the shrinking fix you back up. It's fairly arbitrary but I'll try to touch on it a little in the next and final part.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: August 23 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

With the five days a month upgrade would that mean they could dodge unusual size shifts? Just going, oh, that's a bit much I'll do this another time when I'm not going to be flea size.

Great story glad to see it find a happy ending.



Author's Response: Yeah I think the next version of the meter will probably let them dodge the crazy size shifts if they wanted, at the same time I guess they're still on the table for those crazy enough to want them lol. Glad you liked the ending.

Summary:

Ever since Finn’s high school bully turned giant, he’s dreaded the inevitable day she corners him yet again. However, she’s decided that it’s time to make amends, form a friendship with her former target…and maybe something more. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53922 Read Count: 89502
[Report This] Published: May 26 2022 Updated: January 23 2023
Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: June 29 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch

Liking the story, giantess going from cruel to kind is always fun; even if in this case the cruel part as in the backstory and before she became a giantess. One potential concern is that the tags are a bit of a spoiler on her eventual cure and how it won't be 100% effective but I suppose that's just an unavoidable result of doing tags properly.



Author's Response:

Yeah, the tags thing can be a double edged sword

Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: July 07 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch

Good story, kind of an abrupt ending though. It felt like it was going to go on for a fair bit longer.



Author's Response: I absolutely agree. That ending was too abrupt. I think there’s a bit more to Finn and Katelyn’s story to tell! Thanks for your feedback, Kessler! The story isn’t over yet.

Summary: Winter break has arrived, and the city of Chicago is blanketed in thick snow. While some choose to enjoy the winter wonderland, others spend their time dreaming of a warm beachside. At the behest of the excitable Ashley, her boyfriend Jackson and her friend Laura decide to spend their week off of college by taking a road trip down to Florida. However, a mishap with the transportation leaves Jackson experiencing the journey in a whole new way.
Categories: Odor, Breasts, Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Legwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6177 Read Count: 26313
[Report This] Published: June 09 2022 Updated: August 27 2022
Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: August 28 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Keep left to stay on I-90E

The way he just brushed off almost dying seems really odd.

Summary: Feature

Life is hard for shrinking virus victims, but Evan has managed to not only maintain his independence, he's thriving. The problem is, now he's bored. Eve is an office worker looking for a new place to live when she shows up to rent a room from Evan, unaware of his tiny size. When she realizes his situation, she decides she'd rather have a tiny slave than a new landlord. Evan isn't upset by this, in fact he's... happy? Maybe a giant woman trying to capture him is just the excitement he needs.

A story about the battle of wits and wills between a tiny man and the giantess trying to capture him, and the relationship between the two that blossoms along the way.

COMPLETE

8/5/22: I see the story got a blue ribbon, not sure who decides what gets featured, but thank you it's an honor! Don't feel shy about leaving a comment on an older story, I'll see it and I love them all!


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: One Year Lease
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60928 Read Count: 147717
[Report This] Published: June 18 2022 Updated: June 29 2022
Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: June 28 2022 Title: Chapter 10: May

Two things to point out, one in chapter 9 you use Laurie's name in place of Eve's

“Keep him overnight,” Laurie said with a grin as she walked out the door with Evan."

the other was in an earlier chapter when Even wasn't willing to jump out of a tree because of breaking a bone, even without the enhanced durability a shrinkee shouldn't suffer harm from a fall regardless of height for the same reason as squirrels and other small animals. Their low mass means that even at fast falling speeds in excess of terminal velocity the impact won't have enough energy to damage them, mass is just as important as speed in determining how hard of a landing something has. 

Pedantic nitpicking aside it's a great story, hopefully a match up with tiny hunters he doesn't have to hold back the awful traps against will help rebuild Even's confidence.



Author's Response:

I went and fixed the typo.

As for Evan and lengthy falls, in any size story physics just go out the window at some point. That said, I imagine shrinkees to be slightly denser than other creatures their size, which is why they're relatively strong compared to say, rodents. Not enough to stop an incoming high heel of course, but enough that they have an edge over anything they're going to encounter the same size as them. Evan still isn't going to get any kind of serious injury from a fall from a tree, but he could get a minor one that could slow him down just enough for Eve to catch him, even if he'd be fine a little later that day.

Overall though I'm glad you're enjoying it, my sophomoric grasp of the sciences aside. Evan is definitely going to get to see the measure of himself by the end of this one.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: June 29 2022 Title: Chapter 1: August

Here's a dumb idea for a spin off, that idea that tiny 'juices' could heal and extend lifespans gets shown to work which plays a role in the lives of several couples, introduces motivation for tiny hunting to continue despite being illegal, and spurs police departments into getting a specific section just to deal with tiny specific issues like that.

Great story; it has good plot, world building, and smut all together in one enjoyable package.



Author's Response:

That's not a bad one at all, I like it a lot actually

Summary:

Carol manages an apartment complex in a sleepy college town, but her real passion is witchcraft. James is her favorite tenant, so when she accidentally puts a shrinking curse on him she feels terrible. Luckily it will only take effect if he has a lustful thought about her, and he'd never see her like that... right? She might be in over her head.

A silly slow-shrinking story.


Categories: Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37622 Read Count: 39557
[Report This] Published: July 04 2022 Updated: July 21 2022
Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: July 04 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Miss Adams herself, or Carol as she vainly insisted she call him"

Typo, also cool story so far!



Author's Response:

fixed, thanks for reading!

Summary:

After making one too many jokes at your witch girlfriend's expense, she decides to turn your day trip to the mall into a learning experience.


Categories: Footwear, Object, Unaware, Odor, Mouth Play, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4580 Read Count: 7304
[Report This] Published: July 16 2022 Updated: July 16 2022
Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: July 17 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'd really hope she eventually figures it out and changes him back, this sort of thing is always horrifying.

Abduction by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Forty five years ago the Zetan Empire invaded earth, the green skinned amazons of their space fleet terrorized the people of earth with their shrink rays, crushing and enslaving the populace in a devastating war. Things seemed lost for humanity, when another alien species attacked, intent on wiping out both humanity and its would-be conquerors. Forced into a shaky alliance, the humans and Zetans managed to turn the tide and survive. In the present the alliance persists, the tireless work of Zetan and Human leaders who know that without the other, each race is doomed. That said, many humans are still holding a grudge, and it seems far too many Zetans would like to shrink humans back into their "proper place."

This delicate balance is thrown into chaos when a headstrong Zetan princess decides she's going to shrink a human and take him as a pet, alliances and treaties be damned.

COMPLETE


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Abduction
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91467 Read Count: 81750
[Report This] Published: July 22 2022 Updated: August 07 2022
Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: August 06 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Fire in the Sky

Typo "Send my my fleet to the aid of Alrec"



Author's Response:

fixed

Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: August 07 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

Ok, really stupid in setting physics question that something else you said makes me want to ask, if someone gets shrunk by an already shrunken shrink ray and then regrown with a full size shrink ray would he end up at bigger than their original full size? Since it's regrowing them at a scale that's larger than the original shrunken shrink ray used to shrink them and would be using to regrow them?

For example lets say a human is shrunk by his Zetan girlfriend who he had already shrunk to blowjob height earlier, then he's regrown with his own shrink ray that was left on the table after she finished playing with him instead of the already tiny one she shrank him with.

Yes this is incredibly autistic I know but I can't help but to think about the actual mechanics whenever stories get enough world building for there to potentially be an actual answer to how everything works.



Author's Response:

No it's cool I get the same way lol, it's flattering to have someone who likes the story enough to ask these kinds of questions. Anyways you can't be "restored" to more than your original height, you might say that your mass is going "somewhere else," and you're pulling it back when you regrow, the shrinking tech's limitations are basically on the power of the individual device to do it, smaller device after being shrunk = smaller output, hence the inability of a shrunken shrink ray to properly restore you completely.

Overall though they break reality in a ton of different ways, so it's a fair question.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Second Star to the Right (End)

Honestly really happy about this ending, though Kurt and Joey probably should've been rewarded a bit more for their role in things. They definitely deserve it and it would've served as a decent way for the empress to look after her now "dead" daughter since they're obviously sticking together. The false death serves as both a suitable punishment for Nea's crimes and a reward for her heroics toward the end which seems rather fitting given the circumstances. All in all a rather satisfying ending to things. Always hate it when the giantess/shrinker gets away scott free with an entirely happy ending after doing evil shit, in this case you were able to give her actual consequences and still have the satisfying romance at the end which is really nice to see in contrast to some other stories. One Year Lease also had that to a degree but I think you did it better here.



Author's Response: Personally I don't like to see giantesses/shrinkers get away with their evil antics in stories either. Nea's death is, as you said, both a punishment and a reward. Is it a one hundred percent equal punishment for what she did? Probably not, a the same time it seems appropriate given the growth and sacrifice she's had since then. From a larger narrative standpoint letting her go like that is echoing other themes in the story. Nea's life is forever changed, she won't ever be able to be a princess again or enjoy the standard of living she had, but eking out a living with Kurt on the frontier might bring her more happiness anyway.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: August 06 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Fire in the Sky

Now I have to wonder just how much leniency Nea has managed to buy herself at this point. Even with Kurt going to bat for her and making herself a war hero the war itself is something she kind of caused in the first place, so it's unlikely she can get away entirely unscathed even now. Still it's probably enough to get herself a way lighter sentence than the princess who kept vital information from the then acting empress in a time of war, holy shit is that a fuck up. Kavrala certainly isn't going to be the heir apparent after that kind of bullshit.



Author's Response: I don't want to spoil Nea's fate so I won't say anything more here. Kavrala definitely fucked up, and she's shown that while she was the reasonable and competent sister, she was ultimately cold and calculating in the same way the human leaders were. Tayla was the bubbly party girl, but when the chips were down she made the right call.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: August 05 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

I'd think that the Zetan military would've seen the transmission from Nea and Kurt too, so it doesn't really fit that the human office of propaganda would be able to just stop it from being seen. Especially by the Royal family who'd probably be ecstatic to see Nea rallying humans and Zetans together like this and denouncing the coup attempt, still doesn't make up for the shit she caused but it might make them less eager to throw her and an entire planet to the squids. Also it's kind of shocking that the human propaganda office is even able to censor much in the first place even on the earth side, keeping shit quiet forever doesn't really work with the internet involved.



Author's Response:

The Zetans have similar censorship networks, and yeah it's impossible to keep it contained, but they only need to keep it hidden from the public at large, and even then only for a little while, the Director says as much. Consider that they ban the war atrocity footage too, Kurt and Joey said they saw it back in Chapter 1, but it's far from common public discourse.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: August 04 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Aces and Eights

So the starring couple are switches it seems. The idea of the dominating Zetan girl punished for her over eager shrink ray via her human lover fucking her into an moaning puddle seems very enticing. Especially if she responds to such revenge by just shrinking him more often to keep earning such enjoyable "punishments". I had assumed they would both be at full size when such a thing happened but this is fun too.


Author's Response:

Nea will probably get fucked into a puddle at some point in the traditional fashion, and yeah they're both switches I guess you could say lol.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Triumph Stolen

Oh no, if only there was a bunch of humans and large contingent of Zetan military ships nearby! Then there might be a fighting chance! But alas even if there were such a combination getting them to work together in such a situation would be damn near impossible; they'd also need an inspiring story to unify behind such as one mirroring what led to Nea's grandmother's ascension and the original alliance between Zetans and humans, but alas where could such a politically convenient coupling be found on short notice?! I mean if they were to pull it off it would make them all the kind of war heroes who could get showered in rewards and/or lenient sentencing for numerous heinous crimes. But alas such miracles can't possibly appear in some sci-fi romance and space adventure story, that's just not how things work at all.

Sarcasm aside this story is a lot of fun, just hope there's enough time left for an epic climax, big romantic payoff, and settling of the political drama built up so far all in the last few chapters. It seems like it might get a little tight tying up all the loose ends in just three more chapters.



Author's Response:

Yeah you're probably right lol, everyone's doomed, the story ends with the Cephalos eating everyone, there's nothing that could save the day now!

If things are getting too cramped we can always stretch the story out a bit, it's 15 chapters in my outline but that's hardly set in stone, and I'm thinking I'll probably add an epilogue, not a full length chapter, but something to cap the story off if that makes sense.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: August 02 2022 Title: Chapter 11: The Plunge

I'm gonna bet Tetra survived the attack and Lenais is fucked, even more fucked than she is anyway given what's pointed at her party right now I mean. Of course that does put Nea in just as bad of a position but it's hard to say she doesn't deserve to get fucked over after her little stunt and she'd probably prefer her mother alive than herself out of the firing line anyway. Still got to wonder how well Telma's just following orders defense is going to work at this point, humans are probably not going to give it much stock even if the Zetan miraculously adhere to that bit of legal shenanigans after all this.

Also typo: "admiring the site of" should be "admiring the sight of".



Author's Response:

The position for everyone is rapidly getting worse, except the Cephalos, those guys are on a roll. As for Telma, the whole thing is that the bodyguards are supposed to have the absolute confidence of the princess they're sworn to, so she probably wouldn't have been punished if things had ended back in Chapter 3. At this point, with terrorists, a coup, and military losses in the picture, Telma is kind of roped to Nea's fate for her part in things, there's a reason Telma's plan is run for the hills and hope for the best, and that's just the Zetan side of things, the humans as you noted probably wouldn't be too sympathetic to any defenses she would offer. 

also typo fixed.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed
Date: July 27 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Enemy of my Enemy

Maybe I'm underestimating how fast the horror of the squids could make allies of enemies but Kurt and Joey seem unnaturally forgiving and trusting given the circumstances, Nea's heel face turn makes sense to the reader and has some buildup but that's not something Kurt got to see. From his perspective he still has no reason whatsoever to trust her. Still liking the story so far for the most part but the sudden reconciliation after kidnapping and enslaving him doesn't really feel earned on Nea's part.



Author's Response: The relationship between Kurt and Nea has a long way to go, but with Nea's threats no longer on the table and them having fought together and now sharing common goals I thought it would be appropriate that Kurt warms up to her. I'll try to detail more of Kurt's thoughts on it and hopefully flesh the relationship out more as it grows, I'm trying to get better are writing these interactions so these kinds of thoughts are great, thanks.