Penname: Bluebunbun [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: August 31 2022
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I write M/M or M/F stories, but I'm pretty open to anything. Someday I may post whatever I have in the vault, but that day isn't today </3




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Breaking Point by NymphOManiac Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

An unrelenting game of spite, loss, malice, revenge, and love like poison. Natalie Jordan is having a rough time. Her family’s broke, she’s getting harassed by a bunch of creepers at school, and her ex boyfriend is an obnoxious, spiteful, crooked-grinned psychopath who happens to be her next-door neighbor. Things go from bad to astronomically worse when she spontaneously implodes to the size of a plastic army man toy, the only witness being none other than her obnoxious, spiteful, crooked-grinned psychopath of an ex boyfriend. 

New chapter every Thursday at 9:00PM EST! :)


Categories: Vore, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69499 Read Count: 54494
[Report This] Published: August 26 2022 Updated: December 02 2022
Reviewer: Bluebunbun Signed
Date: August 31 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking

I created an account (been a longtime lurker haha) just to say that I absolutely ADORE the dialogue and your style of writing. You can really feel the characters come to life! I can’t wait to read more on Friday :) 



Author's Response:

Ooooh thank you so much!! Dialogue is most definitely one of my favorite parts of writing. I was a bit worried people would be reading through it on here, like, "Quit yammering and get to the action, already," so I'm glad to know it's appreciated. 

As a fellow longtime lurker, let me just say I am grateful and honored that you created an account just to comment. I'm super excited to post the next chapter :) :) :)

Reviewer: Bluebunbun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Double Negative

Ahhh your dialogue is amazing as always! Love the banter between Trev and Natalie 👌. They’re both pretty toxic to each other, but they also play off each other pretty well (if that makes any sense ^^;) 



Author's Response:

Sooo much more where that came from, my lovely! Toxic is definitely the word I'd use to describe their relationship haha

Reviewer: Bluebunbun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chronic Crashing Crushing Current

I love how worried Trev was in that flashback completely juxtaposes his current actions and the mouthplay scene was excellent~~

I don't want to pry, but I was just wondering how many chapters you're planning on making this? It's really good, and I can't prepare myself for an eventual ending haha 



Author's Response:

Aha I LOVE the juxtaposition. I love delving into their past with each other and getting into how it’s led to their present status of sheer spite and toxicity for each other. 

And since you asked and I appreciate your comments, I will say that I have a good twenty chapters written and fleshed out that are essentially the first ‘season’, and a few random chapters after for where the story goes and how it ends. There are a lot more flashbacks delving into their past and their relationship, as well as the events that led to their breakup and the chaostrophic events that followed, and a lot about each of their personal traumas. Plus plenty of fucked up giant content of course >:)

Reviewer: Bluebunbun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Hamster Fucker

Lmao gotta love the chapter tags! They both need massive amounts of therapy, like physical abuse isn't ok, Trev! Even if your girlfriend was being a cunt by shoving your ex into her cunt (without your permission), that's still not cool >:( Loved the chapter though and can’t wait to see what happens next week :) 


And to answer your funky lil questions lol—I think Trev’s taking her to his apartment. He’ll probably act all cold and quiet, maybe slightly remorseful about technically playing a part in Natalie’s ~sticky~ situation, but he’d never admit any of it aloud. Once Natalie’s back to herself (figuratively haha), he’d probably resort to verbal taunts once again. He also seems to be a bit of a controlling dude (understatement of the year), so I can definitely see him thinking about keeping pocket!Natalie and not actually helping her get back to normal—-maybe rationalizing it by thinking that she’s much easier to deal with now (plus she can’t physically hurt him when she’s polly pocket sized and emotional abuse only goes so far when you're tiny and have to rely on your ex for everything). 



Author's Response:

I'm dying right now that is entirely too accurate lol! Trev, you cunt, quit smackin' around your bitches and go find a more constructive outlet for your pent up aggression! ...Like tennis or something. (But first take Natalie to the damn hospital already, she's got lady jizz in her tooth wound (xx))

Reviewer: Bluebunbun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Sardonic Retribution

Bruh, you just deafened your ex. Major L for you. But Natalie has cool healing powers now, does this mean she's invincible to Trev's abuse/mishandling? Would he use this to his advantage? 🤔 He's such a nice, understanding guy, so probably not :) 

Is he planning on keeping his word about taking her to the hospital? Or it's just her still clinging to an empty promise? 

But loved the dialogue and Trev's messed up vore fantasies alluding to his need for complete control that he really should be talking to a therapist about. (But loved your hypothetical vore descriptions and Trev spiraling from remorse to anger while completely unaware that Natalie's ~temporarily~ deaf) 

Btw, have you thought about cross-posting this to ao3? They have a pretty decent sized collection of macro/micro stories that aren't fandom related. 




Author's Response:

But it’s also like… who hasn’t at some point wished for deafness as a temporary relief from an ex’s incessant  rambling, you know? And Trev would NEVER see the benefit of being able to further mishandle and abuse her without the burden of inflicting long term physical damage, how dare you even suggest it!

Do you suppose hypothetical Vore counts as Vore? I was sitting here staring at the tags, like, well he didn’t TECHNICALLY eat her… but he sure did think about it a lot and his morbid attention to detail certainly paints a picture 😂

I will check out ao3, thanks for the suggestion! I’m cross-posting a ~slightly~ edited down version on Wattpad (mostly just cut out all the juicy bits in the hamster loving scene lol) and I feel like it’s slowwwly gaining traction. I’m now up to SIX engaged readers (although I think one of them might be me) and somehow it’s number one in their macro category… I have literally no idea how their algorithms work to have made that happen but I’m pretty stoked 🤩

Reviewer: Bluebunbun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30 2022 Title: Chapter 7: The Cardstock Stranger and the Big Stupid Box

Woooow, no giant content? 0/10 chapter, would definitely not recommend this to anyone interested in g/t lmao. 

Jokes!!! Nah, character exploration and flashbacks >>>> giants. (For real though, this is like one of the few G/T stories that actually focuses on the characters and their lives outside of y'know, being big/being small. It's refreshing). 

But! Now we get the long-awaited Brittany and Natalie flashback! Super excited to see what an absolute sweetheart Brittany was as a tween(?).

And regarding the salaciously delicious vorish oneshot, I can't wait <3  



Author's Response:

Banter!!! Lol, thaaaank you. Yes I've also noticed a supreme lack of depth to most G/t tales, which is why it took me a while to post this because I was like, this crowd's not gonna wanna read about this girl's messed up relationship with her grandparents.

But, yeah, honestly the flashback chapters are some of my favorites, I always enjoy writing Natalie and Trev in various stages of their ruffian childhood, they're both such complex youths. I also love getting into more than just their relationship with each other; Natalie also has a complicated relationship with her brothers, and definitely with Frank the Tank, and, you know, she can be a bit of a dick sometimes, but you can kind of start to see why. 

And Brittany is just such a gem, in all stages of life (^^)

Reviewer: Bluebunbun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Sole Crushing

Dayuuuum okay, this chapter really solidified that Trev's a crazy bastard---with abusive daddy trauma, of course. Abuse really can be a cycle and looks like Trev is unconsciously repeating it. Thought you were better than that bro 😔  

Wonder who the mystery guest is going to be!

And the funeral trilogy was so real yet heartbreaking. They were so isolated from that part of their family and the mother they grew up with was completely different from her asshole family's depiction of her. No wonder she left (or was kicked out/shunned). And I'm sorry to hear about your father's passing. You really never get over the loss of a loved one, but you just have to keep on going, one day at a time. 



Author's Response:

Trev we’re all very disappointed in you. Get it together, old boy.

Low key reading this in the middle of the night but the ‘mystery guest’ line really got me lmao. Def imagining a 50’s sitcom entrance with a live studio audience. If only it was in the budget.

Her mom’s family are such dicks, making sweet little baby Natalie cry. They’re the worst.

And thank you so much, yeah, grief is lousy. It comes and it goes but you learn to live with it. 🖤

Reviewer: Bluebunbun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking

Just wanted to pop in and say that I can't wait for the rollercoaster that will be season 2! Hope 2023 has been treating you well :) 

The Good God by NymphOManiac Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Girl shrinks. Girl lands on pizza. Girl questions God's irrationally abrasive smiting.



Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8506 Read Count: 2853
[Report This] Published: October 04 2022 Updated: October 04 2022
Reviewer: Bluebunbun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06 2022 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Slice of Devyn

Poor girl, either trapped in the guts of a gluttonous teen or forced to experience the bowels of said teen---death would definitely be a sweeter alternative. 

Gotta love some f/f vore though and as always, the writing/dialogue is excellent <3 



Author's Response:

The irony is this is the first time I’ve ever actually gone through with full on vore because I always get too attached to the characters to let them get swallowed alive… and then it was so over the top gruesome with no end in sight I was like eesh sorry ‘bout that old girl.

Thanks for reading and commenting, as always (^^)

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