It's truly hard to believe this is your first story, this is amazing! One of the best reads ive had on this site. Its the flow that stands out. I like how you emphasize the size difference whilst showing Lynn's naivety, who at first doesn't fully realize how big of a threat she is for the mortals. It's also quite rare to see a Giga Giantess interact with civilians like it happens here, and you honestly nailed It! Showing the genuine and playful nature of Lynn and highlighting the dissonance between her innocent intentions and the inevitable destruction caused by her.

Also lovely how you go into detail with the destruction moments, which are one of the most important parts as they help considerably in picturing a Goddess this big. Hope to see more emphasis given to stuff like unaware feet crushes and general destruction, because you did It beautifully here.

Great stuff, i repeat, one of the best reads ive had here, i've been browsing this site for like 3 years, and ive created an account now just to make this review. Can't wait to read more from you!