Penname: licktoy [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: August 05 2006
Membership status: Member
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I love giantess stories about normal-sized dominant women and shrunk male. I like if the scene is "realistic" and the plot graduates as women slowly awake their dominant site. 

I like if a D/s relationship develops between woman and her shrunk male. If the woman uses her female-power to play and manipulate her little man. Constantly pushing the limits and turning him into her obedient little slave.


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Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2408906
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22 2016 Title: Chapter 74: Cassidy's Apartment

I think they will not be able to hide it in front of mom. The school will contact her anyway asking why Tom is not in the school - especially Miss Addison who knows about Tom may try to revenge and contact Tom's mom asking why he is not in the school ;-)

Janine was always the most creative to get Tom. So I am curious what is her cunning plan to relief her 'physical ache of want between her thighs' :-)

Btw: it is admirable performance from you to be able to write two excellent stories in parallel. Thanks.

 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: March 24 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

@Hector: I think Tom is not a masochist having pleasure from a physical pain. However I think he has a submissive site. It means he likes to be helpless and used by women for their sexual gratification.
If he is owned by a sensual dominant woman who would gently press his submissive buttons he could love to be a tiny slave boy serving his goddess.

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Date: March 27 2016 Title: Chapter 75: Janine

Hm, it would be very difficult for Janine to get Tom. Everybody is going to suspect her if Tom disappears. The only chance is to manipulate somehow Tom so that he wants to go to her but I do not think she can succeed.
Therefore I do not think she is going to get him soon. I think important person will be Tom's mother. On one side she looks busy so she cannot take care of him herself. But on the other side she wants the best for her son. So she can give her son to anybody she believes it is the best for her son ;-) E.g. to some teacher (Miss Addison?) so that Tom can continue in his studies. But she also can decide to leave Tom by Cassidy to ensure he gets a medical attention he may need in his condition. I would prefer Cassidy or Lina and if the relationship evolves in D/s direction. 



Author's Response:

I have long maitained never ever count Janine out. Ever. Things are about to heat up soon enough

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: April 20 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: I understand you do not want to advertise other stories here. But if you experienced such heart beating I would really like to read it :-) Would it be possible you provide the name or link to that story please? I think Tom's story will not be harmed if you do so.

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Date: January 12 2017 Title: Chapter 146: House Warming Gift

Hm, the whole story runs only few days. Janine really enjoyed to abuse Tom - I am not sure if she could change her personality so fast. I mean I do not trust her. I would not be surprised if her currect behavior is just another trick.

Will Tom meet her hairbrush? ;-)



Author's Response:

Yeah, the story only spans a handfuls of weeks in all though it's been over a year and change real time. how much could someone change is such a short time or is she an accomplished actress, Tom may be about to find out. Funny you mention the brush from the early chapters because it's referenced in the next chapter. :)

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Date: April 30 2016 Title: Chapter 88: Lindholm Ladies

Although I cannot wait how Tom is doing in Katie's panties I am glad you came with this "bridging" chapter. I hope Tom will stay with Katie and Cassidy for some time.

I am very very curious what you meant by your feedback on my previous comment:

"I like the idea of the fabric better than stitching his limbs in place, you see why in an upcoming chapter, there's things she can do that wouldn't otherwise be able to if he was part of her underwear... :)"

Especially what are those things which otherwise would not be possible :-).

 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06 2016 Title: Chapter 89: Back to School

Great chapter!

I like how Tom realizes that while all males lust for Miss Harwood he is in a completely opposite situation - she lusts after him. And actually not only that. She lusts for him so much she turned him into her little sex slave and uses him the most intimate way whenever and however she wants - and what more could a submissive male ask for? ;-)

The toilet scene where she rubs her juices over his face is very hot. It demonstrates how much control she has over him. She knows this slightly humiliating / torturing gesture is a treat for her little submissive slave which just arouses him and increases so his desire for her. Pleased then with the result she smiles and gently strokes his little bulge :-)

I also like very much she intends to control his orgasms. When he tries to rub his hips against her stroking finger she withdraws and says “If you’re a good boy, maybe I will let you release,” - that was an excellent moment. Controlling his orgasms greatly increases her power over him and provides new possibilities to dominate him. E.g. few days without orgasm will make him very docile and very eager to please her - I would love if you somehow incorporate this aspect into the story. (Maybe a miniature chastity device could be made for Tom in some future chapter.)

And finally I am very very very curious about that upcoming one-on-one quality time. I am kind of scary for Tom (but at the same time kind of excited) for what that pencil tube and the band are going to be used. The fact she created the tube means she wants to put something through that. Some liquid?

I really cannot wait how this continues.

 



Author's Response:

So many possibilities. I guess we shall see soon enough. I do plan to show more of miss Harwoods comfort with assuming a dominant position shortly

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10 2016 Title: Chapter 90: What Did You Do Over Lunch Hour?

I like very much Katie is much more talking to Tom in this chapter. It really improves the quality and the reading experience. If possible please continue in this and incorporate such dialogues into your next writings.

I like Katie's dominance is natural and she feels comfortable giving him orders, teasing him, humiliating him and of course using him as she wants. She clearly gets pleasure from dominating Tom and having him helpless. However she does it the way it wakes his submissive site up. She understands how to play with him to press his submissive buttons - so he is aroused and he wants to be helpless at her mercy and used :-) Actually he wants that she wants to use him :-).

I like you always bring some small details I enjoy :-). E.g. in this chapter I liked how on purpose she put down the pen tube and the elastic band in front of him just to make him nervous and excited what she is going to do to him. And then just ordering him to lay and fastening him to that tube to make him helpless - very nice moment.

Then "tormenting" helpless Tom at Janine seat by lowering her ass was also very nice. I liked she laughed when he got scary.

And then the amazing moment was when she brought him very close to the climax but then denied him the pleasure by moving him away - that was an excellent moment. I like very much she controls his orgasms - keeping him constantly aroused increases even more his desire for her. I would really love if you continue to include this teasing & denial aspect into the story :-)

I have a feeling Katie created that pen tube on purpose and she is not done with it yet ;-). 

She put her panties into the drawer and unlocked the doors. I am curious. Probably she is not going to leave the class room for long because somebody could easily discover the panties. Also if she walks without panties somebody could see it e.g. at staircase. Also teaching without panties with pen tube inside would not be probably very comfortable - maybe I am wrong. I have a feeling something else is going to happen. But what?

I am looking forward for the next chapter :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lengthy review. Based on some feedback I thought a dialogue rich chapter could help explore the dynamic forming between these two. I'm not sure the pen was comfortable for either of them but it was a means of keeping him within her for an extended period  of time. More to come 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lengthy review. Based on some feedback I thought a dialogue rich chapter could help explore the dynamic forming between these two. I'm not sure the pen was comfortable for either of them but it was a means of keeping him within her for an extended period  of time. More to come 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15 2016 Title: Chapter 91: Afternoon

I think now I understood the reason why she created that tube - to improve breathing while he is inside.

I liked the teasing & denial scene - his growing frustration and her having fun from not letting him cum.
So I am really curious what is going to happen when she discovers her little slave had an unauthorized "accident" in her panties. Will she make him understand better not to do it again? ;-) That he can cum only if he is allowed?

Also, his attitude and the way he talks to her seems like he is getting out of his submissive mood. As if he checks boundaries. Will she remind him his place? ;-)

I would love if she makes him whimpering and squirming while using him for her pleasure. And his erected miniature penis would tell her he likes how she treats him and he likes to be her little whatever she wants.

I loved the idea with the opening just for his head.

I am looking forward for the next chapter.

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2016 Title: Chapter 92: Cassidy

“Everything in the world is about sex except sex. Sex is about power.” ~ Oscar Wilde :-)

@TomSpeedy: I think the "problem" with Janine is not that she is sadistic but she is abusive. I mean there is a fine line between domination (which is satisfying for both although domme is sadistic, so it is give and take) and abuse (which is satisfying only for one of them, so it is only take). And Janine crossed that line.

 



Author's Response:

Very astute observation and distinction. We'll explained and insightful.

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Date: May 28 2016 Title: Chapter 94: Tom

Nice chapter! I liked that ignoring aspect - when after using him the whole day she just dropped him down trapped inside her soiled panties and not even looking at him she told him to stay before leaving the room - that was a very nice moment demonstrating how dominant and superior she must feel.

Also Tom likes to be dominated. However he must still learn to be respectful and obedient. E.g. his previous unauthorized ejaculation inside her panties and now he was told to stay but he left the room and almost got injured (or maybe even killed) causing possibly also big troubles to Katie and Cassidy. Also his thinking about himself like an alpha male does not indicate he feels submissive.

His attitude and behavior is in contrary with Katie's dominance so I am curious how she is going to deal with that. I think she should reaffirm her authority by an appropriate punishment. However after the punishment I would love to see Tom feels submissive and honestly regrets his behavior. And then she will give him a chance to show his regret and obtain the forgiveness ;-). After that she can say "good boy" and everything would be ok again :-).

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2016 Title: Chapter 97: Three Way

Although I did not comment recently I love how the story continues and I am very curious what comes next.

I would love to see Cassidy and Katie will step-by-step increase their superiority and dominance over Tom. Using him for pleasure, making fun of him, teasing and denying his orgasms, making him feel helpless and ignoring his whimpering and squirming. Turning him into their little obedient servant too and punishing him if he displeases them. More dominant and demanding they will be more aroused and satisfied he will be - maybe Tom could experience sub-space?

 



Author's Response:

The impending arrival of Tom's mother is the confounding factor. We will see whether of not these two have the opportunity to play with him again...

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: June 06 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

@Duggernaut:
I mean, so far, every woman owned Tom only one day/night or max few days. So on one side we could see various female personalities but on the other side there was not a chance to explore them deeper. I mean all females got just a little taste of Tom but did not have a chance to further explore their fantasies - they just scratched the surface :-).

So I was thinking it could be interesting if the environment settles a bit and Cassidy and Katie could evolve in their dominant roles and Tom could become their submissive eager little slave.
Just imagine, if Cassidy and Katie just started to scratch the surface what could it be if they can continue and take full advantage of Tom? ;-)

I think other character who would be nice to explore is Lina. However I see many disruptive aspects there - especially her daughter Janine. Maybe if Janine somehow realizes she does not have to be abusive - after all Tom is submissive and enjoys to be dominated and also he was always attracted by her. So there is no point to be abusive in order to use him her way. But I am afraid this is a strong part of her personality which cannot be changed so easily.

So I am curious how the mother will affect the direction of the story. She will need to excuse Tom in the school but I guess she will not want to announce he shrank. Probably she will want some female authority to take care of her son so that he is safe. Maybe Cassidy, Katie, Lina and mother could meet all together and decide what is the best for Tom and how to take care of him and how to share him, so that little one gets what he needs :-)

 



Author's Response:

There a still so many options available. The katie Cassidy dynamic is intestine and you're right he does seem to chamge hands quite frequently so... 



Author's Response:

There a still so many options available. The katie Cassidy dynamic is intestine and you're right he does seem to chamge hands quite frequently so... 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08 2016 Title: Chapter 98: Donatella

What a great surprise this chapter!

So aunt Donatella is a sybarite with strong appetites and she keeps Thomas Sr. for her pleasure :-D.

The smile on her face and the way how she talks to him looks like she is delighted he gave her a reason to punish him. Sounds like she is going to have some fun.

I would definitely love if you continue in this thread. I would like to hear more about her appetites and how she treats Thomas Sr.
(I would wish she is very very very dominant (but not abusive) and Tom Sr. is submissive like his grandson. I can imagine she likes he is very intelligent, gentleman and has style.)

How long is he with her?

 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12 2016 Title: Chapter 99: Wednesday Morning

I just can't wait for the anniversary chapter 100!

I am really not sure about Jessica. She is kind of childish which turns me off. But maybe we will be surprised.



Author's Response:

I know right! While I would like for chapter 100 to be epic...Two points of view two cliffhangers. Hmm in the end it will be up to the reader's whether or not it lived up to the billing. 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16 2016 Title: Chapter 100: Baby, I’d Fall For You…

Congratulation to chapter 100!

Jessica is a childish and kind of stupid girl. I really do not like such personalities in real world. Being shrunk I would dislike them even more :-)

I hope Tom is not injured. And if yes then nurse Cassidy can take care of him :-).

Lina is not very good in lying. So I am curious what Tom's mother is going to do once she realizes her trick. I am also curious what she does when she sees her son is shrunk - will she call her sister Donatella and ask for a help? 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! This one went further than I thought it might. We shall see Tom's fate soon enough...  Hmm, i wonder why the author gave us a brief glimpse of Donatella?

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2016 Title: Chapter 129: Not Feeling Lunch

I am "afraid" Tom feels bad because something went wrong in his resizing and his molecules may collapse again - this time forever ;-)



Author's Response:

Hmm that just might be an issue...

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Date: January 15 2017 Title: Chapter 147: Hello Darkness, My Old Friend

So Janine finally managed to get Tom. Her planning and talented intrigues worked very well. Even Tom trusts her again.

However because everybody knows who has Tom she still does not have a freedom she would like to have when treating Tom :-). So I am curious how she will deal with that situation. Will she somehow conspire with her mother? So that they will dominate him together?



Author's Response:

Hmm, we shall see whether the two can work together cooperatively

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16 2017 Title: Chapter 152: Habeas Corpus

I absolutelly loved her teasing dominace :-)



Author's Response:

Not quite what Tom had in mind...

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Date: April 22 2017 Title: Chapter 162: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2

I like very much the idea Tom is helpless under the control of a dominant woman. And I do not want this story ends soon.

So I definitely prefer the first alternative.



Author's Response:

As Zoltar would say, "Your wish is granted, the story continues."  :)