Penname: J - Vader [Contact] Real name: Jaylen
Member Since: August 27 2023
Membership status: Member
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Just a Gts reader looking for good Gts stories here 😁


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Sister-in-Law Troubles by EriaEverard Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4] New!
Summary:

Jim had a great suprise for his wife, but when an accidental mix-up leaves him in the possession of his younger sister-in-law, things start to get serious. Will Jim be able to get back to his wife or will he be trapped in his sister-in-laws possession forever?


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4131 Read Count: 9849
[Report This] Published: May 10 2021 Updated: March 10 2025
Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10 2025 Title: Chapter 2: Getting Settled

Wow this is amazing I absolutely love this story and Sarah is so amazing and interesting so far 

Jim is cool too

and keep the butt and farting coming because it’s easily the best part !…..gasp maybe even some burps to Jim face ? Either way you are doing great work and I can’t wait to see what happens next 

On the beach by godsen5 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

Zack was on vacation with his girlfriend Mimi's family. Everything was going fine until one day he fell asleep between the arms of Mimi and woke up a couple thousand feet taller than he was that same morning, still between his girlfriend's arms. What will he do? What will she do? How will the rest of the vacation go?

The story follows a wide variety of characters experiencing sudden, unexpected growth to gigantic proportions and focuses on the more or less laborious process each one of them must get through to acknowledge and accept their new perspective on the world and its inhabitants. Thus, it really will take a long time before entering the most common giants' tropes, but sooner or later, we'll get there. I hope you enjoy it. 

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Watersports, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Butt, Couples, Destruction, Gentle, Insertion, Maternal, Vore, Growing Woman, Giant, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 188850 Read Count: 313086
[Report This] Published: March 04 2022 Updated: June 07 2024
Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13 2023 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 - Minding the distance

Hey new reader and I have to say that this story is one of the best things I have seen on this site easily my top five favorite series from the sexy and fetish scenes to the moratily of each character and them questioning what is right and wrong or if their even human anymore which adds so much tension and stakes to the whole situation.


I do think you should at this point in the story start adding the military, police, or at least emergency response team to the mix to the situation and destruction their causing to many cities and the death of people. And add some POV from the small humans to really set the tone of Gods amongst humans and how severe the damage and death these giants are causing and gives motivation for the government and people to fight back against what they think are probably monsters.


For example.


We cut to the president giving a state of emergency speech saying he or she is mobilizing a strike force to deal with these giants and working with other countries to get their support in firepower and manpower to take them down. Then we move to some military General and high officers talking about strategies to fight the giants and get people out of the cities and then we have some scientists and data analyses saying that these giants could cause a mass level of death to the point of human exaction (This gives more weight of the situation and choices made and would also give more reason for other countries to join the fight) Then the council discuss if they should use nukes but the president shoots that down and says to use it as a last resort if all else fails. Then we see Ground forces, tanks, jets, and the navy fleet all head to each of the giants' locations to eliminate and evacuate the cities and save as many lives as they can. Then we get another speech of a commanding officer talking about what they are fighters for and stuff giving motivation to the soldiers to fight with all they got to the very end.


I think if you add this element to the story it would give more weight to the point of Zack and Todd, and I think Betty all of what they are doing would be considered morally wrong and will have consequences. That is why I think you should add the military to the mix Plus it would give you more reason for Hannah, Micheal, Jo, and others who think they are gods now to do some sexy and fun action to the humans and add more tension between the giants and how they view this whole thing.


Also If you do add the military/armies of the world to the mix when they are fighting the giant characters I would recommend not making The Giants Invicbale or saying they can’t feel pain from their attack. I just find the whole military comes to fight the giantess and they can’t harm her thing a tad bit cliche or stereotypical and sometimes hurts the tension a lot in most stories that do that here on this site. I really think you should make it so that the military (if you add them) can harm them or at least give them the threat of actual death I truly think it would bring more to the question of whether the giant characters are gods and hurt their growing egos and if they want to be seen as gods they have to teach these humans that they are now in charge. And also see which side each character is on the ones who think they are gods and shouldn’t worry about human life and the ones who do.


I also think you should bring back the POV characters of the smaller characters again so we get to see how truly massive and destructive the giant characters are and have them interact with them as well to boost the moral dilemma of the situation. Another thing you could add as well is Zack, Todd, and Betty try to reason with the military and government to talk rather than fight preventing an all-out war making them and their families the world’s number 1 enemy. Obviously, the plan fails giving them no choice but to fight back but still argue with the others that this isn’t right and all this death will be on their hands.


Again you don’t have to do this if you don’t want to but I just personally think this would be an amazing addition to the story. I’m very intrigued by how this all ends if they return to normal size or they rule the world as gods for the rest of their lives. Overall you doing an amazing job so thanks for Reading, Responding, and or considering these suggestions.



Author's Response:

Hey, thank you very much for this extensive review. I think I never answered to reviews before, but this one was so detailed it deserved a little contribution in return, and this will also work as an occasion to say something I've been considering for a while now.
Coming to the matter of your suggestion: I think you're pretty much right. Sooner or later, with so many giants spread over the territory of the (at this point it should be clear) fictional nation, any form of human response should materialize. More so, considering the interview transmitted in the city of crystals, and the whole country people story. And so far I've delayed this for some reasons. 

1) (Normal people POV) First and foremost, I don't like writing from the normal people pov. BUT, we'll get to this at the end of this response.

2) (Military) - The military option has been delayed so far for many reason:
Premise - At the beginning, the intro for this story wasn't an intro at all (there was no hint to the content of the story), it was an explanation. An explanation of the very reason behind the creation and later of the publication of this story. The concept of random people growing to giant proportion causing havoc and destruction is the core business of this whole genre, there's already plenty of content about it on this site or on every other site like this. Most likely a lot of content better than mine. The thing has been explored "objectively" from every direction through and through. We've grown every kind of person (with a striking majority of human adult women), here or there some couples, and in about 20 years of exploration I've found some rare occurrence of groups of giants in which other dynamics rather than sexual intercourse (which is always some sort of mystic sexual inebriation without much to say about real, material sex as that in which humans of our world are normally involved) are considered.
This last very small collection of the rarest gems I've learned to be what really "gets me going" and what I intensely seek in the world of macrophilia (and related areas). Those incredibly rare occasion in which we observe giants interact with others on a par through real, stakes-laden, reasoning, emoting, persuading, etc. Not just to have sex or deride the normal people condition of not being giants. And I wanted some place where to "magnify" that element/potentiality of giants' stories. Somewhere to put at the center of the story exactly the interaction between giants as normal people in an abnormal situation + the psychological process, the inner contradictions, the internal debate, the biases, etc. connected to living such an experience and to live it together with people these giants have to account for, people that don't come out of nowhere and are not just sexual objects/objectives. 
Materially speaking, I wanted giants discussing, doubting, willing and not willing, arguing and even fighting about being giants and the meaning of being such within themselves and with others. A good part of this at chapter 64 has already happened, but there's still more to come. At least in my vague plan, other reasons should emerge to be or become giants and how and why profit of this condition.
All this to clarify that the normal giants' stories tropes and situation are not the content or the intent of this story but just a mean to an end, and the end is to tell a story whose main focus is a narrative (conflicted, multi-prospective, multifarious and inconclusive) inquiry into the giant condition itself. I just didn't feel like it was something to express in some sort of argumentative discourse, but far better expressed through a story and through the voices of living characters, all of them with some depth, some motives, intents, fears, desires, limits and aspirations.

ALL THAT BEING SAID, the military intervention poses a strong threat to the possibility of the story itself:
1) The military intervene and they are easily disbanded - This is the least problematic solution because this way the characters don't have to deal with them too much and we can go back to the other ongoing conflicts; but I honestly enormously dislike when this happens in other stories. I'm not judging, to each their taste. I just find it unappealing that to the sheer fact of "gianthood" sometimes other powers are added: an unlimited control of one's own and other's size; omnipotence in general; invulnerability more in particular. I think it defuses the entire attractiveness of giants, because their size is no more the core problem but just a further feature. It's not anymore a macrophilia story but just another bad-superman/women scenario. It's great, it has a lot of fans, I'm not one of them. 
2) The military intervene and they're effective. It would immediately stop the "discussion" which is the actual story and bring the whole thing within this or that story-track about giants against the world. As I said, this is not a story told from nowhere about giants and not-giants, but a story about "the problems of being giants" told as close as possible to the perspective of the giants themselves (that's more or less why there's even a first person perspective among the others). Therefore any military intervention should be coherent with the core intent of the thing ("should" = that's the story I wanted to tell and hence I wrote, that's the story I wanted to exist and hence I published).

Therefore, the military intervention may happen as soon as it is functional to develop the core intent of the story. At this point, there's something more I'd like to bring out of the giants alone. If I were to make a prediction, I'd say that the military will find their rightful way in the matter in the Selena's story-line (mind you, the institutionalized use of violence strikes first against the non-caucasian source of problems, what a surprise!) and later propagate to the others. 

To end this, although, I want to rapidly come back to the normal people pov. As I said, I'm not interested in telling that one story, but unlike the military intervention, humans pov wouldn't infringe the core intent of the story. And yet I'd be pretty bored to write about it. THEREFORE, I wanted this one reply to be not only some sort of author's apology, but also an invite: 

- Whoever may be interested, is absolutely and completely allowed to use the canvas of this story to revisit all the events from the normal people POV.

+ There's already some characters to use (Missy and her troupe, Veronica the ambitious journalist, Mr Eltern and the kids traveling to the city of crystals or the whole crew from the farms they left behind) and even if I had here and there some vague intention to recover any of them, I'd consider canon whatever anyone would want to write about them which respects what was already told of the characters and the general story trajectory they had commenced. 

If this happens, if anyone really was interested in it, I'd be pretty open to consider the same for when and where the military show up in the story as well. 

The Incident: Mom's Secret Rooms by Panzer Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 124] New!
Summary:

A typical suburban mother named Kristen lives her life as a busy and active woman, caring friend to others, and loving mom, but she also keeps dark secrets away from her young daughter until she grows up, the hidden mysteries locked behind a pair of doors in their picturesque suburbia home. 

Behind those doors, Kristen lives her other life as a judicious goddess ruling over millions of tiny micro people who find themselves existing in her household, occupying bustling micro cites and lands, holding the fate and future of the micros within her hands and at the whim of her absolute power.  


Disclaimer:

Please be advised that this story will contain violent imagery and descriptions of graphic nature that is considered sensitive to uninitiated audiences.  No characters in this story are based on anyone real, living, or dead and are purely coincidental.  This story will not contain incestual or underage sexual content.  All references to products, items, or applications in this story are trademarks owned by their respective companies.  

This story will describe gore and death in explicit detail that may not be suitable for all audiences. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Maternal, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 374671 Read Count: 351881
[Report This] Published: April 08 2022 Updated: March 12 2025
Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2024 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Inclines

Omg yes this has to be top 10 best chapter it had heart, emotion, character development, story development, and best of all Kristen nice booty action at the pool lol also no worries about the wait dude we all have our free and busy schedules so no big deal overall this was a great chapter 

ps - I definitely enjoy the “gassy explosion lol I know it’s not your thing but I appreciate that addition and even though it might be a one time thing I am happy with that part lol *cough* hopefully *cough* there more *cough* oh boy something in my throat 

Anyway great chapter and can’t wait to see more of this and future stories 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I love that you appreciate all the emotion and development.  The booty action being a big bonus, literally.  Thank you for your patience as well. 

The gassy explosion was a last minute addition, almost didn't put it in lol.  Could be a multi-time thing, we'll see. 

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02 2024 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - The Friends We Keep

Wow great chapter - Kristen finally letting someone know her secret was surprising especially with Janelle. Figured she be on the don’t really care for lost of micro lives sides and hopefully when and if she invites more people we get at least one person that really cares about the lives of the micro lives in the cities but is super clumsy and unknowingly kills them I think that would add a fun dynamic here. Parker and Cameron being in a religious cult city was interesting. And I hope we see Justyna again she probably my favorite tiny character close second are the two new leader that Kristen elected after killing the rest in that pool chapter I can’t remember their names but I definitely like them. 

I’m very interested to see how this story develops from here and I think it would also be cool if we saw the home world(s) of the micro people trying to locate and find the cities in Kristen room or the other way around but I’ll wait and see.


now in terms of fetish and appeals for this chapter was pretty good but I do like a good info chapter plus the Kristen revealing her secret was good too so it was fine that there was a lack of action I’ll say for this chapter 


I do hope to see a full on ass/butt/ butt odor/ anal vore and just butt action focused  chapter !!!!….. yeah I like booty chapters (don’t judge me lol)  but some vore,  unaware, and hell maybe some tomboy action to.

overall great chapter and plot progression and reveal at the end can’t wait to see more!!

p.s is it a chapter per month? Not trying to rush or over work you I was just curious about when you would release a chapters  thanks 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yeah, I do want at least a few people to care about micro lives, up to a point.  Justyna is coming up again, we'll see how she's been doing.  Samantha and Elliot in Servitus will have bigger roles to play at some point. As far as home worlds of people, I've thought about that, in a way, but it might come in a different way.  Lack of action is fine at time, I get it, but I do want to add more in the next chapter.  I like butt too, I just need it to make sense when the time is right.

A chapter per month is my current output, even thought I don't want it to be, it's honestly just when I have time in my crazy life, but ideally I get to settle down to one every few weeks instead. 

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30 2024 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Above the Law

Yeeeeeeeeeeesss Ass and odor chapter is what I have been waiting for let’s goooo!!!!! Didn’t expect Elliot and Kristen to be on a date can’t wait to see more interaction with them. Janelle was awesome in this chapter simply destroying a city and being calculated to which made it more interesting!!!

Ginny be herself was nice and now we have three goddess !!! Justyan was great too trying to calm and deal with Kristin deadly situations but stays strong and composed 


overall 10/10 chapter - things I would personally like to see I’ll say now is probably vore and continue with the odor and smell stuff but I’ll leave to you and story wise I already want to see more of Elliot and maybe more  Janelle so far again great chapter 



Author's Response:

Hahaha yes, more of an odor chapter.  Yeah, I didn't want to attach the emotion to Janelle in her decision, I wanted to set it up like her character would make sense given her past and ideologies with what she has seen in her life to do something like crush the least desirable city in the entire room and act like it was a favor. 10/10 chapter is a really nice compliment, thank you so much.  I do want to add vore, I just need to make it make sense instead of forcing it, but I do have ideas in the coming chapters for some serious, crazy vore stuff. 

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10 2024 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Facades Part 1

Omg you had an accident I pray for your recovery and wellbeing.

your Glorious return came in from the heavens themselves because this chapter was awesome !!!!!

the moment I saw toilet and gore in the tags I was super curious about what would happen and what I read was …chef’s kiss!! Perfect and to top it off the ass and gas scene was by far the favorite part besides the bathroom scene lol overall perfect!!!!

the Rasha part was interesting and the impact of the previous chapter was a good transition to what happened here and really shows how Kristen is handling running a little empire granted not perfectly lol but damn she makes it look easy sometimes.

the Parker, Anton and Carmon part was intense but super interesting and wow the conclusion of this part will be massive.

overall great chapter as always glad you are okay and recovering! 

P.S - I know you did a ASS and gas scene which was fucking amazing and hope to see more of that later in the next parts and chapters but if you do a mouth scene with tinies in any of the girls mouth (probably Kristen ) and she lets out a burp on them inside her mouth or just burps on the tinies I’ll forever love you lol 

again great stuff and work, prayers for your full recovery and good health and can’t wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I had an accident a few months ago and have been in slow recovery.  I have gone into more detail on Giantesscity about what the accident was. 

And thank you for the kind rewards.  Toilet is a rare tag that I do like to write, but honestly, I don't like to write much gas stuff because it isn't my thing so I don't know how much of it will be in the future except on rare occasions where it makes sense to add it, like this chapter. 

I do like to write different things that I'm not used to, but I think it would be really cool to do a detailed mouth scene in the near future. 

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18 2024 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Interlude III

Okay, this chapter was so good the POVs from the characters, the development, and the tone of the situation were great. I love that Kristen is trying to be a better leader after Justyan's close death and do better by her people now really adds to her being a complicated character with flaws but is trying to be better which I love. Ginny was great I like how she saved the city from an ant and avoided doing too much damage and Parker saving the day was also great. The Luka part was also probably my favoirt POV in this chapter how he could and will die from Ginny passing gas since he was stuck in her colen was great to the point I actually wanted to see that happen but hey maybe another time lol. Also, no the long chapters aren’t annoying their freaking great IMO overall great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!   I was worried this chapter was going to be too much going on and too long lol.  Yeah, I really want to develop Kristen, I want to make her feel like a real person, she's going to struggle with her problems, make bad decision with her people, have fun with them, probably still kill to many of them in careless ways... Yeah, the Luka part, I kinda wanted readers to use their imagination about how he dies inside of Ginny since I don't really like writing gas or scat stuff specifically. 

A Rushed Marriage. by Edgedej4 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author unless otherwise advised. No references or such of non public domain property were intentionally utilised in this work. No copyright infringement is intended. All characters are over the age of 19.

Exiled from his previous home, the corrupt Kingdom of Vascar. Leon vi Baster the squire is thrown into a new country. Where he is forced to integrate into a new culture and society where giantess roam and powerful beasts dwell. 

However he soon finds out his new life may not be so bad after all, as he begins anew with a new opportunity to become a better person. Stepping into a brand new political climate, Leon and his newly wedded giantess partner, try to change their society in a way never done before in its blood soaked history.

(As of 20/05/2024, the first story arc has been completed).


Categories: Unaware, Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Nose, Odor, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: World of Celessa
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 194129 Read Count: 369680
[Report This] Published: May 28 2022 Updated: December 20 2024
Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27 2023 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9. Reunion.

Hi, a new reader that just caught up to with this amazing story.


Honestly a really good chapter overall showing how Leon is still inexperienced how war isnt all black and white added with the question what life will look like after the war is won by either side preferably by ranate but his doubt about if th other giantesses will agree to sparing and treating the couqered lands and people kindly and build a better country and empire that treats all with equel rights and respect as people and not abuse them. It was really writing well on that aspect and how anglo was giving good and thought out points about the aftermath and results of war and its victor. 


I’m really curiso in finding out who anglo really is later and what might his backstory be. 


The reauion between Ana and Leon was very nice to see and how they relationship as husband and wife has grown and develop too avery caring and loving one that could lead a way to a better future for the the kingdom. Then when Ana gave her answer on hwat she plans to do with the people and lands of Marvialasia was a very interesting one that could beter help with changing the minds of many that were told to hate giants so very good job with detail of Ana’s plans.


The ending does leave me wondering on what will happen to Vascar now will the people surrander, will Ana give Leon another task to help the  innocent people, or something else ? either way this was a great chapter even if it lacks the fetish marteial or content that most people would like to have but it was a start 10/10 chapter for me.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I appreciate the high praise. 

I did show a lot of the start of this chapter with Anglo and Leon, and as you said the whole interaction does show that war isn’t all black and white. Both sides of this conflict (both countries) have done really horrible things to one another, and it will take a new approach to amend such a relationship. Hence where Ana and Leon come into play. The inclusion of Anglo was someone who sided with Ranate but still was held up to an old perception of them, which I thought would shed light on an interesting perspective. His identity will probably come in later, but he is neither too important or a nobody. Simply someone to take note of. 

Now as for how to deal with Vascar, I’ll probably leave it up to future me to wrap that plot point around. For what I can say about it right now is that I’d like some of the consequences from the previous chapter to be addressed through Ana and Ranate capturing the king. But that’s it for now. 

Once more, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12 2023 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9. Reunion.

Hey me again I wanted to offer some feedback for the story added with some ideas for future chapters and plot development for this incredible story you have.


Pure Fetish 


Okay right off the bat I’ll just say the pure fetish and fan service chapter have been amazing the way you describe them has been amazing rather it is about Feet, Boobs, butts, and ect they all have been great. I’ll say it would be nice to get a chapter that focuses on odor and farts again like in “Lisa’s Victims” (which I hope we get a sequel or another like that again by the way) but that is just my personal favorite fetish type (Ordor - Burps/Farts, Butts, and tomboyish stuff) Regardless you've been doing great there. 


If I had to rank what been your best fetish descriptions so far in the story not say you need to focus on this more than others but what has worked the most description-wise. 


1 - Butt/Ass

2 - Feet

3 - Breast

4 - vore/mouth play 

5 - Entrapment 


Some fetishes I think would be fun additions to the story You don’t have to add them of course but just a suggestion or ideas to further Appeal to other fetishes 


  • Unaware 

  • BBW

  • Nose

  • Burps

  • Scat


Okay Now that we got that out the way I’ll get to more story based feedback


The Good


Relationship - So far the relationship between Leon and Ana has been so good to borderline perfect the care, trust and love they have for each other has felt so natural and almost realistic excluding the part where there no giants in real life and people don’t get married Immediately when they first meet but still very good. Hell, I’ll even say Emily and John’s relationship has been good and they have barely been in the story lol. Overall this is by far my favorite part of the whole story.


Politics/Strategies - The explanation of the politics, laws, and how things are run in each country of been so good they feel so real and really flow with the story so far and you have shown the consequences of each choice and decision characters make so well and added well to the tension keeping me on edge. The battle strategies have also been a major highlight too they feel so well thought out.


Mortality/Moral conflicts  - The way you describe how the wars and Battle are not black and white and that there is a grey area for all the conflict in the story have been by far the best aspect of this story. How Ana is forced to kill to show the strength of her leadership and what she will do to protect her kingdom and its people and how Leon thinks about what happens after the war is hopefully won and what will happen next has been very thought-provoking and super throughout.


The Mix 


The Main Antagonists/ Villains - I’m going to be honest the main threat of Marvialasia has been a lack of better terms alright. The motivations have been pretty good if I’m being honest I’m just not really feeling the threat that they're supposed to present. I understand Vascar was more of a miner threat or just a pawn in the Marvialasia’s plans so that’s okay but I just feel like we need more from Marvialasia. I also don’t feel like I understand what they plan to do to attack Ranate (was it a using a deadly curse on them?) If you haven’t explained the plan yet then that's fine I’ll wait If you did explain their plan in a chapter could you explain it or summarize it? Then I understand the Prince hasn’t been introduced yet as a character fully but he really needs to bring it as an antagonist. Also, why is he called the prince if he is the sole ruler of Marvialasia Should he be the king unless his father or mother, or both are still alive?


The Bad


The Creators/animals/beast - This is more of Nitpick I feel like the craters haven’t been utilities that well I feel like they should have a present in a magical world. The dragons, Fairies, or other beasts that have yet to be introduced should have a presence kind like the dragons in How to Train Your Dragon or other fantasy-based movies or shows that show how Majestic, Beautiful, and mind-blowing/unbelievable the fantasy world and it’s creatures are. But again that is just a nitpick Honestly you don’t have to change that aspect of the story.



But that mine Good, Mix, and Bad for the story aspect I hope this feedback is helpful.


Here are some ideas/suggestions that could improve the story a bit help with certain aspects of the story and bring it up a level.


Ideas and Suggestions


1 - I think when you introduce the prince of Marvialasia it should show how truly cruel he is but also show he is smart, cunning, Manipulative, and unpredictable for our main characters to show that he is willing to win at any cost. Also maybe shows he is a great fighter and maybe loves combat testing his strength but shows rage knowing he could never defeat a giant single-handedly. Probably would be good to show he well knowledge and is a powerful mana/magic user as well.


2 - Another aspect you could do for the Prince shows his upbringing either he had a cruel father training him and abusing him and maybe his mother or he was always told he was a Disappointment by his no matter how hard he tried parents to show how his past shaped him to be this way and rule his kingdom with an iron fist or maybe his was born to be cruel and evil regardless of his childhood and past.


3 - Another cool idea you could do is that during his thirst for power and his intentions to destroy all of Ranate and its people he seeks Dark, unnatural, forbidden ways that no human or non-human has dared to seek. For example - for years he has tried to find more ways to crush the giantess of Ranate and finds ancient text that speaks of a Dark and demonic powers cable of granting the power and strength to spilled Mountains called (Dark magic or Dark Mana or something like that) that was sealed away. Although granted great power it also Corrupts the mind, soul, and body into demon-like monsters. He sees this as a way to bring victory not only to his kingdom but to mankind across the world and rule it like a god. Finding this power he merges with it and is able to control it making his eyes glow and his skin turn pure black with horns sticking out his head. He then gives this power to his strongest soldiers/generals and sends them to Ranate borders to test their newfound power. I think this or something similar would massively help bring the threat of the prince and Marvialasia to a whole new level and make the audience feel the threat truly.

 

4 - Another way to bring some more tension or more motivation for Leon to stop and end the war is maybe to show a former friend and/or lover for Leon before he meets Ana. She was a childhood friend who was kind to him and had feelings for him to the point where she wanted to marry him. Then she joins him and his former rebellion against Vascar Throne but on a mission that goes wrong, Leon believes she died sacrificing herself for him, and others living with him believe she died. When actually she was captured and sold off to Marvialasia and after weeks in a cage he was picked by the prince to be her sex slave becoming his favorite toy for months. When Leon gets words of this his anger and rage for the Prince increase making it personal and maybe causing some drama between Leon and Ana but not too much it ruins their marriage.


5 - Following the previous idea after Leon, Ana, Ranate, and other alliance armies defeat Marvialasia and the prince Leon is too late to save his former friend and lover from before he becomes king of Ranate but also find out why she was still alive with the prince. She had his child a baby boy and a future heir to the kingdom of Marvialasia by blood right. While she dies in Leon's arms she makes him promise to take care of her child and raise him to be a better man and person than his father. Leon agrees and promises to raise him as his own and she finally passes away. I think this would be an amazing twist that puts Leon in a tough situation of how to raise and learn to love a child of your worst enemy but also the child of her former lover and friend that also include Ana. It would also be a fun idea for a sequel or spin-off story in this world.


Just some ideas that don’t require a paragraph to explain and me just spitballing some ideas



1 - More Humans with unnatural or superhuman strength. 


2 - Introduce Giant Hunter people who train and breed to hunt and kill Giants with no issues knowing their weaknesses and weak points and equipped with tools and weapons to kill them with ease. Kinda like Attack on Titan.


3 - Showing more of Leon in leadership roles showing he can lead both humans and nonhumans like Ana.


4 - I think It would be good for Leon to have a moment where he gives an Encouraging speech to his fellow humans of Vascar/ and former soldiers of Marvialasia showing he is good at Uniting people and giving them hope as a hidden skill or something like that.


5 - Have Leon form a fellowship of humans and no humans alike kind like lord of the Rings.


I hope this feedback and some of these ideas and suggestions were helpful and gave you some inspiration for future chapters and spin-offs set in this world of course. So thanks for reading and or responding and good luck for your future chapters and stories I know they’ll be great.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the feedback! 

I know I say it quite a bit every couple of chapters but really feedback helps a lot, and I do enjoy reading it. So just for taking the time to write a lengthy bit of feedback I have to thank you. 

To start off with, the good. These 3 areas are roughly the parts I’ve focused on the most for this story. So I’m glad to hear you’ve enjoyed them. Namely the politics. I will admit that I think I could have done the relationship a bit better still. However, the politics and moral conflicts were really the main appeal of this arc of the story. 

Now for the mix. The antagonist figure. I actually think you’ve given a generous rating of this as a “in the mixed” category. I personally don’t think I’ve done that much for them yet, and yes while there is room to expand on them, I didn’t actually begin this story in mind with an extreme amount of detail planned surrounding the Prince. A lot of this comes from inexperience as a writer, I hadn’t thought of ways to actually go about this. So, the reality is that the antagonist for this arc may really end up being lacklustre following the story plan I’m going off of.  However, that being said, it has come to my attention that I should write more for the Prince and about their upbringing and how this all came to be on their side. They are however not technically the sole antagonist figure for the arc, as people that oppose Ana’s rule such as Lisa for example can also be apart of this conflict. I’m hoping to expand on these aspects a bit, but I am aware that they may come across a bit lacklustre.

Now for the bad. Utilisation of the more fantasy elements of the story like magical beasts. The biggest reason I’ve avoided them here is really because they didn’t fit in to the current narrative of the story. Or this current arc I should say. That isn’t to say the story will definitely go way beyond this arc, but for the Marvialasian conflict I didn’t see much place to add them in. 

Some clarifications, the plans on how Marvialasia was planning to attack hasn’t been properly revealed yet. The Prince is also a Prince rather than a king or queen simply due to how his principality style country works, where the person in charge is given the position of a prince or princess. Which is different to how Ranate operates at this point in the story where their highest position is Queen. You can roughy extrapolate the influence and power or a country with this, where emperor and empress mean well off country, and Prince and Princess can mean from a smaller or less established country. 

As for the suggestions. I like the idea of point 1 and 2, but I don’t think Leon is at the stage to be doing point 3,4 and 5 just yet. To expand on point 2, it’d have to be somehow related to magic and magecraft. 

As for the praise surrounding the fetish content itself. Thanks a lot! I really like how the butt crush scenes turned out, personally though I’m not a fan of foot stuff so I’m glad people still enjoyed it. I’ve been working on another side story to try and appeal to other niches of the fetish too, though it isn’t close to being done. Once again, I really appreciate the feedback. Sorry if i couldn’t respond to everything, but I will definitely consider some of this stuff going into writing. 

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20 2024 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20. The New Marvialasia

Great chapter and insight into Lez and her semi new life in Marv and its people and the aftermath of the war. The new characters were great and the smut scenes were great too!

overall great work 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Marooned by minuss Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

A shipwreck with hundreds of survivors on a deserted island. Three of the survivors find themselves much bigger than everyone else. How will it play out? Gilligan's Island or Lord of the Flies? Read on and see.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 65412 Read Count: 167356
[Report This] Published: November 03 2022 Updated: February 13 2025
Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18 2024 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Jim

I’m predicting or think it would be interesting to see the small folks react to what Jamie did to Jim and one of the small folks rallies the others to stay away from the three giants especially Jamie and now believes that their safety and survival are no longer safe being around the giants and most survive with their fellow small folk and they start their own camp away from the giants leaving Justin and Daisy with their giants partners not wanting to have those Associated with the giants. Then later on the small folk create weapons to defend themself from the giants wood speaks, arrows, and traps to hurt them if they choose to attack. Thus leading to a conflict between the two sides. Again just a prediction but it would be cool to see 



an overall great chapter can’t wait to see what happens next.

Alone in the House by Stormeez Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

What seems to be a nice family gathering turns into a night of horror when they all shrink to nano size all over the house with no one to call for help….unless they can reach Abigail, youngest daughter and mother of three, one who would unknowingly bring the terror to them all.


Categories: Mouth Play, Giantess, Vore, Butt, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3788 Read Count: 15500
[Report This] Published: December 17 2022 Updated: December 11 2023
Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31 2023 Title: Chapter 2: 2: Soda Torture

Wow this is amazing dude I know it’s been almost a year since you posted a new chapter but you should definitely continue this story because you are so talented 😁👍

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2023 Title: Chapter 3: 3: Drinks on Abigail

This chapter was amazing and sorry that you had a very bad year but I hope you have a great year here on out and I can’t wait to see what happens next in the final chapter and hopefully what you do for your next story 

Laura's Big Game (Commission) by Zawz Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Laura is the star athlete of the school and also one of its biggest trouble makers. After being given the power to grow to enormous sizes, she uses her new powers to terrorize the city and its unfortunate citizens.

Growth story done as a commission for a friend


Categories: Humiliation, Butt, Teenager (13-19), Destruction, Crush, Violent, Slow Size Change, Odor, Muscle, Feet, Footwear, Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16538 Read Count: 23672
[Report This] Published: August 14 2023 Updated: January 05 2025
Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Growing Pains

Wow this has been amazing I hope to see more 

A Cure for Depression by contentwelike Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Leon tries to cure his girlfriend Lily's depression with an injection developed by his friend. It does work, kind of.

A city rampage story.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Breasts, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Growing Woman, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15233 Read Count: 35898
[Report This] Published: August 22 2023 Updated: November 26 2023
Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow that was amazing- I hope this helps you with motivation sorry that I’m not the greatest at deep reviews but I hope this is enough because you are really talented and good 



Author's Response:

Hey, thank you for your kind words! I am glad you like the story. You did help :)

The Bigger They Are... (Commission) by Greenanon Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Ricky is talented kickboxer determined to fight a "Grower," one of the women with mysterious size changing abilities who have been oppressing his city! Well "oppression" is maybe the wrong term, mostly they've just been giving snuggles and calling people cute, but Ricky will teach them that normals are not to be trifled with!

A silly one shot about a man picking a doomed fight against an ever growing giantess. Commissioned by an anonymous reader.


Categories: Growing Woman, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3168 Read Count: 3929
[Report This] Published: September 11 2023 Updated: September 11 2023
Reviewer: J - Vader Signed
Date: September 11 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay I’m sorry this was too good to be a one shot hopefully we see this characters and world again …… please 🥺🥺🙏



Author's Response:

It's probably just going to be a one shot unless the commissioner really wants more, but I might revisit the concept in a more detailed story at some point.

Echoes of Lilliput by MXP20 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

In an alternate world where one’s height determines societal power, Jennifer, an average-sized human from our reality, is transported to a dimension inhabited by Lilliputians, a race of people merely three inches tall. Unlike Gulliver’s Travels, where Lemuel Gulliver held absolute power over the Lilliputians, in this world the race of small beings is deadly and hellbent on killing Jennifer. Struggling to adapt and survive in this strange land, Jennifer forms an unlikely alliance with Kara, the smallest Lilliputian in the land, who becomes something more than just an enemy.

As Jennifer struggles to find a way home, she must navigate the odd prejudices and political world of the Lilliputians. Jennifer and Kara find themselves caught in the crosshairs of a ruthless war waged by the tyrannical Queen Lysandra. Her army, led by a stoic and unwavering general, is hell-bent on eradicating all giants and those who dare to ally with them. Facing insurmountable odds, Jennifer and Kara must confront each other's differences and learn to work with one another if they want to survive.

Vore, crush, adventure, quests, and best of all, an unlikely F/f relationship that will make your heart melt.


**My attempt at creating a novel with intriguing plot, character development, and worldbuilding.**


Categories: Insertion, Adventure, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Gentle, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 167994 Read Count: 98580
[Report This] Published: September 15 2023 Updated: May 11 2024
Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Kara

Damn it just got a whole lot better with this chapter I already love Kara as a character and now we know giants where here before but surprisingly they were smaller and Jen becoming least forgiving each time is great 👍 nice job dude 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued support!  :D

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01 2023 Title: Chapter 6: Verdant Vale

Omg I was so scared for Kara and Liam and big fat dumbA$$ at the end but hey at least he gave a chance for communication between the two sides now but I doubt that will stop the violence and destruction for now but it a start overall great chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2023 Title: Chapter 1: The Experiment

This was a great three chapters of the story dude you did a very good job on the violence and morality of the whole situation for Jen so far

I’m interested in knowing why the Lilliputians are so violent to her at first and if there good ones that will later help her and her companions

another Question is if Brobdingnagians exist as well making the whole situation worse for Jen but who knows.

overall a really great start can’t wait for more 👍



Author's Response:

Yay, my first review!

We will learn why Lilliputians are the way they are, as the story progresses. That goes for your question with Brobdingnag. We'll just have to see what's in store for Jen. Sorry for dodging your questions, but I don't want to spoil anything.

Stranded by BobGreen Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: News of the commercial airliner ROC 777 was displayed on the screens of all three nations. Despite being a Brobdingnagian plane, it also transported Gulliverians and Lilliputians simply because they took little to no space. The Gulliverian control tower had lost its signal before it even entered mainland and with the plane, its passengers as well. This story follows the perspective of three survivors. Benn, a Lilliputian contractor, Gail, a Gulliverian fresh graduate, and Lorraine, a Brobdingnagian tourist in an unlikely alliance where each of them will have to play to their strengths to survive in a mysterious island they have crashed to.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Gentle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3231 Read Count: 2631
[Report This] Published: September 18 2023 Updated: September 18 2023
Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

A very good start for this story and the characters so far are very interesting and I can’t wait to see how they end up stranded and will work together 



Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story I've written. Also very happy to hear you enjoy the characters. Even though Gail is the Gulliverian like us(or at least... I assume you're normal sized lol), I've made Benn to be the main lens because I do find the 'ant watching a god' perspective much more interesting than 'gods watching ants'. Hope you look forward to seeing them getting stranded next week!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.