The Life of a Giant is very difficult. Join Valerie Bradson, Lorraine Pruess, Jennifer Stark, and Trent Berlinger as they try to live a normal life among normal sized people.
EDIT (Mon April 16) Spacing of the text has been fixed so it's not so...spacious between paragraphs.
Am not to sure about Lorraine so far she seem like a nice girl but she is a bit too careless and dosen't watch out for the people and things around her. If she dosen't get more careful its only a matter of time before she hurts someone.
Any way you have been doing a good job on the story and its been fun to read.
Am really enjoying how this story is going, all the characters are fun to read about.
Its good to see how tall they are also, it gives the reader more of an idea to what they look like with out to much thinking about how tall they are to the world around them.
Keep up the great work, you are doing great.
That was a very cute and sweet chapter with them singing with Charles. Its good to see some people coming to see them. I really like Trent he is such a cute and sweet person to read about.
Valerie and Raymond are a fun to read about, they both seem like fun people to be around.
Am enjoying the story very much. I look forward to more.
Am really enjoying reading this story and the character are fun to read about. The story has a nice and fun story line.
I hope to see that Trent and that girl he likes met up soon, i find it cute to see see how a date will go with them.
I look forward to reading more, you have been doing a good job on the story.
What happens when certain people around the world go missing for twenty-four hours? No one knows what happened or why? Even the missing can't tell you what happened. This is the story of Sarah Peterson, one of the missing.
Its good to see that you are still around and wrighting new stories. I been wondering if you are still around or if you left. I enjoy reading your stories, you have a fun way of wrighting to your stories and the fact that you put both male and female giants is a good thing with me.
I will be looking forward to reading more of this story.
Am happy that you are back.
Thanks Angel! I miss you too! Been working on my story over at another site. I write only when I feel I have a story. I enjoy hearing your kind words. Thanks!!!
This is turning out to be a fun story to read, i enjoy reading each new chapter that you do.
As always i enjoy the fact that you have both female and male giants in your stories and not just limiting to it just being females like so many other stories that i come across.
I look forward to finding out what the plane the aliens have for the ones that went missing.
Great work.
A newspaperman has to solve a curse placed upon a set of triplets, a curse linked to their names.
This is mostly an SW story, with a GTS introduced in the last sequence.
Disclaimer: Any real people or fictional characters referred to are used for entertainment purposes only, no defamation nor infringement is intended.
A very cute and lovely story to read, i enjoyed this story. All the girls are cute, i like Barbi she sound like a cutie and so was Penny/Summer.
A woman who, as a girl, began shrinking rather than growing sets out to share her story, and winds up sharing much more.
That was a very cute and sweet story with a bit of sadness to it that she will keep getting smaller and smaller.
Still a very nice story.
That was a very happy ending to a lovely story. Am happy they were to find a way to be together forever and ever.
Nick Avery -- tall, handsome, and well-liked-- is paired with a short, unpopular know-it-all named Michelle for a chemistry project. The experiment goes awry; Nick begins to shrink as Michelle grows taller and more beautiful. But he soon learns that Michelle had actually planned this all along, and he now must come to terms with his new position at the bottom rung of the social ladder. Only Michelle can help him now, but she is determined to make the most of her newfound power over her once-mighty lab partner.
Am starting to feel sorry for Nick, Michelle is playing him, she is putting on an act being all sweet and nice to him making him thinking he is incharge when he in truth is not. Its all part of her plan.
Am starting to not like seeing Nick so easy manipulated by her. Yes he was a dick and asshole when he was normal but he has gone through more than enough now for some stupid experiment.
He has been gone for a week or so, his family has to be worried about him. Its time for the experiment to end, Michelle has made her point enough.
Am just feeling bad for Nick now.
Well, I'm sorry to hear that. Personally, I love seeing male characters get manipulated and tormented like this, but I know it might not be for everyone.
On a practical note, I didn't do a good job of making this clear but I wrote in a part where Nick's parents go off on a cruise during this week in the story, the idea being that they don't know about what's happening to Nick back home. (I went back and added this and a couple other things to the early chapters about a month or two ago, but it might have flown under people's radar ... sorry if that's the case for anyone)
At this point poor Nick has been reduce to nothing more than a little kid with a mind that is about the same. Michelle is really no better than Nick was when he was before all this.
She may be a little wrost now that she is toying with basically a little kid.
I don't see the enjoyment in seeing anyone getting manipulated and tormented like this, some revenge is nice hear and there but that has been long gone by now.
This is not my type of story, i dislike seeing what is going on and feel bad for Nick each time i read it.
I read it because am seeing how will this play out and read it long enough to not stop reading it. Am hoping to see a good out come for Nick by the end of it.
Well, of COURSE an angel of life would say that ... lol, just kidding. But for me it's all about the manipulation and torment, but I know it's not for everyone.
I dislike what both of them had become not that they were any better at the start of the story, he was a big jerk and she was a know it all jerk.
Now she is a bad know it all jerk and he is just feeble. She just took everything from him, as you wrote it went way beyond some chemistry project for a grade. She could have just ruined his whole life and his family’s also. He is a son, his family when they see what had become of their son they are not going to be very happy at Michelle.
Yes he did try to rape her and he may have to pay for it like some of the things she put him through but after a point she went beyond that, she took his free will, his body and his mind.
The best way I see this ending is something in the middle for the both of them. She restores his mind but his not the jerk he was, she gives him his height back but not all the way maybe leaving him around six feet tall and not quite as athletic as he was but still on the handsome side.
Michelle at the cost of restoring of his mind, loses a bit of her intellect that she had at the start of the story, at the cost of restoring his height loses almost all the height she gained from him leaving her around 5’6 but keeps most of the looks she gained
like her curves and such and is a bit more on the athletic side now.
As for giving Nick the formula to return him, she might have to try giving it by a needle into him with her drinking it.
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My thoughts on the whole manipulation and torment thing.
I find that at some point it wouldn’t even be that. He couldn’t really fight back and was helpless with little to no way of fight back to her what would make the whole torment thing worthless, if you are going to torment someone for sexual satisfaction wouldn’t you want them to be able to fight back somewhat at the point Nick has reach Michelle might as well tormenting a baby or a small animal seeing as he couldn't fight her back.
There was manipulation throughout the story, but once again he reached a point that it didn’t feel like he was getting manipulated by her as it felt he lost all his free will to even get manipulated by her.
Since am not into that type of thing and dislike it my thoughts on it may not sound right to what I want to say.
Sure man, I get it. We all have our own particular sexual proclivities, so that's cool if yours don't align with mine. There isn't much to be done about that.
As for your later point; "if you are going to torment someone for sexual satisfaction wouldn't you want them to be able to fight back." Not necessarily, but I see your point. I usually prefer stories where the shrunken male always resists and tries to fight back (that's partly why I don't read much micro-gts or stuff like that, since at that point it's utterly hopeless to fight back). However, at the same time, it can also be very appealing to me at times to have a guy utterly helpless and the girl just torment him for the fun of it. Like, for instance, a BDSM scenario where the guy is completely immobilized and helpless and the girl is free to do anything she pleases to him. May be a similar kind of thing here in this story. So what you're saying is not necessarily true for everyone.
Also, to me, the story has become even more interesting now, as now he actually finds himself wanting to be tortured -- it's not really even about him resisting her anymore, he actually wants to be degraded and humiliated -- and all the interesting implications that brings. So yeah, this story is definitely catered to people like me who can relate to that type of paradoxical or at times self-destructive desire to be fully helpless at the hands of a cruel/dominant woman, and therefore to an outsider who might not share this desire, this concept probably doesn't quite 'click' or make sense.
How tall is Michelle and Nick now?
Is Michelle's plan is she thinking this formula is going to make her rich? I hope its not one of these formulas that only work for females and not work for males because that is getting so old to hear.
If you are going to make a formula, make one that can work for both female and male.
I find it was arrogance on her part to think that others were all beneath her. What kind of thinking is that? Does she think she is something more than them? Because she is not above them she is still just a stupid human also.
Oh am smarter, taller, better looking than everyone now so that must make me above them. As others could hardly believe that she was still a human being like them.
They are stupid for thinking that like she is something more than human. She is still human and a power hungry drug junkie.
I sill hope to see Michelle get some kind of payback to for what she did to Nick. She did so many bad things to him just for her own self. So she got taller and a little bit more smarter and grew curves she is not better she wont be till she changes Nick back.
I do look forward to the end of this and to see what happens to them.
Heights: I have Michelle at just over 7' tall now, and Nick at 18 inches. I debated whether to put in more exact measurements throughout the story or leave it more vague and partly up to the readers' imaginations. But if enough people want specific height references I'm fine with going back and put them in here and there.
"I hope its not one of these formulas that only work for females and not work for males because that is getting so old to hear. If you are going to make a formula, make one that can work for both female and male." --> I wouldn't say that it's a matter of whether it's "getting old" or not -- there's a reason why the female-only route is common, and that's because it really is a fundamental decision based on the author's own preferences and what he enjoys. I for one would hate a story where males are able to grow along with females; it just doesn't make sense for the type of story and interactions I'm interested in. Not to reveal where I'm going with Pariah necessarily; just saying in general.
Basically: I respect your right to voice your own opinions, but it won't be able to sway me at all unless it's something I also enjoy (which, in this case, is not the case).
Likewise with Michelle's "god complex". Certainly, you're right, just because she's bigger/prettier/smarter doesn't mean she's ACTUALLY better than everyone, especially not in a moral sense -- but that's the point, actually. Men look up to her and they know it's wrong to hold her above all other women just because she's hotter/taller/more imposing ... but it's because it feels so morally wrong that it also feels exciting and taboo and they can't help but want to worship her, even as wrong as they know that is. And likewise with Michelle, knowing she's able to inspire such impulses in men now, it makes her want to abuse her power in ways she knows are immoral in the conventional sense of the word.
So again, like I said last time, you kinda have to have the right sexual fetish to enjoy this kind of thing, otherwise the story doesn't really make sense. And again, I don't mind these conversations we're having, I find it interesting to see different people's perspectives; just realize, though, that there's no one "right" answer and everyone views things differently.
Glad you're looking forward to the rest though :P
How many chapters are there before the end of the story?
And without giving too much away, would you say that the end of the story will not be a happy one, with Nick dead or so small that he will not have much of a life and with his family being sad for the lost of their son.
I dislike an ending where it ends bad for Nick and for Michelle to get away with what she did and she goes on to live a good life being tall and beautiful. His family is going to want their son back and to have Michelle pay for what she did.
In true i feel like the story just being drawn out now, to see how much suffering and tourcher Nick can be put through. Each chapter is of him suffering in someway with Michelle not looking like she really cares what happens to him or thinking with what his family will do once they find out.
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I just want you to know am trying not to sounding too harsh on what i say and seem like am putting you or your story down.
I just want to tell you how i feel on this story. After some point in the story it just started giving me a bad feeling to what was happening, but i want to see how it ends and thats way am still reading it even if am not liking what is going on.
It's close to the end now. I don't want to even say if it'll be happy or sad at this point because that'll give too much away. Sorry you haven't enjoyed all the suffering and torture -- that's the part I enjoy the most. But anyways, the story will wrap up pretty soon.
This is a Felarya fan story, so fair warning. Also, obviously there will be giantess/shrink content, but I am also trying to tell a story and practice character development, so not every chapter is gonna be jam packed with eroticism. Just want readers to keep this in mind and not bother reading if that's all they're looking for.
Summary:
Cedrick finds himself stranded in the wilderness of Felarya with no recollection of how he got there. On top of that, the amnesia event some how turned him into a neko when he swears he was human. Struggling to find answers and return himself back to normal, Cedrick uncovers some unsettling secrets, which only serve to thrust him into ever greater danger.
Disclaimer: Brief character appearances of Anko and Jade are owned by Karbo and Ravana3k respectively. All other characters are original. Rated for violence, gore, adult themed content and language.
Am enjoying the story so far. I like the job you have been doing on wrighting it. I enjoy nekos and look forward to how Cedrick deals with becoming one and what else may happen with him.
Good job.
Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'm really enjoying trying to take this angle of story writing.
Randall and Ashley are complete opposites but are the perfect match for each other.
This story is a little different but still a nice change of pace. Please review
It is a very sweet and nice start to the story. I like both of the characters so far and how shy and timid Ashley is. I will look forward to reading more.
In my opinion you seem like you are doing a nice job on the story. Sorry thats all i think of to say.
Thanks, I will mature the character further but it will take some time. For Randall I wanted someone who doesn't let his size get to him but does see the limits of what he can do. Ashley on the other hand will mature further but I wanted her to be someone that Randall can rely on while still treating him as an equal which many people don't. Anyways thanks and continue reading!
The story of how and why a world went from normal size to a world of mega giants.
Did you get tired of mega world so you made a world that is even bigger? I wonder if the ones from Drene Earth are going to look down on smaller ones as man bugs like the ones from mega world do or will they be nicer to them?
I wonder if you are open to having other peoples characters crossing over to yours?
I'm not tired of mega world. As for how they (DE) will treat people from smaller worlds. For the most part in will be nicer than the megas. But there will be some that will be mean. But the majority will be gentle.
As for other peoples characters crossing over to mine, I'm willing to consider it. What do you have in mind?
A love story between a boy and a girl of different proportions in a multi-sized world.
Am just wondeing about the size for the United States or for anyone that is a mix race. How tall would someone be if they were 50% finnish and 25% spanish and Irish but grow up in the United States?
Hallo:
That's a very good question, and you're not the first one. I guess in this universe, people started changing sizes after the mix of races. So someone of many heritages could exist, if it happened before the sizes got too uneven to mix anymore. I honestly didn't really get into this point too much because it's still fiction. Like many people don't really explain why giants don't collapse with their own weights or how do tinies breath oxigen with tiny lungs, etc. I just ask the reader to go with it. People from different countries are different sizes, no further explanation needed.
Again, however, thanks a lot for commenting. I appreciate this kind of questions too.
Wholia.
This is a series of mini bios of the GTS-goddesses that have appeared in my stories.
Alice that hug Harold to death, is that Harold that is a GT-god?
It's a different Harold.
How tall is Michelle to crush a whole state under foot?
Michelle has the power to grow up to 10,000 miles tall. (And to get as small as 500 feet)I can't remember off hand how tall she was at the time. But it was many miles tall.
