Penname: Maximus [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96870 Read Count: 586545
[Report This] Published: August 24 2011 Updated: March 31 2012
Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: March 20 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Uh oh, been 17 days since the last update, has anyone been in contact with Jack? He hasn't even responded to the reviews which is very unusual. Hope this one doesn't get left in limbo, I created an account just to comment on it! If any writer deserves a break it's Jack, the way he generated chapters was ridiculous, just hope this one doesn't fall into the bottomless pit of unfinished stories, it's too good to be left incomplete. 

Oh well, if this is the end, I'm just going to pretend the last scene didn't happen, i could live with that ending :D



Author's Response:

thanks for your patience. i'm more or less back, and i intend on finishing the story soon as it was intended originally.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: February 22 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Freezer

Carly should have been using these kind of methods all along instead of trying to make Jack see how much better off he is with her rather then someone like Jenny. Sure, if the choice was between Jenny and Carly I'm sure Jack would pick Carly every time. But when the choice is between Jenny, Carly and freedom, well of course he is going to choose freedom. Carly's delusional thinking has cost her some valuable time, time that could have been spent extracting that password with methods such as the one she is using now. Personally, I would have sung that password the moment I saw the ice cream appoaching, that's going ot be brutally cold, and tossed in the freezer to boot! Can't wait to see if Carly can break Jack or not.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: February 24 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: We All Scream for Ice Cream

Ahhhhh broken! So, did she hear that or will she swallow him down and bring him back up? I think she heard and will spit him out. I also think Aphrodite is the passsword? Perhaps? Excellent excellent story. Carly hasn't won yet though, Sophie is still lurking about, dang it. Or maybe Sophie will rescue Jack only to hear him tell her he wants to be with Carly. You can usually guess how these stories will go but you've done an excellent job of keeping the reader guessing. Kudos! 



Author's Response:

i'm glad to know the ending hasn't been projected in neon letters by these preceding chapters. hope you enjoy what's to come

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: February 26 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Don't waste time responding to Parrot, Jack, he's clearly the one who needs to grow up. You just keep rocking these stories like you have been! There's nothing wrong with asking for reviews, it's the authors who threaten to scrap a story if they don't get enough reviews. It's basically saying that the people who have given reviews don't count, piss on them. 

Some of us appreciate the time an effort put into writing a story, a story that is provided for free and that the reviews are the only type of compensation given. 

Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: February 06 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Really enjoy your stories, the whole Carly series is great. I love all the harsh treatment and hope you don't get swayed by all these reviews begging for gentle, stay the course, if gentle is where you intend to take the story then that's fine. Just remember, there are plenty of fans who love the mean Giantess personality! I'm actually torn, I'd love to see him go back to Carly but the idea of being in Chloes possession and going through all that again as she grows up is just so devilish. Plus, I think Jacks life is in greater jeopardy in Choles hands. Great stuff!



Author's Response:

glad you enjoy it. i try to cover a lot of bases so more readers will like the story, but in the end i most thoroughly enjoy non-violent humiliation scenarios, so naturally that's mostly what shows up in these stories. so, the harsh stuff will definitely stay, although there's a bit more gentle to come before the story ends. thanks for the review

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: February 27 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever

Fantastic! Took 5 long years to break him but she finally did it. Carly is one of my favorite characters ever. Sophie better not screw this up! I think Carly is too smart and will be ready for Sophie, plus now Jack wants to stay with Carly, so that adds an interesting twist to any attempted rescue. Going to be very sorry to see this one end.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: March 29 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Not the ending I was hoping for but an epic story none the less. I personally think you should have ended it after Carely finally broke Jack, it just seemed the more natural destination as that is what the 5 years were focused on. The ending that you scripted was just a little too hollywood, hero comes bursting through the door and saves the day. But, like said, still an epic story and excellently crafted. You are a very good writer. 



Author's Response:

a perfectly acceptable critique. i knew i wasn't going to be able to please everyone with the ending i chose. if you really do prefer Jack being totally broken by Carly though, you can just pretend that the story ended with Chapter 29. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: February 08 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

I like that you can tell the differences in personality between Chloe and Carly. And even know you'd never have Chloe kill Jack, I like that it has to be a real concern for him because she could simply get too carried away during one of her games or lash out in a fit of anger.  

And also agree with another persons mentioning of the Freshman. Would love to see that picked up, if even for one final chapter, since you have said you are having difficulty finding inspiration, maybe just finish it off with a most unfortunate ending for Peter, it certainly didn't look good for him the way the last chapter ended. Just a thought.

 



Author's Response:

it's not that i've lost inspiration, i just enjoy being on the site less than i once did. i have a story arc planned in my head, and i do plan on actually writing it sometime, it just will be a bit longer before that happens. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: February 10 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Ahhh, back where he belongs. Maybe this will teach Carly not to be so careless with her things. The situation is getting risky for Carly, too many people finding out about Jack and she isn't even aware Sophie knows yet. I don't think a verbal warning to Chloe is sufficient, I see another tiny pet for her in the future, that will keep her quiet. Then Carly and Chloe can even have play dates with their toys! Going to be interesting to see how you tie this up.

 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: March 03 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

Doesn't anyone lock doors anymore? I knew Sophie was going to fuck this up. I hope Jack convinces Sophie he wants things to be put back the way they were. If it's even possible to regrow Carly. Can't say Im really happy with this turn of events, been following this series from the beginning and finally Carly and Jack are happy together and didn't even last 5 seconds. 

 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: March 31 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue: Six Months Later

Brilliant story Jack. What happened to Carly though? Not like she can be sent off to prison. Maybe the nut house? Actually, that might not be a bad story idea! Think about how much trouble shed be in, stuck with a bunch of other looneys! However, I like Carly too much to witness her going through that torture, she might be my favorite character ever, damn I wanted her to win! lol. You definitely surprised me with this ending, your stories consists of mischievous cruel giantesses, I wasn't expecting a gentle ending. Definitely a testament to your writing abilities to make me give a damn about how it all played out. So many of these stories are read just for the juicy parts but you made people actually interested in the story itself. Well done.

 



Author's Response:

thank you; i couldn't ask for higher praise than to hear that you actually cared about the outcome of what is, in essence, a fetishistic porn story. really, i think it's just a lot of fun, and i'm glad you enjoyed it. you will probably hear about carly's ultimate fate in the spin-off story

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: February 14 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

Ugh, while magnificently written, I m so disappointed Jack has gotten the upper hand. I do so love when the Giantess wins. Here's hoping she puts Jack back in his place.

 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: February 16 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

I admit it, I have no idea how this is going to turn out, this is one heck of a story! 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: February 19 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Jenny

Even with her world about to crumble all around her, Carly is still the master manipulator. Glad to see Carly still has a few tricks up he sleeve. She's one of my all time fav characters. 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: February 19 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: No Ifs, Ands, or Butts

Not an into the "butt" genre huh? Could have fooled me. Great stuff! As much as I want to believe that Carly is on the road to victory, I haven't forgotten about Sophie, that worries me a little bit. Riveting story!



Author's Response:

don't worry, Sophie will be making another appearance before things draw to a close

Summary:

An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life.  When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Couples, Giant, Legwear, Odor, Unaware, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 82 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 179462 Read Count: 879377
[Report This] Published: September 01 2011 Updated: May 26 2019
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 13 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Popped Question

I'm sure I am in the minority but hope things get a little rough for our vertically challenged freind. I think the biggest threat to Peter is not Sharon but the girl who dunked him into the water way back when this story started, she seemed genuinely dangerous, not quite right in the head. She's also probably the one who stuck him in the tuba. 



Author's Response:

There's still plenty more to come of this story, so odds are things will get rougher eventually. You're right to think Mandy is still a threat.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Double Dare

*sigh* someone is always rescuing Peter, lol. My favorite 2 chapters so far. Now if we could only get Peter into the hands of Mandy and Stella by themselves, phew, that would be a party! Probably not a very fun party for Peter though.



Author's Response:

Yikes, both Mandy and Stella? Seems vindictive. Thanks for reading.

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Date: August 25 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Yes! Mandy! Been waiting for her. Don't know what shes going to do though, Lisa is like the Terminator the way shes protecting Peter. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned!



Author's Response:

Mandy won't be doing anything to Peter as long as Lisa is around, but that doesn't mean she can't still stir up some trouble.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Sweating It

Wow, don't know who that was but wondering if they were aware that coud have killed Peter if he wasnt discovered.Must have been the same person who deposited him in the Tuba? Think that was the instrument? I don't think it was Mandy either, I think shed be much more likely to stuff him in her pocket and take him home.

You've crafted a very realistic tale here, Im usually detached from the tiny and fine if they meet their demise but I'd actually feel bad for this kid if that happened to him.

 

Of course, I still love the rough treatment, hope there is plenty more of that ;)



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you care about what happens to Peter. There will definitely be more rough play to come - Peter's barely a few weeks into school.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Shadow School

Great dream sequence, one can only hope that dreams come true!



Author's Response:

we'll have to wait and see, won't we?