well..

I am so fascinated by your story that I finally registered after several years of neglecting to do so

I look forward to finding more about this implied "new world order"

I am particularly drawn to the husband whose fate is both horrific yet also  intensely enviable and erotic--at least to me

you have said you will return to him later in the story---I look forward to that--I imagine that he serves some additional purpose for Holly beyond simply suffering for his sins

I have always been put off by people suggesting too readily changes and additions to satisfy their own needs---and I love that philosophy and thoughtfulness that fleshes out the story---I only hope that you avoid the trap of too many good sophisticated writers in evolving the story too far from the fetish and making it too complicated and intellectual---we should never forget or apologize for our fetish that drives these creations

If at the end of your story---and if the husbands story has many loose ends--I would like to write perhaps a back story on just him---with your permission of course

since I have now finally registered I will probably put some of my old works up eventually---maybe even complete the ones that are unfinished

thanks for the fine story

welcome back

playful or abusive?

Uhhh...   both