Penname: MadWhitePaper [Contact] Real name: Bobby Soppsteiner
Member Since: February 27 2013
Membership status: Member
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"Will you chose to look deeper and see how far the rabbit hole goes ,or will you return to your safe bland world and continue to merlely excist? The unpaven road is rougher but the paved road can lull you into a sense of sleepieness and drive you off the road....Decide!"


 


"Of course you don't know. You don't know because only I know. If you knew and I didn't know, then you'd be teaching me instead of me teaching you - and for a student to be teaching his teacher is presumptuous and rude. Do I make myself clear?" - Mr. Turkentine (David Battley)
- What makes this quote interesting is that it is given by a character that had little to no involvement in the actual plot of the film. However, it is exactly the type of whimsy that this film was famous for, drawing your attention in many multiple directions to make the story seem bigger than it really was."


"There is no life I know to compare with pure imagination." - Willy Wonka (Gene Wilder)
- Wilder's role in the film was that of pure genius, perhaps even trumping that of his performance in Young Frankenstein. While singing this line and watching the children revel in the wonders of his edible candy room, Wonka passes on a bit of wisdom, reminding us all that we don't have to accept only the things in life that are placed before our eyes. Instead, we should dare to dream and make our dreams come true.


*We are the music makers... and we are the dreamers of dreams." - Willy Wonka (Gene Wilder)
- Another great deliver by Wilder, as he calmly reminds Veruca of the same lesson he attempted to teach her with the quote above. With his calm tone of voice, Wonka reminds us that the other personality shifts he undertakes are simply part of the ruse he is trying to pass off.


"The suspense is terrible... I hope it'll last." - Willy Wonka (Gene Wilder)
- At the point this line is delivered, it is the first hint that Wonka is teetering on the brink of madness, and that he enjoys every minute of it. However, you need to remember that his ultimate goal was to find an heir for his factory, and there had to be a certain amount of glee with having eliminated one unworthy candidate so early.-Gene Wilder Willy Wonka


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Reviews by MadWhitePaper
Summary:

This is a story i've had saved for a while and decided it's time to debut it.Im a shameless comic book fan so this story kind of reflects that world.

Seductress is the prime vilian in Eagle City and is always trying to find a way to take it over.She is always defeated by Starry ,the town superhero and protecter. Seductress finds a way to bring Starry to her knees and achieve her goal of domination.....Bwahaha


Categories: Butt, Entrapment, Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1351 Read Count: 5419
[Report This] Published: February 26 2013 Updated: February 26 2013
Reviewer: MadWhitePaper Signed
Date: February 27 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The action felt a little forced and pointless,I like the premise but the wording seems rushed. It's not a bad story it just needs a better pace and plot to it.



Author's Response:

Im an admitted impatient writer,and thus my pacing is subpar.I hope that it will continue to improve with each passing chapter that I write.We learn more from our mistakes  more than our failures i've learned.Thanks for the input(I appreciate any and all of it good or bad)

Summary:

After hastily wishing to be intimate with a girl, a boy is put through the ride of his life.


Categories: Watersports, Giantess, Giant, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3875 Read Count: 305384
[Report This] Published: February 27 2013 Updated: March 03 2013
Reviewer: MadWhitePaper Signed
Date: February 27 2013 Title: Chapter 1: A Simple Wish

How small is he and can she feel him at all?I like unaware stories but don't really like the inclusion of male giants. I like the angle you're trying for but would only suggest that you maintain the focus on the antagonist and his struggles.I also like aspects of stories where a small man is forced to stay on a large females body and live off her.

Keep up the focus on this story and it could evolve into something great...........



Author's Response:

i was going to go into some male giant stuff followed by hre unknowingly eating the protagonist, but im not sure yet. I have been thinking about this story for a while, so I think I will wirte the whole thing out and see what I can do from there! thank you!